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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hello, thanks 4 da pm! magnificent update! superbly written! Sam in her drunken state confesses 2 Maan n tries 2 kiss him! Maan doesn't take her seriously! Maan shld know the the truth always comes out when a person is drunk! Maan sneaks into Geet's room! fab moments! Maan wants 2 sleep next to her but Geet places some condition! Maaneet awaken in each other's arms! Geet emotional n Maan happy! sizzling passionate morning romance! Maan cannot control n Geet no less! Uff but Maaneet interupted! Geet teases Maan! Maan talks 2 Sam n Dev sees them! Dev assumes Maan likes Sam!😡 Dev indeed has an overactive imagination! he sees the love bites on Maan n thinks it was Sam! oh no now another mu! Geet sees Maan close 2 Sam! she is upset! best part - Geet's feels like home n Maan's arms! update soon

hmm well, one thing is prominent and common in between all comments regarding Maan.
When he was intoxicated and mistakenly confessed to Sam she thought he is confessing to her and here Sam doing the same but Maan didn't believe as he knows her past and he never encountered the idea that Sam might like him , moreover he doesn't really wastes his time thinking about other women rather than all his attention has always been for Geet and her only.

when he was drunk all wanted sam to understand that he mistook her for somebody else and then here maan is doing the same as he thought she mistook him as someone else but all the readers have complain to that? 😉

Dev- hahaha. He was a bit far and he saw Sam is snuggling inside Maan then when he went close he noticed the love bites along with sam blushing plus Maan was nervous so can we blame DEV? 😃

Thanks a lot darling for your super awesome replies and in depth analysis! 👏❤️

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Freaking awesome update.
Super cool.
Again I just love the way of ur writing. U describe suxh that da scenes i can imagine in my head. Beautiful maaneet moment. Passionate. Maan loves geet so much. Having a husband like him is lucky. Bt so many things are gradually happening around them. Dev saw sam is hugging maan and so wen he saw da lovebites he thought sam gave dos?
Annie saw maan with geet and dev saw Maan with sam. Dadi saw maan with geet.
Nd dat delusional sam y is she hugging maan nd clinging to him like dat?
U ended at such a point.. plz update soon. Can't wait to see geets reaction
Love u for writing such a fab story nd updating regularly. 👏

THANKS for the PM

hayyee, dill garden garden ho gaya... Best compliment is when someone praises ur writing. I feel really humbled by your awesome comments and so much support!

Dev- yeah he thought sam caused those love bites lol and sam's blush made that more firm.

Yes shall update once the target is acquired, am really sorry to keep u waiting like this...

Thanks a lot for your comment.😳

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#973

50 likes till now. Thanks for reply

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#974

@chapter 24

Interesting update dear

Loved it!!

Sameera confessed her endurance for Maan but he thought she is not in right state of mind.

Maaneet passion for each other was increasing with time filled with love and warmth. love is insanity !!

It takes over rational and lucid mind by delusion and self destruction, that you can't think straight.

Sameera being victim of circumstances added new feather to maan's love for her. Wasn't Sameera enough that now dev also victimized by circumstances and time . He mistook maan and Sameera's closeness and cherry on top geet's passionate marks on Maan vow seed of doubts on dev's mind and Sameera as usual was living her happiness in her chimera world.

The immature mind often makes mistakes one for the other but Sameera seems to live it and now dev vowing to NT's love for him.its better to grab the reality than to persist in delusion!! Geet too witnessed maan and Sameera 's closeness.

Precap is interesting !!

Looking forward to the update

Thanks for the pm dear

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APARNA

@ARJUNKIAPS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#975

Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS
passionate update
it was freaking hot
i hate sameera even though she is victim of circumstances,maan should have handled sam with utmost careful manner
badluck dev found maan-sam in compromising position,geet too saw them
precap is imteresting
waiting eagerly for next part
thanks for the pm

i have already commented ipti do reply to my comment too😃

Edited by ARJUNKIAPS - 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS
i have already commented ipti do reply to my comment too😃

yes dear, coming sequentially! 😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS
passionate update
it was freaking hot
i hate sameera even though she is victim of circumstances,maan should have handled sam with utmost careful manner
badluck dev found maan-sam in compromising position,geet too saw them
precap is imteresting
waiting eagerly for next part
thanks for the pm

omg already hating sam? aha! possessive maaneetian! 😉😆
i am happy that at least even from the middle but you are following the story!😳

how would Maan handle sam with utmost care if he doesn't even have any idea about her one sided delusional love?

Thanks for your lovely feedback sweety! 😊