Mushkil Zindagi Part 1/2/3 pg 3/4/6 updated 13th july 2017 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
interesting concept ..
liked the character sketch ..
want to read more ..
continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
fab CS
and concept
eagerly waiting to read

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
hello friends this is short teaser...
I will update by today first part of this story...
i cant say it will be an os or ss or ff... it depends on your response

Teaser




Girl : Whats wrong with you??? Why you always tend to behave as a jerk?? You know what i hate you... No one could ever love you if you dont express yourself... The worst thing you know the girl you marry will be the most unluckiest girl in this world... hmm chaddo mujhe kya


Boy : [/COLOR] I know what yu think about me but what ever happens i will never bend infront of anyone.. abhi tho tummhe himmat dhikhaayi mujhese aise baat karna ki lekin future mein aisa mein kabhi hone nahin doongi samjhi tum... with that he holds her hand and presses deeply giving her pain which is unbearable for a 13 years kid.. she frightens and his hold on her tightens and she shouts ahhh
Edited by sushmaraj - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
interesting teaser! nice title! Hope its not a sad story! will b waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
nice one...
may be i think the girl is geet and boy is maan... update soon
congo for new story
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
part one

Today whole handa mansion is decorated beautifully as one family is coming to see their gudiya... Ragini is very happy for their daughter as geet is gonna become daughter in law of her brother..
Ragini always thought that she's indebted to them but today she's gonna give them her precious doll..
Even though they are one family its just formality for them ...


Khurana Mansion
Vikrant : I donno how to say this news to ragini... from childhood onwards we thought that dev and geet are made for each other but now how can we say that the groom has changed...

Rashmi : There is nothing wrong in this vikrath... In childhood we thought that geet and dev are made for each other but you know that dev is a doctor... so he would like to marry doctor... Here even I support Maan... whatever he had said is correct and moreover even dad has agreed to this ... So it is not a big problem and even geet and maan are friends right


Vikranth : In what manner they appear friend sto you rashmi... have u ever saw while they are conversing... no na ... vo log theek se baat bhi nahin karthe... isliye humne dass saal pehle thai kiya dev aur geet ka rishta hogi... ( they dont even talk with each other.. thats why we have decided geets and dev marriage)

Rashmi : aisa nahin hain vikrath... dheko geet se maan bahut baga hain aur isliye vo log jyada mil nahin paaye... tumhe yeh baat samajhna hi hoga.. ( its not what you think vikranth... maan is 7 years elder to geet and because of age gap they are not very close... you have to understand this)

Vikranth : phir bhi mein meri gudiya ki shadi meri badi bete se nahin ho sakthi... ( even though my dolls marriage will not takes place with our first son)


Rashmi : tho kisse hogi vikranth... aur thum maan ko ithna bura kyu maan rahe ho... kya maan ithna bura hain kya... ( then with whom vikranth.. and why you always think bad about maan... is maan that bad???

Vikranth : Nahin rashmi thum mujhe galat samajh rahe ho... Maan bahut acha hain aur tum jaanthe ho na maan kithna chup rehtha hain aur kabhi bhi apni dil ki baat nahin kehtha aur ek meri gudiya apna sab kuch sabke saath share karthi hain.. ab in dono ko kaisa hogi... tum ek baar socho geet kitna darthi hain maan se... maan ka naam sunthe hi ghabra jaathi hain... aur maan tho hamesha chup hi rehtha hain... vo kya geet ka dhyan rakh payega kya?? ( No rashmi you are taking me wrong.. maan is very gud and responsible but you know maan never opens up with any one.. he never says whatever in his heart... once think even geet is afraid of maan... she frightens by listening to his name only and maan he never speaks... will he able to take care of geet? )


Rashmi : ha tumne sach kaha lekin ab maan bahut bada hogaya hain aur mujhe lagtha hain ki geet usme badlav layegi ( yes you are right and maan became big and i think geet will change maan)


Vikrath : shayad aisa hi ho... ( hope so) mein papa ko bata dheta hun ki maan aur geet ki shadi hogi aur dev ki shaadi 6 mahine ke baad hogi ( ok i will say to dad that maan and geet will get married and dev will get marries after 6 months?)


Rashmi : pehle baar apne kuch theek samjha... lekin iss khabar hum ragini ko kaisa bathayenge... ( first time you are thinking correct... but how we should broke this news to ragini)


Vikranth : meine kaha ragini ko ki geet ko kuch mat kahe... kyunki mein apne gudiya ko surprise dhena chahtha hoon and isiliye shayad geet ko kuch bhi patha nahin hain... aur rahi baat ragini aur mohan ki tho hum log samjhayenge aur gudiya tho hamara hi ghar aayengi na chahe vo maan se shadi kare ya dev se kya farak padtha hain... ab se gudiya hamare saath rahegi bus isika hain intezaar ( I said to ragini that not to say anything to geet as i want to give surprise to her and thats why i think that geet doesnt know anything and about ragini and mohan i will manage them and however geet will come to this house only na then what is a big deal if she marries dev or maan.. now only waiting for geets arrival)


By saying this vikranth left and rashmi move towards maan's room ..

Here maan is working on his laptop and sipping black coffee

Rashmi : Maan tum geet se sach mein shaadi
karna chahthi ho kya?? ( maan do you wanna really marry geet?)

