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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
yes it is indeed a sad news dii 😔
But i know aap phir se update type kar loge

DO I have any other option other than typing it again?

Will you all let me live in peace without an update? 😆😆

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

DO I have any other option other than typing it again?
Will you all let me live in peace without an update?😆😆

hahaha wo toh hai
But will wait 😊

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#303

sory dii for tis delay pls forgive me..

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Part 67

Wow lovely beautiful update..te way my maaneet's wedding preparation was in full s wing and all guests started to Cum and mohit and family was lovely entry..te way geet ki restless thinking abt my maan's face and my maan clearing her doubt wat ever may but still some bitter memories are still haunting my maan and will soon he will over cum it..mohit was cute making my maan j, omg my maan's cute j face..i love te update dii

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Part 68

Wow lovely blissed beautiful update..really I felt like seeing heaven in earth thru my maaneet and they divine love,omg dii thanku so much for giving tis feel..te way my maaneet ki mehendi colour but my maaneet love is way beyond of all tis rituals..te way my maaneet ki haldi was superb,yes wen everyone can apply why not his geet after all its hers and her angel's wedding heina..te way my maaneet ki wedding was lovely superb beautiful heaven, no words like always..how many times I see their wedding in gete serial and how many times I have read in so many ffs but still it give me a blissful expression and feel goosebumps tat is te magical of our maaneet and their love..te way priya and ram ki tears but they have to do rituals for both their kids..why my maan is restless how ever u try to hide but u r mittu know u In and out maan babu,te way geet ki restless seeing my maan's worry but wen he assured all her doubts cleared was lovely..now my maaneet became one was lovely..i love te update so much dii

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#306

Part 69

Wow lovely superb update ..te way geet ki new life as gmsk and her shyness was lovely cute..maan babu tis is u hesitation somehow I guessed abt u r turmoil,u r buddhu maan..but my maan's words was right he have been seen her small baby who holds his finger but now he have accept his love but still thinking she is his baby mittu,but don't worry maan babu soon she will give a small mittu he he..saumay was lovely cs and sister to my maan..yes she is correct abt my maaneet,my maan cant hold himself for so long and more than tat his geet wont let him..my maan ki entry and kiss omg mummy its just a dream,geet in u r dream itself u thinking all these but my maan thinking u r still baby omg,maan babu learn some thing from u r geet..omg my maan standing holding te door, Im wondering who is man and woman here?..my maan drinking water to wet his dryness maan babu u have sweet in front of u but drinking water,very bad..omg only geet can do like tis to my maan giving shock in his sr and made him to chock but u need it maan wen u have rasagula u having water heina..te way geet saying abt veil and my maan was sighed thinking abt her words..te way geet ki normal self but my maan was fighting within himself buddhu sk,nothing can be done with him..hmm but no sr I feeling sad sad mummy..i love te update so much dii

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#307

Teaser

Lo..Think of the devil and devil is here ..Mohit said looking in to the direction of the kitchen from where Geet with priya and dadi was coming.. Nakul and one more servant were following them with the trolley of the bf.. He set the food on the dining table.. and dadi asked Geet to serve the kheer to all.. Geet served the kheer in bowls and handed the bowl to everyone..

Let someone else eat first..I will have after that..Mohit was really scared

Why?Geet asked..

and she understood..Arrey don't worry Mohit ..I haven't cooked it fully I just added sugar and dry fruits to it. everything is done by Nakul and then kept stirring it

What You added sugar? And kept stirring it..Then what else is left to cook the kheer.?.That means saari kheer tumne hi banaayi hai..

and he looked at all who were smiling to see Mohit who was reacting as if Geet had actually added salt instead of sugar..

Pakka sugar hi dali hai na..kahin Galati se namak?.. Mohit asked in a low voice leaving his sentence in middle and Geet's mouth opened wide..

Mohit ..She almost shouted with horror hearing him and then looked at Maan who was looking at her only..

Dadi.mamma,, you both were with me and you saw that i added sugar only. Geet looked at the both sources of her support ,,

Before priya could say anything dadi spoke

Umm Geet ..sorry beta,,I don't know what you added..i was not watching you that time..Dadi joined Mohit to tease her..

Dadi..Not you now..Geet was so disappointed and looked at Maan

I m very sure Angel. and I swear too..I added sugar only..

He knew that Mohit was teasing her.. He took a deep breath..He could never see her sad face

He got up from his place.. and came near her..She was holding a bowl filled with kheer and was looking in to it with low eyes She was going to keep it aside but he held her hand ..She looked at her and he gave her an assuring smile ..He filled a spoon with the kheer and put in his mouth..

Everyone was looking at him and they knew that he could do anything for making her smile..Geet was looking at him with hopeful eyes..

And her eyes became bigger when he made a face as soon as the kheer touched his taste buds

PS:-I m trying my best to recreate the same essence which I had put in my update which was lost unfortunately.. I will be back with a long update to compensate the delay in updating😃😃

Edited by gorgeousqueen. - 8 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#308