Mushkil Zindagi Part 1/2/3 pg 3/4/6 updated 13th july 2017 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sagorika93

awesome update .
geet thought that she is going to engage with dev but instead of dev it's maan ..who is going to be her partner . she feared maan so much already and now ..how can she accept this ?
maan is angry thinking that geet is avoiding him ..
can't wait for next ..
continue soon..



hah he is like that only.. you will get to know abt him in coming updates... she will not accept but she is left with no choice
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: deep002

Awesome update dear, why geet is so much scared of maan



mujhe kya patha... lol dekhenge kya hotha hain
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

geet was not aware about her marriage with maan
here maan ready may be he likes her
oh she shocked


lets see wats going on in his mind...
Edited by sushmaraj - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update ye Kya Tha okay maans mom wanted geet as her bahu no matter who is the groom here maan also agreed he is surprised as to why he agreed to look after her he wanted to talk to her but his ego stopped him maybe if he did geet ko itna badaaa shock na lagta poor thing still thinks she is getting married to dev while she was shying looking at dev maan getting angry seeing geet ignoring him maaneet got engaged and geet got shocked seeing she got engaged to maan and fainted


thanks for your comment dear... yeah his ego stopped him... lets see what will geet do now 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#cc00cc">thanks 4 da pm! superb update! well written! the deciosn is made withoutspeakingto Geet! Geet thinks she is getting engaged 2 Dev! Y does Maan want2 marry Geet? Geet unaware she is getting engaged 2 Maan! she is shockedseeing his face! Maaneet engaged! Geet faints! Y is Geet scared ofMaan>? update soon</font>


suspense ko suspense hi rehne dhethe hain... ab marriage njoy karlo... reason you will get to know in coming updates 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sanum23

maan instantly get ready fr this proposal wen elders talk his alliance woth geet he was happy

but poor geet was not aware about changing in groom she said yes fr this alliance and fainted wen she get to know she's engaged to maan


yeah poor geet... 😭 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sushmaraj


lets see wats going on in his mind...


I'm eager to know why he wants to marry her 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
This is the most difficult part till now and it contains some abusive part.. plz dont take me wrong and it is the most important part of the story ... ignore mistakes...

I am satisfied with the likes but i want every one to comment on it... it inspires me a lot so plzz frnds comment on this... express your feelings abt this one...

Enjoy the story

part 3
geet looks up and faces her fear and she then realized that she is engaged to maan not dev... she donno what to do... and she faints. ...


Maan catches her and lifts her in his arms and makes way to her room...

Maan : (abhi se mujhse kaam karva rahi hain... mein kya karu iska... ithna natak karne ki jarorat kya hain... kuch nahin ho saktha iss pagal ladki ka... apne aap ko kya samajhthi hain... ek baar shadi hojane do uske baad isko theek kardoonga)


Dev checks her and says that she fainted because of weakness... and asks whether she had her food or not.. Meanwhile pari comes and says that she doesnt had her meal ...

Mohan scolds ragini that she forgot to feed geet as she is very busy in making arrangements...

Maan gets angry that she doesnt take care of herself and thinks that how can she take care of him...


Maan : Dad... now lets go... sagai hogaya na


Mohan : Aise kaise maan beta bina lunch ke aap kahi nahin jaa sakthe...

Vikranth : haa maan abhi geet ko tho hosh aane dho... uske baad tumhe prblm hain tho tum chale jana

Maan nods his head... Then geet wakes up and thinks that she had bad dream but by seeing all people she realizes that its not the dream and she is really engaged to maan ...
Maan looks at her with furious eyes.. and she shivers again...


Ragini : geet tumne breakfast kyu nahin kiya meine kaha na tumhe karne ke liye...

Geet : vo... vo... vo...



Maan gets irritated with her stammering and angrily shouts


Maan : woh woh kya geet.. tum bakri jaisa woh woh karna band karo aur kaho ki khaana kyu nahin kiya...


Geet again shivers ahd hugs her mom tightly...

Vikranth interrups and says maan tum ithna hyper kyu horahe ho

Darji : Abhi se apne honewali biwi ka dhyaan rakh raha hain mera pota..


