Hi,
First I am sorry for not commenting on the previous update too as kids have final exams this week and last week was prep week so was busy with them...huh it feels as if I am appearing for finals...anyway loved both your updates and you really are taking us and Geet and Ana on a roller coaster ride...so keep guessing who is interested in who and will end up with whom...bringing in new characters and making this story more and more interesting...love the banter between Aarush and Ana and the way he teases her with Premchanji, the great writer ( wow, I had forgotten studying his books in school) but it was cute reference to Ana who does not understand any Hindi...
And of course our cute Geet...feeling so low now that she knows that Maan missed his cousins wedding for her and has started to realize her importance in his life...really hoping that she is able to remember (or does she already) the antics of their night together...her guilt and her restlessness is enough to clear the fog in her mind and heart but will it...she is our naive Geet after all...probably it will take someone or something drastic to make her realize her feelings towards him ( ha ha ha not suggesting you do that in your story, please make it a little simpler than that for us poor readers) else we will die in anticipation...and to make things easy...you already have Maan at her doorstep...(so dear writer take some help from Geets Kanhaji and have some mercy on us by doing, One: update soon please and Two: bring them a little more closer...)
Have not understood Zain's part in all this but do not want to see a triangle please...at least not for Geet and Maan...
Thnx
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