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Posted: 7 years ago
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Again nyyc different concept...bully Geet and cute Maan who turn into MSK but still love her
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Originally posted by: sillyseema

Again nyyc different concept...bully Geet and cute Maan who turn into MSK but still love her


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3 -

She looked surprised at his words.. this is first time actually he talking with her . Every time she would bother or say tease him but he never said anything ...all people are scared of him it can't be true that great Maan Singh Khurana is scared of Geet Hands or the rumour is true ...he has a crush on her ?


She was lost at him just then noticed Pritam . He was opposite side of road smoking with his friend . this only remind her . his insulting words ' no man in his sense can tolerate you that much time she looked away .

" Umm thnx for helping Maan but I need to go ..."

" ya it's getting dark come I will drop you " her mood already off so she didn't argue and went on his bike
...


Days were passing she almost forget about her break up although his words still haunting her . But Pritam now a days roaming with his new gf that too in front of her only to irritate her more .

She was about to enter her class when she bumped with someone but before she fell on her butt she saved by same person ..none other than Maan ..

she felt embarrass . It's her fault she didn't notice where she was going ..She looks around and saw many are looking oddly at them then there stand Pritam with a dirty smirk on his face ' Clumsy cow ' he muttered laughing at her .

She clenched her fist but let it go as doesn't want to create any scene ..She muttered small thank you to Maan

" don't be ..I just saved my property " he winked . Her jaw drops at his remark but before he goes she grabbed his hand .

" Do you like me ? you know I like those who brave enough to stay it on face , not create any riddle "

she doesn't know what gotten into her her mind telling her she gonna embarrass herself but her idiot mind just blown off seeing Pritam that's all . But next second she realised what she said , was prepare to run but it's too late Maan pulled her ..She fall on his chest ...too embarrass to look up ' idiot stupid Kya jarurat thi apni mooh Khulne ki ...'

" woh actually ..."

" I love you "

he confessed directly looking at her eyes ..her word die in her mouth ... He pulled her more closer .. bent down to her level and whisper only her to hear " Do you want me to more direct ? "

" huh ?" her eyes gone big seeing him eying her lips . She covered her mouth with her hands and nodded no fast ..He smirk as she run off as soon as soon as he let her go ..


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Few years later

" oye Geetu I can't believe you getting married . You know you are first one in our group who is getting married first ..looks like Mr hotshot can't wait more " Pinky nudged making Geet blush red.

But her friend is right her this is happening only because her Maan doesn't want to wait more. They are together for 4 years now . Geet wasn't planning to marry now but Maan was going impatience ..

" Baby no I want to marry this year that's all . I'm not hearing your excuses. "


" but Maan so soon I mean I want to do a job ..."

" who is stopping you ? did I ever said you can't work after marriage .."

" no but "

" no if n but " he pulled her closer " i love you ..i can't live without you now ..call me desperate mad whatever but I can't wait . I want you by my side always . I can't live with worrying that I'm out of county and you are here miles away from me ..."

" Maan ap .."

he cupped her check gave a small pick on her lips..

" I can't live with the fear of losing you Geet please marry me ..." another kisses on her eyes and nose " let's go together please don't reject .."

how can a girl reject this sweet proposal ..Geet couldn't. And this all like gone fast mode . He said this year but she totally forgot that it's already November.. so only one month left . Her boyfriend surely knows how to claim his things..Geet blushed at the memory ...

" aww I'm dreaming or in real my lady gundi is bushing .." Punky tease her more ..then suddenly become little sad

" I'm just sad that you gonna shift in London ..But no problem IMO Viber kis din ke liye bana hai . Jab bhi miss karungi one call ok "


Geet hugged her friend feeling sad . Yes going away from everyone is sad but she is happy to be marry to her love. She doesn't know how she become so lucky to. He loves her so much . She just need to say what she wants ..he never missed to fulfill it...She wanted beach wedding so now they are in Goa .. as per her wish tomorrow they going to get married here in her dream place .. She can't stop falling for this man more and more ..

" waise Geetu still I don't believe you marrying Maan I mean you said you are not serious it's just a time pass . But tell you a secret I never wanted you to break up with Maan .." Geet smiled fall mention of it . " Geet where the he'll were you ? "

" Pinky ssh ye library hai ..why are you shouting..? " Pinky sat in front of her and said sadly .." I thought I'm your best friend but no . Agar hoti toh tu mujhse inti bari baat nehi chupati "

" what did I hide ?" She asked clueless

" don't act..You and Maan are dating..whole college know it . There your best friend doesn't know anything how can you do this to me ..."

" calm down Pinky. " she scolded her best friend seeing some are watching them ..

" It's not what you think " she told her with low voice

" but "

" whole college ..."

" it's just " she doesn't know how to make her understand

" what you guys together or not ? "

" yes we are together but nothing serious .. Maan want to date me and I said yes . I mean he has a crush on me also I want to show that bloody loser Pritam that I can handle relation ..what does he think of himself huh He said ..."

" What about Maan ? does he knows why you agreed to be his Girlfriend..? " Pinky stop her knowing what will she say about her ex . But she is more concerned for Maan

Geet looked little uncomfortable " um no I just "

" you are playing with him how could you ? ..."

