DARK TEMPTATION 3 # 2 Updated EPILOGUE on 29-7-2017/ PG 39

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Lovely update maan and geet ran dadi wanted her grandson at any cost geet did try to make maan understand she made him see reality raheja men caught maaneet torture them samarth took maan away dadi had paid raheja men and had him killed and now geet was free but maan refused to let her go he didn't want to go away so he promised to look after her and their baby seems dadi did the provoking so maan finally takes responsibility and geet support him maan has fallen in love with geet and will support and love their baby aswell

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amazonforest

@amazonforest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

super update baby . that evil raheja caught maaneet but samarth & maan's dadima rescued them from his clutch & killed that evil through his own men . dadima was impressed by geet cos she changed maan but they are not ready to take geet with them & maan wants geet in his life . he told geet to trust him once & she showed her trust . maaneet went away from there to their old place & there maan opened up his heart . he wants to live with geet & baby . they are happy now .

ek epi de de baby 😉

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deepa111

@deepa111

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

nice ending ...

maan hoowever be chilidish or irresponsible bt he is ready to change himself into a responsible person..

even after getting lots of taunts on his carelessness n behaviour from dad n dadima ,he still stnd up to prove himself ..

i like that geet give him a chance n showed her trust on him ...

its quite an interesting story ..

is there be any epilogue?

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

Great part. Raheja was torturing maneet after catching the. But anyhow samarnath saved Maan and geet is saved by savitri devi. She was impressed with geet for changing Maan but she was not ready to accept her as he daughter In law. Maan accepted dadi's challenges for taking get and his baby's responsibility by his own. Maan took geet back to the place where they hired in the past. He promised geet that he will look after of them.

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zariya1234

@zariya1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

I really liked the ending
maan accepted both baby and geet
but will ge able to prove his words for that I think we have to wait for epilogue.
really liked maan 's way of conveying his feeling

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Nice update dear Mann and Geet are caught by Raheja samrat came and rescued both Mann left his house to be with Geet and take care of them

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

Wow that was a surprising twist

Both Samrath and his mother was behind the death of Rajeha well he deserved it

the amazing thing is that both actually want to see if Maan will stand firm with Geet and be responsible

they know he never cares about anything but himself and here he showed he cares about Geet he cares about her words and he wants her trust and believe on him

Maan confessed though the actual words ILU was not said he said much more which meant he will always be there for both Geet and his baby

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

Grt part dear.

Really loved the ending.

Maan and Geet tried to run away but Raheja's men kidnapped them .

Raheja tortured them and tried to kill them.

But Mr khurana came but took Maan with him.Maan tried to resist his father as he don't want to leave Geet.

Raheja tried to kill Geet and ordered his men to take her to the mansion.But on the road his car met accident and he died.

Geet got saved and brought to Khurana mansion.

Geet tried to leave but Maan didn't let her and asked her to give him a chance to look after her and their baby.

All the three tried to make him understand that it will be tough for him.Byt he was adamant and Geet at last fave in.

Maaneet left both Khurana's and Raheja'sproperty and started a new life.

Nice ending.

Hoping for an epilogue

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

hey thanks 4 da pm n fab SS! LP - perfect update! superbly written! another twist! Maan's dadi wants him back! Maaneet running for their lives! Geet tries 2 make him understand again bt he is adamant! they r caught by Raheja! Maan rescued by his dad while Geet prefers 2 die! Raheja dies in an accident! Geet with the Khuranas! So Raheja's death planned by Samarth! they refuse 2 accept! his dad taunts him! Maan wants 2 prove himself! Geet ready 2 b with Maan! she trusts him! they leave with nothing! Seems ike SD n dadi want Maan 2 take responsibility! Maan assures Geet he will take care of her! he will provide 4 her n their kid! he cannot lose her! he shares his feelings! he will not mind if she loses her charm! please post epilogue! thanks