MY ENDLESS JOURNEY: Maaneet Chapter 1 to 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...

thank u very much fr d update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

I sat there again summarizing the phases of my life, suddenly I heard Maan calling me, "GEET, here you are, I have been searching you since last few minutes I gave him a puzzled look, why was he searching for me. He was looking at me for some reaction, but I was too puzzled to react.

"Geet do you have any place to go? he asked me;

I looked at him, shall I tell him that yes I have a place to go, my boss has given me few addresses in several cities, where I could go, I just have to go to Srinagar or I could have stepped down at Ludhiana or Hisar, but I did not answer his question.

He looked at me for several minutes and then sat down, "Ok, come with me, my first instinct was to refuse, but then I thought, what is the harm in trusting him? I want to end that previous life; I want to start a new life. So why go to Srinagar or any other place and be known to my life that I have left, instead go with Maan and start afresh.

After much thought I just nodded and followed him. We went to the bike stand and he asked me to wait, after few minutes he came out with a motorcycle. He smiled putting on his helmet, "you will have to sit with me on this bike lady he said and started the bike; I sat behind him putting my bag between us.

"Are you ready he asked and I nodded, he did not move, I was like now what why is he not moving, "Geet are you ready, you have to speak and not nod he laughed. I mentally scolded myself and said "yes

It had been long since I sat on a bike, the night breeze was soothing. The city was dark and looking a bit dangerous due to darkness, but I felt secure. Soon we reached a colony, it had many single storied houses, none of them was like the other, the colony seemed to have developed through the times, out of the individual needs of the residents; he stopped in front of one of them, "here this is my palace and he smiled. His mesmerizing smile was infectious, I could not stop myself any more from participating in his humour and laughed softly. He looked intently at me.

"You look better when you laugh I stopped hearing his comment. He ignored my reaction and opened the lock of his house.

The house was small with a hall, one room, kitchen and bathing area cum toilet. It had a small courtyard also, my observation was broken by his voice "as you don't ask anything but I know you want to know where are the others, he said. I shrugged I was not thinking about who lived here I was just observing the surroundings, it has been due to my long career training, I observe things instinctively. He said, "Now let me inform you madam I live here alone I just nodded; ok that's why the house was locked. He gave me a puzzled look and asked, "You are not afraid of this fact

Afraid, I am no more afraid of anything, I shrugged, "No he again gave me a brilliant smile and said, "ok follow me, I will show you where you can settle he showed me the room it had a huge single bed, after all he was 6 feet tall, "here you sleep here I nodded and looked at him and as if he read my face, he said, "I will sleep in the hall and went out

SHRUTI
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Journey is taking an interesting turn...So where is it heading??
Continue please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcimeback shruti
If mai jaan aa gayi

Thanks jeevana ... Shruti ko wapis laane ke liye ...

Congrets for new story ...update others too ...

So geet is like all other common ladies ...working for all but not getting any thing ...

Sab kuch hai par kuch bhi nai ... Story of most of ladies ...

Geet ko ek humdard to mila ... Jo baki ladies ko nai milta
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya hoga aage ...maan geet ko apne ghar le gaya ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats on new story! welcome back! terrific updates! superbly written! Geet suffered so much! she meets Maan on a train n they talk! he helps her! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's amazing and something very different concept. A girl named gazal is tired sacrificing her happiness for others. And now after loosing her kids, she decided to leave everyone behind and start a new life. She met with maan. She told her wrong name to him. He seems to be families to gazal. When maan talked with her, she become comfortable with him. Even she got ready to stay at his place. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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maan took geet with him
do maan know gazal
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 4
I settled in the small room, the bed was quite big and comfortable it almost took the whole space of the room. Though it was a new place and a new room but it felt like home, I for the first time felt as if I don't have to prove myself to any one and i felt secure. Idecided to take one day at a time.
In the morning I woke up while he was still asleep in the hall. I felt bad on seeing him sleeping on the floor. I went to explore the small bachelor's kitchen and bathroom/toilet. It was a very small house. I freshened up made black tea as there was no milk or sugar.
He was sleeping with his head resting or on his arm, he looked very innocent, I watched him for the first time I wanted to memorize his face, those slightly apart m shaped lips I wanted to trace them... Hey what am I thinking I scolded myself. I gathered my wits and softly called him,"Maan, Maan he woke with a lazy smile and opened his eyes as soon as he saw me he gave me a startled look and after few seconds again smiled, "Oh I forgot about you
I smiled, "It's OK here your tea he took the cup and sipped it, "its black, Yes of course without milk or sugar one can get only this, sorry about it but why did you bother you should have wokenme up
I just smiled and asked him, " can I take care of your house until my stay"
"What... I mean why"
"It is all I can do for you"
"Why do you want to repay"
"I am not use to anyone doing anything for mr without him wanting something in return" I said uncomfortably
"Ok, but you will have to get use to it, madam, you make me want to do things for you... It seems as if you boarded the train just to meet me" he winked, I felt uncomfortable, he laughed and said,"hey I am kidding... Relax"
Soon I became the part of his house. I felt comfortable cooking for him, taking care of his house and soon I tended his small kitchen garden also. He was a busy man, he use to leave at around 8 am daily and came in the afternoon and worked on his laptop and left after an hour and mostly returned late. Sometimes he seemed to forget that I also live in the house, I was always as quite as a mouse.
The colony did not have many residents and I talked to no one. Though I never questioned him and he never asked me to leave.I many times wondered what Maan did for his living.
"Maan, can I get a job? I asked him after 3 weeks.
"Why do you want a job? he asked surprised by my thoughts.
"How long can I live with you? Someday I will have to leave
"Why?
"Maan we are strangers, we don't know anything about each other, we can't keep on living like this
"Geet, what is the harm? What's wrong in our living like this?
"Nothing is wrong, but
"You were fed up with your life in Mumbai, that's why you ran away from there. You even changed your name, I never asked you. I am not bothered about who you are, then why are you... wait did anyone say anything to you he looked angry
"No one has said anything, and why would anyone bother me?
"Then why do you want to move out?
"I don't want to go Maan, but someday when your family comes you will want me to go
"I have no family Geet, no one will ever come
"But
"The day you want to go just tell me I will see that you get a job and a good place to live but until then this arrangement continues he was very angry ... I knew this by the tone of his voice he even seemed hurt.
I did not say anything and wondered why he wanted to continue without knowing anything about me. He never tried to take advantage of me. All I did was to take care of this small house and cook food.
But one thing changed after that day .. I always spoke very little but now he started talking endlessly to me. He would even ask me what will I prepare for lunch or do I need any ingredients . what do I want to grow in the kitchen garde. In coming weeks he took me for sightseeing also. Slowly we started coming close
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Someone must have sent Maan behind geet..
Where is this journey heading ... If it is so simple ...Let it be endless...

Update soon

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