~~5S: His innocent one! Part 5 @26 on 01/10/2017~Completed~

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Perfect Ending

Like the moment Geet found out that she was pregnant

and again when she brings up the divorce issue

Geet gave birth to a baby girl and Maan extremely happy with his princess

this indeed was a beautiful story

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

Hi I have never read your stories before, this os is my first one. Loved the first part, and looking forward to reading more of this please... outdoor like to see how the relationship goes forward from here between Maan and Geet..,,would can you send me the password for the second part..,
Thnx

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390540

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Part 1

Lovely update
So maan is not aware that geet knows his cheating act
Did he really or was it some misunderstanding from geet's end?
Would love to read remaining parts

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390540

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

Part2
Geet back to mansion nice
Maan being mafia I doubt he cheated geet
Oh oh crazy for ice cream loving it

Edited by aaradhya - 7 years ago

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Anjali60

@Anjali60

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

superb part 1...i loved it a lot.

maan is crazy and is magnifying geet is awsome.

pls send me password for part 2

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Part 1:

I like the idea of the story.

I was surprised by Geet's behaviour with Maan after the divorce since she seemed so docile during the marriage.

Now she seems to have gotten much stronger. It will be interesting to see how Maan deals with this new Geet.

I am assuming Maan did not cheat on Geet since he said he did not know the reason she asked for the divorce (fingers crossed).

Hope I can get the password to part 2 pls.

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

Part 2:

First I have to say that the 3D picture was amazing.

Maan is really doing everything he can to impress Geet. I like that he is not showing off his wealth but is doing little things which she would like, for example the room and the ice cream.

And he is respecting her space and her. I thought Maan would try something when Geet came out of the shower but he kept his word and acted like a gentleman.

Kind of impressed with him right now.