Thank you for taking my request and mentioning the page no's of commenters you r responding to...
So you're the elder child...being elder child does come with lot of responsibility, its expected of them to always set right examples for younger ones and to take care of them...its tough being an older sibling na...I always thank god for not being eldest child...I feel for u and my elder sis..but the one thing positive about it is you'll are most respected and definetely deserve it..
So true we can't ccontrol anyone's life and shouldn't restrict them but they have to take accountability for their actions and decisions.
IIndeed it must be difficult for you to choose few comments to reply to when each one is awesome and written from heart...But please don't feel guilty about it because we do understand...at least from my side I would say that just hit the like button of my comment to acknowledge it...u know I always feel so bad that you wonderful writers take out time from ur busy life's and pen down the beautiful updates investing so much time, emotions and putting such effort just to give us free entertainment and on top of that you have to go through so many pages of comments which really takes a lot of time and immense patience...and to reply to the comments is even more taxing.. you're writing the updates pouring in all the emotions and we r giving feedback about what we felt about it...isn't it enough y the replies? Now that u r starting work and life is going to get much hectic, i request you not to reply to my comment in future updates, if this can saves few minutes of ur time I will be more than happy...I know u are happy to have us here as readers but at least for my comment a like would surely be enough acknowledgment..
By the way Hearty Congratulations!! Wish you all the luck and hope your work life is smooth and successful!!!
U r on IF since school days? Shocking...such a long time it is then! most of ur time in ur teen years you've spent here .I am amazed to know that at such a young age u have such great writing capability that it reachers out to readers hearts!!!
I am totally okay with delayed updates..take your own time to post the updates...don't stress yourself...
Coming to the uupdate, nice title!!!
I always did wonder how come none in the family suspect that Maaneet share a unique relationship and how Ana who is close to Geet does not notice the changes karke... Coz normally our human Brians are fast in this matter na...the Khuranas believe in giving space to one another and don't interfere much I guess... but finally the curiosity got the better of her...
The study room is like Maaneets personal home... Right from start of the story and when Dadima was gone...Maaneet always have spent alone time in the study room...it will always be a special place for Maaneet even In future which holds lots of Wonderfull moments and memories...
Since Geet did not meet Maan for days she's missing him and she went to their personal room/nirvana... I like it how casually she sits on the rug to read a book instead of a chair and her sleeping on tummy and crossing the leggs makes the scene so real...such a simple person she is..
Whenever these two meet and their eyes get arrested at each others site it feels so wonderful, may be its true when people say the when two people in love look at each other they r lost and forget the world...Though Ana and Kabir are close friends,
I like it how Geet always shares her concerns with Maan with ease...the comfort level she has with him is on another level..When Maan admires Geet's cute adorable form/dressing in pyjamas it feels so nice...
The talk about the book is lovely and Maan is such a cute older bro that he read books aloud for Ana...which bro does that in this generation... The passion with which he speaks about books and also reads the book aloud with the voice modulation is very adorable coz men usually think reading books is a girly thing na...love every quality of this Maan...
Maan reading the book for Geet and she lying on her tummy sswaying her legs and listening intently makes such a cute scene...and her laying her head on his lap is ultimate...(it reminded me of an incident when I was traveling in train I saw an old couple and the aunty was using uncles lap as a pillow and lying down comfortably and they were speaking things and gazing out of the window, their kids and grand kids were in the next seat and this couple were in their old world which was very cutee)
Geet is scared about the new changes iin her life, how it is going to be, one is always uncertain of future especially when it keeps changing...and can't stop worrying about the new phase of
Life (Is this how you feel too Ms.Writer now that ur starting ur professional life) Geet being worried that she cant meet Maan and family when ever she wants is really sad..she is going to be very busy but I am so glad her career will kick start...
I just love it when Maan wants her to be independent and honestly says that he can't be with her all the time this entire scene where He talks about his expectations from her his encouragment his wanting her to be on her own even if she fails at things and his staying in the background keeping a watch on her is just awesome, you've written it with such simplicity and depth! and its my most favourite part of the story..it is unconditional selfless true love that reflects out of it and its so heart touching...every bit of his scene Geet cupping Maan face looking deep in his eyes him holding her palm and her encosing it, entwined fingers the hug and forehead kiss ...its beautiful and much more..no wonder Geet feels at home in Maan's arms...
Finally Ana came to know about Maan's love...
Geet's busy life with studies and job has started
And her interaction with Maan Ana and Kabir has lessened...as expected..Maan liking it when Geet takes his name is too cute..love does wonders!!
NOw you've revealed the role of Zain.. He makes things interesting..Maan doesn't feel good about him..is he insecure or uncertain of the future with Zain in picture? I am very scared though what's going to happen..Geet in her journey in becoming an independent and successful women will be meeting many people and I am sure she will gain many admirer's with her simplicity don't know how Maaneet will come together!
Thanks a lottt for the long update..
Edited by dalur - 8 years ago
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