With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141

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indiegirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Ch 30:
Very nice update, doesn't matter that it is small but very effective as it shows Maan the mirror to his heart... his love for his Geet is portrayed so well and also his admittance that he cannot live without her is greet, his dad has understood his undying love for Geet, even though he does not except it in front of him, but his dad saw his restlessness and anxiety and has realized his love for Geet.. as soon as Geet was out of the concussion he ran to her and could not stop loving her, his worry and fear said it all in his actions...,
Thnx...,

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dqno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

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hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Awesome update

Maan fearing to lost geet

Raj seeing him impatient

Worries for geet

Twist I love it

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nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Shocking part. Geet got unconscious and maan was panicked seeing geet like this. He was pleading geet to open her eyes. He was totally broken seeing her like this. Raj was watching all this and finally he knows how much his son loves geet. But hearing maan's words for himself, he promised himself that he will make him realize that he also deserves to be loved. Finally geet got her conscious back. She also got peace in maan's arms. Waiting for next dear

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amrinderdhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

it was a dhamaka update aah the maan khurana finally promised himself to open his heart for love..loved the dad n son talk..raj knows his son all too well loved it..maan became soo frantic seeing geet fainted..loved his care for geet
superb one too gud

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bgr_80

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Awesome update. Maan still don't want to accept his love for geet. Maan's father determined to know the reason behind his behaviour. Waiting for the next chapter. Continue soon.

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SONU_29

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Nice part.

Geet has concussion but it is not so serious.

Maan is sooo much worried for his wife.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon

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crazyfriends007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Loved the update to the core
The way maan trying to make himself guilty free when geet s unconscious
Like he was he will not irritates her by singing, teasing, texting... Aww maan knows what he is doing to geet
Raj was listening to maan
Maan has taken hospital on head since they did not attend geet immediately
Loved Raj the was he was consoling maan
Aww maaneet moments were lovely the way maan saying sorry to geet
Geet make maan that she s fine
Did maan break his rule not love anymore wala
Just loved every bit of the story

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priyankadwivedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Lovely update... Maan was so hysteric seeing her condition... He blurted out the half truth too... In this storu i love maan parents role so much... They are supportive n caring n knew how to tackle their kids.. their way of supporting maan geet os awesome...will they take her to km again.. now maan will be on full form with gett.. his decision to tell heris nice...