Maan : ma aap janthe hain na geet dev ke liye theek nahin hain... dev doctor hain uske liye time nahin rehtha aur geet aut dev ke beech misunderstandings aajayegi aur tho aur geet is a kid vo dev ko nahin samaj paayegi ( ma u know that geet is not correct match for dev... dev is doctor and he will be busy... she cant understand dev and still she is a kid)

Rashmi : mein vo sab nahin pooch raha hun tum geet se shaadi ke liye khush hain na ( i am not talking all that i am asking whether you are happy or not)

Maan : maa agar meine apne mann ki baath kaha dev aur geet ke bare mein tho darji ne meri aur geet ki shaadi ki baat khada kiya aur mujhe koyi problem nahin hain ki mein geet se shadi karoon ya na karoon... mujhe bhi tho shaadi karni hi hain isliye meine ha keh diya ( maa when i said what is in my mind about geet and devs matter darji asked me to marry geet and i said yes because even i have to marry so its not a big deal for me whether its geet or any other)


Rashmi : mujhse vada karo ki tum geet ko khush rakhogi ( promise me that you will keep geet happy)

Maan : maa mein promise tho nahin de saktha but i will try my level best

on the other hand in handa mansion

Geet : ( on phone) pari thum ghar jaldi aavo na mujhe taiyaar hona hain jaanthe ho sabko lag raha hain ki mein kuch nahin jaanthi lekin mein geet handa hoon aur mein sab kuch jaanthi hoon... meri shaadi dev se hone vali hain ( pari u come to my home quickly i have to get ready.. u know what all are thinking that i donno naything but i know everything that my marriage is fixid with dev)

Pari : wow dev matlab dev singh khurana.. but geet how do u know this?


Geet : kal meine mumma aur papa ki baath sunli hahaha... aur sab log mujhe surprise dhena chahthe hain ( i have overheard the talks of mom and dad.. and everyone is gonna give surprise to me)

Pari : Do u love dev??

Geet : nahin yaar aisa kuch bhi nahin hain agar maa aur papa ne kehdiya tho mein maan jaavoongi aur rahi baath dev ki vo acha ladka hain aur understanding bhi hain ( no yaar its not like that... mom and dad said so i am agreeing to this alliance and about dev he is very good person


Pari : aur maan ka aur mera alliance bhi fix kardo yaar...


Geet : while listening maan name she thinks one incident and her breathing fastens and she starts to shiver.. vo vo mein baad mein call karthi hoon ( i will call u later by stammering)


Pari : are geet kya hua theek hain bye .. mein ek hour mein aajavoongi ( what happened geet? its ok bye then i will come in one hour )


On the other hand geet shivers with the mention of his name.. its been 7 years and still she is unable to forget that incident but again she thinks that now she's gonna marry dev so she will have to see him daily so she should be stay strong and should maintain distance from him...

But she doesnt know what future hold for her


Khurana Mansion

darji : bhale hi maan sach mein maan gaye geet se shadi ke liye?? ( does maan really agreed to marry geet)

Rashmi : yes dad.. use jab laga ki geet dev ke liye theek nahin hain usse yeh bhi laga ki uske liye geet theek hain kyunki usse lagtha ki dev ke liye meera hi theek hain kyunki dono doctors hain aur dono ke beech acha understanding hojayegi ( yes dad he agreed he thinks that geet is not right for dev but geet is right for him... for him dev and meera are bound to be together as both are doctors and have good understanding between them)


Darji : agar potha ho kiske... bus ab geet hamare ghar aajaye tho sab kuch acha hojayega

Rashmi : ha dad isikelye intexmzaar hain

darji : mein ragini ko bataoongi ki geet ke shadi dev se nahin maan se honevali hain ( i will say to ragini that geet and maan are getting married and not geet and dev)


While saying this he calls ragini and discuss the whole matter what took place two days back

Flashback in next part

Thoda short hain lekin i promise next one will be long

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Note : geet and maan are not related... ranvijay adopted ragini but he doesnt gave her his name so i doesnt mentioned her name as ragini khurana... hope it could clear your misunderstanding
Edited by sushmaraj - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 updating! terrific update! well written! so Geet's marriage was fixed with Dev bt nw its fixed with Maan! Maan aware n agrees bt Geet unaware! she is scared js hearing Maan's name! frm the cs seems like they r related so hw can they get married?
Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it will b shocking surprise fr geet
to see maan in groom
maan agree to marry geet bz it doesn't matter to him
whom his wife one day he have to marry so y not make happy his grandpa i think it's something fishy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#ff6699">thanks 4 updating! terrificupdate! well written! so Geet's marriage was fixed with Dev bt nw its fixed with Maan! Maan aware n agrees bt Geet unaware! she is scared js hearing Maan's name! frm the cs seems like they r related so hw can they get married?</font>


they are not related.. ranvijay adopted ragini and thats why i havent mentioned her name as ragini khurana...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome start ..
maan and geet don't like each other then why maan agreed to marry geet ? he even broke dev and geet's alliance .
geet kitna darti hai maan se ..omg ..
just listening his name she started shivering ..what will happen when she got to know that maan is going to be her future husband ?
nice teaser ... waiting for it ..

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