Pari is shocked with this new revelation and looks at geet who is still in hugging ragini... pari doesnt understand anything ...
after sometime geet becomes normal and others are left to hall for discussing about marriage...

pari feeds geet and geet is eating mechanically... geet doesnt said a word after her engagement with maan... and pari slightly shakes her and asks

Pari : Geet yeh sab kya horaha hain... tumne kaha ki tumhari shaadi dev se honewali hain aur yaha tho kuch aur hi hogaya... bolo geet kya huwa???


Geet : pari plzzz mujhe maan se shaadi nahin karni hain plzz pari mumma ko bolo na plzzz...

pari : geet ek min aunty se baath karthe hain ... hum dono chalke aunty se baath karenge...


then geet and pari enters kitchen and listens the discussion between rashmi and ragini..

Ragini : bhabhi aaj mein bahuth kush hoon.. janthe ho aap mein humesha chahthi thi ki mein papa ka ehsaan kaisa chuka sakthi hoon.. lekin aaj geet aur maan ki engagement hone baad lag raha hain ki meine papa ki ehsaano ke badle mein kuch tho kiya jisse unhe kushi hojaye...


Rashmi : ragini tum aisa kyu bol rahe ho... geet is our lucky charm... geet humara bahu ho rahi hain isiliye ghar mein sab log kush hain.. jaanthe ho na jab geet ka janm hua tab dad ne geet ka haath mang liya apne pote maan ke liye... lekin dev aur geet ka closeness aur understanding dekh kar sab log geet ke liye dev hi theek samjha tha... lekin dev ne mana kiya geet se shaadi ke liye kyunki vo meera se pyaar kartha hain. .. aur maan ne geet se shaadi ke liye ha kardi ... yeh humne kabhi nahin socha...


Ragini : ha bhabhi lekin mujhe isse kuch farak nahin padtha.. kyunki maan bhi bahuth acha hain aur kithna dhyaan rakhtha hain sab ka... mein ab aaram se apni zindagi jee sakthi hoon... humesha mere dil mein khayal aathi hain ki mein kya karu jisse mein aap logon ki ehsaan chuka sakthi hoon lekin geet aur maan ki shaadi ke baad mein theek se so sakthi hoon...

Rashmi : tum bhi na kuch bhi bolthi rehthi ho...

Hearing her mother talks geet closes her eyes and runs to her room... while running to her room she hits maan and as a result she falls but maan catches her and after setting back to her original position he slaps her... geet is shocked by this sudden slap... (no one hears this as all are in garden and ragini , rashmi and pari are in kitchen )

Maan : tum ne abhi tak apna bachpana nahin choda kya geet... kab tak aise karthi rehthi ho.. kuch tho responsible bano.. aisa bachpana karna chod dho..

Geet again shivers because he is shouting on her and he also hit her..

Maan : dekho geet mein abhi tumhe sirf thapad mara hoon aur agli baar iss tarah ki nautanki kare tho mein apna asli roop dhikhavoonga... jab tak tum ache seh bartaav karogi tab tak mein bhi acha rahoonga... samaj mein aaya kya tumhe??


Geet : ji ji meine aisa kya kiya?? aap ne mujhe thappad kyu mara.. ?? meine kya jaan booch kar aapko dhakke mara kya... ( she first time raises her voice because she comes to her senses because of slap and now she want to fight for herself?)


Maan becomes angry and it hits his male ego.. he thinks how dare she to raise voise against him...??

maan holds geet hand and pushes her to the nearby room and locks the door... he holds her hand and twists backwards giving pain to her

Maan : kya kaha tumne.. inn saath saalon mein tumhari himmath kuch jyada hi badh gayi... tum ab meri biwi banne wali ho.. samjhi tum.. apna pathi ka dhyaan rakho aur mere saamne awaaz oopar math karna... meri har baath dhyaan mein rakho aur iss baath kisi se math kaho.. ab hum husband and wife banne wale hain so ab humare beech mein jo bhi hotha hain sirf hum dono ke beech mein hi rehna chahiye samjhi tum??

Geet cries a lot because of the pain on her cheeks and hand then maan lefts her hand...
Maan comes closer to her an cups her face with his both palms and smashes his lips on her... it was very sudden for geet and she is shocked... she wriggles under him and try to push him but he continue kissing her and bitting her as she is not responding to him.. but geet gathers some strength and courage and pushes him...