" Relax yaar don't be hyper in this small matter I just said yes to date him , it's not that in getting married to him ok . "

" whatever Geet it's wrong ..He loves you ..."

" grow up Pinky just because he said this in front of many people that doesn't mean he actually loves me . It's just a crush nothing else "

" and how you so sure about it ..."

" because I know ..from school days I made his life hell do you really think he will fall in love with the person who tortured him in his whole high school life .. even Pinky I'm doing favour on him . See if we date then he will soon realise that , what he feels is not love just a mere crush and he will get over it soon .. "

Geet was taking this matter very lightly but Pinky didn't like it ..." don't do this Geet ..just to show Pritam don't play with his emotion .."

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yes she was not serious about their relation that time .But as she start spending time together she doesn't even realise when she fallen deep for him . Its so long that she already forgotten about that matter ...even in these 4 years she never feels like to end their relation his love his care everything touched her so hard that she forced to fallen love with him ...

" whatever happened that time I'm just happy that you guys are still together and tomorrow oops no its already midnight . today you two are going to be tie in scared bond ..." Pinky's voice bring her back ...she face become pale

" I can't do it Pinky "

" What ? ".

" no I can't marry him ..I can't marry him like this . I have to tell him everything .."

" Geet wait ...where are you going ? "

but she is already out of room ...Without thinking anything she knocked Maan's door but no respond so she enters seeing no option ... but Maan is now where just then she hear some noise coming from wash room ..she took a long breath ' it will be better saying it without seeing his face ' because she knows she can't be able to see his pained face , just when the door about to open she almost shouted

" don't open ...I want to tell you something ..please just listen its very important.." she took a long breath ..." I.. I m sorry Maan ..I can't marry you ..." there is pin drop silent from other side so she continue

" I can't marry you without clearing my foolishness...our relation is based on lie ..I didn't want to become serious in fact I didn't want to date anyone ...that day when you proposed me to become your gf I was determined to say no but then I said yes ...not because I want to try ..but only to show Pritam my ex that someone is interest in me ...that I can get better man than him " she closed her eyes a tears fall down

" I was planning to break up within few months but couldn't do it ..in fact I almost forget about it ... i am now telling you because i don't want our new life to start with a lie ...I really love...".

" Geet " she stop as someone called her ...she turned around , shocked to see Maan standing there ...and looking very angry

" you here then who ? "

before he complete his friend Jai came out of wash room with murderous look ...He just gave her a look at went to Maan

" see I told this girl is not right for you ... you never listen to me ..you always spend your life with her and here she was never serious , in fact wanted to break up with you .. she was playing with you ..I f**king told you not to fall in her trap she is a bloody ..."

" not a word " Maan stop him before he abuse her but he doesn't care its about his friend how can this girl played with his friend ...

" And you don't you have shame ...first you played with him now here came running to confess your deed just when few hours left for wedding ...you are wrong if you think your plan will work I will never let my friend marry a cheater get it ..."

Geet ignored him and went to Maan ..." I'm sorry please listen to me once ...those are past now I don't feel that "

" stop your nonsense ..."

" I'm talking to my fiance " Geet glared at him and looked at Maan but before she can make understand he simply told her to go

" its late go to your room "

" but Maan meri puri baat toh ..."

" I'm going to tell your family about this ...they need to know how their lovely daughter in law deceiving them . This marriage is done ..."

saying Jai left fuming ...Even Maan followed him without saying her any word .

Geet fall on floor thinking what she have done ...she just wanted to start their marriage with truth... no lies no secret just truth ... May be it past but she can't live with this guilt that's why only she planned to disclose this. But seems like everything finished now . Maan surely misunderstanding everything... He didn't want to listen to her .

" He hates me .. Forget about marriage he may doesn't want to see my face what have I done ? I lost him "
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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guest home so couldn't type more ...don't happy with this ..boring silly
anyways enjoy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Me 1st
Ok so geet agreed 2 maan because initially she wanted to show pritam her ex that she is capable of maintaining a relationship or even make him jealous 2
Bt that was her initial thoughts n is very natural
Jab insan kisi se payar karta hai 2 aisa hona lazmi hai
Isme i don blame geet
Now that after all these years geet is madly in love with maan n wants 2 b married 2 him she decides 2 tell her evrything
Thats also fine n i hated jai
Who is he 2 interfere n how come he called her cheater
There r plenty marriages jha pe insan kisi aur se pyr krta hai
Bt later they fall in love with their spouse so does that mean its cheating
What an absurd thinking that stupid jai has
i m 10000% sure maan is not angry on geet
He knows her in n out he went behind jai so that he doesnt badmouth about geet 2 maans family
Lovely ud nice writing
Waiting eagerly 4 next
Edited by solaceMG - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

guest home so couldn't type more ...don't happy with this ..boring silly
anyways enjoy


I lv ur writing u can nevr b boring
Thx 4 udating
Reading now
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Omg its awesome
Why do u even think its boring
I totally loved it
Full comment dungi abhi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Geet did wrong... playing with someone's feeling is not done...but she was always like this spoilt brat...and Maan loved her the way she was so he should forgive her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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mera comment gayab ho gaya

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