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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

thanks 4 da pm! magnificent update! superbly written! Madhu sceptical Maaneet! she thinks Maan likes Sameera! bt dadi assure her! however dadi worried abt Maaeet! meanwhile Maaneet in Geet's room! sizzling hot moments! Maan cannot get enough of Geet! she doesn't regret. Maan cannot stay away from her! update asap

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Iptida
Thanks for all the comments, i will reply all of you one by one.
I will try to update today within 10 hours from now on!

already waiting😊

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Fantastic Part

Madhu and Daadima discussing Maan and Geet and Daadi does not want to tell Madhu that there might be some indifference between Maan and Geet as already Madhu is very worried about them

as she believes that perhaps Maan is now interested in Sameera and not Geet and its a problem as how will they deal with the Handas then

did Madhu see Maan with Sameera on Holi Day is that the reason she thinks Maan may like Sameera

Maan and Geet sorted out their misunderstandings and now romancing though Geet is shy but she can feel her Maan loves her deeply

waiting to see how both will react at the breakfast table and will Daadi finally realize they have mend their indifference

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Iptida
Thanks for all the comments, i will reply all of you one by one.
I will try to update today within 10 hours from now on!

heehehehehehehe relax dear update regularly but also take acre of ur health we dont want u to get sick and disappear as so many writers who dont update or forget to update often forget their own story wase u update tomorrow also to bhi chalega but be regular

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Beautiful update dear 😊
Being a mom madhu is worried she just want her son to be happy. Once she is sure about geet's feeling for maan she would be the most happiest person.
Haye ye toh apne pota pothi ke sapne bhi dekhne lagi 😆
Dadi vakai me jasoos hai , maaneet ko toh ab asani se pakad legi 😆
Aww maaneet are still lost in their world of passion 😳
Happy now everything is sorted between them 😃

Edited by Khushibloom - 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Updating within 1 or 2 hour!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: nakh5683

heehehehehehehe relax dear update regularly but also take acre of ur health we dont want u to get sick and disappear as so many writers who dont update or forget to update often forget their own story wase u update tomorrow also to bhi chalega but be regular

thanks sweety, i am trying to be regular, The problem is i had typed too much at once when I was free a few days back so now I feel a little lazy since my schedule has became hectic, I will not forget the story that am sure about! 😳
oh and btw by 10 hours i meant ki jaab maine wo msg post kiya taab se leke 10 ghantey ki aandar update karne ki try karungi, that was only for today 😊

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Updating within 1 or 2 hour! [/QUOTE

will wait 😊

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha
Wow... Wonderful update dear...
Mein mushy mushy feel ho rahi hoon... Lol..
Daadi is a real vala jaasoos... Oops mujhe laga ki vo romance dheki hogi.. Silly me... Lolllzzz...
Ufff yeh madhu ko kyu lagtha hain ki maan sam ko pasand kartha hain... Yeh madhu bhi na...
Omggg their romance lasted till mrng... Madhu disturbed romance of new love birds ...
Bach gayi iss part mein kabab mein haddi wala sam nahin hain...
Next part mein bhi no sam and want only maaneet. ...
Ab maan bhi maan gaya... Geet is feeling shy lol... Ek pal mein sherni rahegi and aur ek pal mein shy wali banjayegi...
Happy that they sorted out their misunderstandings.. .
I have been waiting for this one forr loonggg timmee...
Ab double dhamaka dedho na ... Next update ke liye waiting...Omg precap... Lol yeh maan tho car mein hi shuru hogaya. ... Lolxz... Ab next one bhi jaldi dedho...

Awww, thank you so much dear! Maan toh haar jagah shuru ho jata hain!😆
Tum please episodes dekhlo.
Double dhamaka jaldi hi milegi, thoda toh time dedo me ko! Me ko time hi ni mill paa rahi hain. Bohot time lagta hain yaar typing mein lol. 😆
But to have your wonderful comments i will do that! Waise aur koi daily update deta hain?

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: mayapari
Nice update
Awww
They patched up
Hopefully a marriage ahead
With cutey moments

their marriage is not going to happen so soon. you need to wait for that unless i change my plot for some reason.
Thank you sooo much for your beautiful comment dear 😊