With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141 - Page 10

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Awesome update

Maan confessed his feelings for geet in panic state

Complains? Short chapter? I have a completely different take on this chapter. This was probably one of the most filling chapter in the story so far. Regardless of what the length was, I can never complain because it was so rich in content.

Originally posted by: mayyo

Complains? Short chapter? I have a completely different take on this chapter. This was probably one of the most filling chapter in the story so far. Regardless of what the length was, I can never complain because it was so rich in content.

Through the whole chapter, there was a new side to Maan's character and I'm so glad Raj witnessed all of it. He saw what his son was from inside the cover of the business tycoon slash jolly guy. On the inside, he was just a small boy who loved and who was afraid of losing someone be loved so dearly. His conversation with Raj about not wanting to love was so touching. This was probably the first time Raj really knew his son's thought processes.

It's a relief, though, that Raj was there and now he knows everything. I'm sure he'll act as a catalyst now between these two, although now it feels like they won't need a catalyst. Maan's silent vows made my heart jump in joy. That's what I wanted. He must love her enough that she falls in love with him. She already has fallen partly, it's apparent.😃

I can see happy days coming in this side of the story.😃

Thank you so much for giving such a good chapter to read. Really enjoyed it.

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Congratulations on the new thread! Hoping to see many more of this story.😃

thank you
i was hoping for that feeling
Raj is more hands off than Kiran
he trusts his son but will guide him if needed
twist baaki hai
😲

Nice update.. Seeing geet fainting maan just got so worried.. Raj takes them to hospital but maan cant stop pleading geet to open her eyes.. His true feelings was bared to raj n he now knows that there is something in his past stopping him to confess to geet but this accident has really shaken him up n open his eyes.. And he is reading for confessing to geet.. Really excited to see lovey dovey n super caring maan in next updates and what would be geet reaction to his proposal and finding out tgat the firl he loves is actually.. Although she also has feelings for him but hesitates due to their diffrence status.. Eagerly waiting to read more.. Specially about poonam.. So plzz plzz plzzUpdate soon.. Thanks for pm..

TEASER


The car rounded the curve into Khurana Mansion.

Raj got out asking Maan to bring Geet to the front door slowly.

Geet tried to move out of the car but found herself hoisted in Maan's arms.

"Maan", she whispered loud enough for him but not for Raj, " .. sab dekhege. Put me down".

He held her closer to him, crushing her form with his, threatening her, "Chupp Geet, bilkul chupp".

"Maan", she warned again, " .. ye kya kar rahe ho. Niche utaro".

He brought her closer still so that she could hear the loud pounding of his heart in her ears.

"Itna paas theek hai Geet, ya aur paas lau", he asked with a mock smile, enjoying her uneasiness.

"Tum na! Ek number ke gadhe ho, duffer ho, ullu ho. Ek toh mera sar ghoom raha hai upar se mujhe aur pareshan kar rahe ho", she said knocking her fists on his steely arm.

"Good! Now we are even. Tum bhi mujhe kam pareshan nahi karti ho biwi", he said.

"Ugh! Phir se biwi!! Bas ab besura gaana baaki hai, mera torture complete karne mein", she moaned.


He grinned so broadly that she felt a smile come on for a second and then he sang,
"Hum Tum,
ek kamre mein bandh ho
aur chaabhi kho jaaye"

A/N: So teased yet?

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