Geet : aap kya kar rahe hain ( still crying)

Maan gets angry on her as she is questioning him..

Maan : yeh sab kuch galath nahin hain aur waise bhi hamare shaadi hain two days ke baad aur hum ek hone ja rahe hain... kya apni hone wali biwi ko kiss karna koi paap hain.. aur waise bhi mujhe poora haq hain tum par... samjhi tum.. ab mujhse behas karna chod dho kyunki hamare life sab kuch mere wish se hi chalegi ... isiliye abhi se aadat banalo tumhare liye acha hoga nahin tho tum jaanthi ho na mein kya kartha hoon...

geets gets afraid by his talks and passion... maan left the room and geet falls down to the floor and cries hugging her knees... then pari comes ahd hugs geet and asks what happened...

Pari : geet kya huwa kyu ro rahi ho??

Geet : pari... and she hugs pari tightly and again cries...

Pari doesnt understand what happend with her and why she is crying... she thinks that she is upset abt maan..

Pari : dekho geet maan ithna bhi bura nahin hain aur mujhe lagtha hain ki tum ab sab apnana chahiye.. aunty bahuth kush hain.. aur mein nahin bolpayi geet aunty ka chehra dekh kar.. sry geet... plzz maan ko apna lo...

geet doesnt understand what is happening in her life and she thinks that now she doesnt have any life...


Every one gathers in dining hall to take their lunch and geet is no where to be found...
Vikranth asks for geet and pari replies that she is not feeling well so she want to have her lunch in her room...
pari then tried to take her lunch to her room but darji interups her...

Darji: geet ke liye khana maan beta lekhe jaayega iski wajah se unki baath hojayegi... aur vaise bhi maan ka luch bhi hogaya ...


maan becomes angry as again she is showing attitude...


everyone gives teasing look to maan and pari is shocked as geet is already in very bad state because of maan and here everyone are trying to impose maan on geet...

Maan picks rajma chawal which is his favourite and not at all liked by geet..

Ragini : wo maan beta geet ko rajma chawal pasand nahin hain..

Maan : mumma aap tension math lijiye rajma chawal seheth ke liye acha hain ... mein geet ko samjhadoonga...

Dev winks at maan and maan passes a smile and left to geets room...

Maan knocks the door of geet room and because of no response he enters her room and locks the door.. there geet is sleeping because of back to back shocks...

Maan admires her and moves close to her and pats her head lovingly..


Geet wakes up and when she finds maan so near to her she moves back in fear...

Maan : ( he gets angry on geet reluctance and shouts on her) kya geet yeh bachpana kya hain...kya prblm hain neeche aane ki... tumhe kya mein servent lagtha hoon ab chup chap khana khavo aur mujhe tang math karo...


geet looks at him... and she again starts to shiver... when she looks at plate she show faces as it is rajma chawal

Maan : dekho mein tumhe firse keh raha hoon... mein sirf ek baar hi kehtha hoon.. chup chap khavo... aur mera thappad yaad haina tumhe??

Geet again becomes afraid and starts to eat... she completes her lunch

geet tries to move but maan held her hand and looks at her with desire...
geet feels that as lust and turns her face...
but maan held her face and made her to look at him... but geet tries to wriggle..

Geet : (slowly having tears in her eyes) aap yeh kya kar rahe hain...

Maan : kya ek aur thaappad khane ka mann hain kya... ?? meine pehle hi keh diya ki mujhe tum par poora haq hain...

by saying this he again take her lips to a long kiss... geet doesnt respond to him as she is feeling disgust on herself...
after sometime maan leaves her... and he left to hall...

Geet : yeh kya hain meri naseeb mein... ek din mein meri life badal gayi... yeh kaisa insaan hain jo apne engagement mein apni hi mangetar ko maartha hain aur uske saath jabardasthi kartha hain... she thinks this as her fate and cries over it

Geet comes down and hugs everyone and says bye to everyone... she feels that everyone are happy
... she doesnt want to spoil their happiness..

precap : marriage


Edited by sushmaraj - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
awesome update .
I m shocked to see maan's abusive behavior ..one moment he is slapping her next moment forcing her ..
geet is so scared of him and hona bhi chahiye after seeing his true face .
can't wait for next ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
maan is so rude and dominating person je didn't care of geet feelings he only care about him

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