With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Chota hai but blaster hai ;p
Loved it and twist to dil khush kar gaya
Wah Kya chapter hai maza hi aa Gaya truly happy

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Cute update maan was shocked and shattered to see geet in this state he was very much broken and his dad felt bad seeing him like this maan was ever so cutely begging geet not to leave him Raj could see the depth of his love for geet but maan refused to let geet know coz he thought love as a weakness but Raj was determined to make his son realize the power of love but seems now seeing geet in this state he will tell her everything he won't let her go and he will make geet fall in love with silly boy he doesn't know geet is already in love with him

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nish285

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

hhheeeyyy aviii...pehli baar aapke twist ne dil khush kar diya yaar...😊...aap na aise twist baar baar diya karo...😉😉.

.it took only one incident for him to break his vow...and he was thinking to stay away from her all life long......

and moving on to the update...i am a little confused here...😲...first maan confesdes dat he cannot live without geet before his dad...and den he somewhat does not confirm the same when his dad asks him ...and rather says dat he failed as a friend inspite of promising dat he would take care of her...i thought he wanted to stay from love because it would make him selfish and he would nt want to put his parents after him...and now he says he is not good enough for geet because she is so selfless and she left everything and came for dadima...

((****i know dis is a very emoyionally taxing situation for him right now...and he does nt realize dat he did d same for geet and dadima wen darji was sick..***))...

And den wen he sees geet...his resolve breaks again...(like always...😆...)) and he promises to let her know about his feelings...and to never let her go...

I am confused ya...has he decided to be a true friend to her from now on...or he would persue her with his love for her and not try to run away from her...?...

But anyways i ll conclude dat...he was very very scared and tensed to see her like dat...he was emotionally quite messed up with his guilt (of she being in d condition she is right now)...his restlessness and anxiety of seeing his love so lifeless...and den his frustration of not being able to express his feeling for her...and den it just took one sight of geet like dat to make him decide dat he would nt let her go now...

But all in all...the happy note to end the update is dat v can be expecting some efforts from maan s side to swoon his lady love off her feet...and geet ...now dat she has realized her feelings for maan...may be she ll see maan and his actions in a different light ...

and i was actually expecting chandan and poonam s story as well on dis update...but its ok...i am very happy and thankful that you gave an update in spite of ur tight shedule...at least getting frequent short perks is better than waiting for long...

and happy belated raksha bandhan...😃

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angeldream14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Maan is such a scared cat

he wants to send every moment with her but doesn't want to admit he loves her

her slight pain makes him go bonkers but still he will zip his lips

Raj need to hit his sons head to shake it up a bit

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maansi25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Ch 30
Chhota packet bada dhamaka
Dil khush kar dita
Maan ne ikraar bhi kiya
Aur
Inkaar bhi
Par maan bete tum apne asli baap sorry sorry papa se baat kar rahe ho
Jo ke ees school ke principal reh chuke hsi
Pyar kya hota hai samazte hai
Dosti ki hai nibhani to padegi hi
To
Aaag he lagi hui
Eedhar bhi uudhar bhi
Sirf hawa ke jhonke ki kami hai
Rajkiran hai na
Now patiji on paper sambhalenge
Patniji on paper ko
Fabulous update
Please update soon
Can't wait to read more
Waiting

😛 😛

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

thanks 4 da pm n brilliant emotional update! superbly written! Maan worried abt Geet! Raj sees a different Maan! Maan rushes Geet to the hospital! Maan concedes 2 Raj that he cannot live without Geet! Maan tells his dad he is not made 4 love! Maan's words make Raj realise Maan is hiding something! Maan says he n Geet r just friends! Raj is a wonderful dad! he will make Maan realise that love is a gift from God! Geet awakens n Maan relieved! Maan apologises n she assures him! update soon 👏😊

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Mindblowing update...
Maan concerns nature is beautifully described by u dear...
and confessed his feeling in front of his dad but gave d new to his relationship a friendship...
but looking forward to know how his dad gonna make him realized...
and finally Maan confessed himself he will make her fall for him...
plzzz someone tell him she is already in love with him...
Excited for next part...
continue soon...

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miss_mystery

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

It is phenomenal Chapter Avi
Truly loved it
Ummm... Chapter looks good when Writer gives it life with her writer and today I can assure you everyone fall in love with you after reading this chapter
Staring from First Maan worries and his unknown love for him was commendable.
Raj consolation like a true dad was great
Maan seems so restless when Nurse was not attending him and the way he says he is Maan Singh Khurana and his Daadi Ma is trustee of this Hospital
Raj asked about what name he is giving still he says He is friend and he doesn't deserve her... Great... good going Maan...I am.with you
Actually I thought Teji also pray active role here as a catalyst but He is passive I think...not to worry I love every bit of this update
And this is fantastic when Maan says It's complicated Dad Aap nahi samjhoge... It's remind me two things First Main Rahu Na Rahu Song where The little kid says to Imran Hashmi and seems like he says same dialogue which small kid says to their parents
And Raj saying to Maan Bachhu he is your father...he will look after you very well
And lastly when Maan confession to Geet not actually confession but the way he shows care was lovely...
Ab main tumhe meri zindagi se juddi har baat keh duga Geet, kuch nahi chuppauga.

Itna pyar karuga, itna pyar ki tum mujhe pyar karne ke liye majboor ho jaogi.

Ab zindagi ki har subah tumse hogi Geet aur har shaam tum pe khatam.

Ye mera waada hai tumse Geet.

I don't understand these line, does he confessed to himself and gives chance to her.
Now it's going more interesting
Will wait for next part already
Take Care
Lots of Love Avi
Good Night

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

link in pm was not working but I got link from side index...

Geet has concussion but thank God it is not so serious...

aww Maan Singh Khurana is so scared for his wife on papers...he blurted everything in front of Raj and now Raj is determind to get truth out from Maan and make him realize that he should not be afraid of love...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...