Mg marriage a cry of agaony epl 5,lat epl on page 5 ,6-27,28 july - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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congratzz for te new thread
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry for late comment
3 , 4 epi

great update
mr. khurana given death as punishment n maan for 6 months

maan is telling past to adi about meera
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maan - wiase that ki** was awesome ..muje nahi pata tha you r so good kisser...

Poor girl cried ...please ...

Maan ask please what geet ...do u want to continued that special and hot activity in private now ..poor girl cried and hug maan to hide her shy red face.maan hug her back took his kitten in his strong arm now in this moment he feel his life is bliss.

Next week meera joined the KM and same time maan father come back in city he took house near KM to start his dirty game with maaneet ..geet come as happiness in maan life and he want to destroy that happiness .destroy geet as well as maan .

And he start his dirty game with meera ...he brought all information related geet and get that meera is key to destroy geet .

He two three time meet meera and ported that maan have MU about him and not living with him but he want his son love. First meera don't want to believe him but his again and again talk make her melt and that is biggest mistake of meera. That she trust on devil. Other side with help of one servant maan father put watch o maan each activity same time that violated video again and again coming to maan phone ,mail ect ect . and its start to show impact on maan . some changes start happen in him. He start to take dought on geet ..its slow changes that geet also not notice that ...

After engagement maan life become turn hell ..alwyes problem in business and upon that video three three days he don't get sleep properly ..and that time maan make most bigesst mistake that he hide this all from doc and geet .

After three month that deadful day appear when maan first time turn as MSK...that day when maan father almost ruin life of meera.

That day maan stop meera for extra work and both working in his cabin ..maan feel like his head bursting with pain .he ask for coffee but its not work and ...same time maan father entered in room ...

Maan froze in his place only he feel like someone stab him hard on his heart.

Meera get surprised with maan reaction.

Before both say anything maan father give maan pen drive and say him start special movie on big screen of his cabin.

Maan almost forz in his palce ..so meera start that movie and land escape from meera feet ..

Its dirty P*** movie and to almost shock face of geet and meera in that .next moment maan throw a chair on that screen and he almost run to his father side to grab him he push him with full force ..for while maan father chock with maan move but he somehow push maan and say.

This is truth maan all women are bit** sabhi ek jaise hoti hai ..open your eyes ..they both stabbing u on your back ...wake up.

This is truth maan all women are bit** sabhi ek jaise hoti hai ..open your eyes ..they both stabbing u on your back ...wake up. Maan cried in agaony no she is my life she will never do this.

Maan father ya she will never do this than tell me how she manage all her expenses when she don't have anyone in her life ,wo job bhi nahi karti than how maan . how ...maan hand stop in air which he forward for a punch . maan father ...pointed to meera and say ask her maan how both this girl manage their living and study ..

Maan whose eyes spitting fire march to meera and hold her by shoulder and ask ...what he is saying meera ...wo kya tha ..kya tha wo. Kya tha with that he punch nearby wall ... Meera shake like hell all happening around her she feel like it's worse than any nightmare she shaking in fear with maan avatar ... this too much for her to grasp .

Next second maan pull all things which on his desk . he trun like demon in second ...meera almost run from cabin and maan father run to her side ..

From first day itself he want her on his bed and today is best opportunity he run to her side and pull her to another cabin and lock that from inside this happen in second and meera don't get any chance to react or defense her...and next moment maan father grab meera ...and slap her hard that she faint and fall on floor . thud...

Here in cabin maan phone ring and its geet ...don't know why but maan pick that call and geet voice work as medicine he clam little bit and start to think properly.

One thought come in his mind why after so many year his father think for his betterment his happiness why or Its part of his any dirty game .. next moment his eyes winded in shock and he imm cut the call and run outside he hear sound from next cabin like something is fall or someone is fall.


please look


marriage mi...note and part 54 on page 15-25 july


Mg do kinare ya humrahi ... part 12 on 49 page -26 july

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Last epl .

Here in cabin maan phone ring and its geet ...don't know why but maan pick that call and geet voice work as medicine he clam little bit and start to think properly.

One thought come in his mind why after so many year his father think for his betterment his happiness why or Its part of his any dirty game .. next moment his eyes winded in shock and he imm cut the call and run outside he hear sound from next cabin like something is fall or someone is fall down he bang the door in full speed...he really worried for meera ..he try to open with his shoulder but not worked so he strongly by his leg and lock get braked . he run inside ...and the sight made him...burn in anger and shame ..

Maan father trying to open meera cloth ..and maan attack on him like hurt lion ...his two three punch make knock out to mr khurana and maan took perfect chance and first he cover meera and took her his strong arm and he almost run to his family doctor with back door of KC he could not trust his father no big no.

Doc shock with maan and other girl but they first examine meera thank god she is not get abused by maan father but her mind state they will know after her come back in sense. And for that they have to wait next 6 hour .

Till than doc ask maan what happen a nd maan say all things which is happen in last 6 month doc get angry on maan that why he hide it from him.

Maan mummer muje laga ye itna serious nahi hoga so I ...

Doc - maan make u clear with one things every small change related to your life is big or I will biggest things and u have to say each and everything to me u get it ...doc gritted his teeth. he is really disappointed and angry on maan . maan is not only a patient for him but he is like son for him.

Maan mummer sorry to doc .

Next 6 hour passed very tense ...6 hour after meera start to gain her hosh and she slowly open her eyes its took her min or more to cop up with where is she and when she react its brake maan .

She cried in high voice don't don't come near me don't touch me don't touch me ...wo video is not true we r innocent meri geet innocent hai ...zhoot hai sab zhoot hai ...ahhh and next moment she again slip in behoshi .

Maan ask doc with terrified voice ... what is this.

Doc - maan I think she lost her mental stableness because of all event.

Present - maan took deep breath from that we r waiting for our lost meera ... bro That man try to brake all my close once ...till today geet never ask me what happen to her so she become like this ..but sometime question in her eyes ...than I told all things to geet our past and make her mitting to doc ...doc ne akale main uske sath kuch baat ki thi ...that day she hug me tight and say only one sentence ...now onword ye geet apne maan ke sath kadam se kadam milake chelgi ..she will walk with me ..in every path...and till today she fulfill her promise bro. maan took deep breath silence appear in room.

After deep thought adi say in soft voice ...we have to make her meet with that monster ...

Maan soul shake with adi suggestion ...he imm NO bro big no she will die .

Adi take maan hand in his hand and say lesion me maan she will come out from past ..trust me once please some time we have to use reversed theory and lesion abhi jo halat hai ..usahse jada to kuch galat nahi hoga na.

Maan feel scared for such things ...he ask with tense bro kuch galat hua to ..and Judge we hide it from eyes of law that she is alive.

Adi - let's see may be kuch punishment mil jaye but after medical history we get chance of relief also.

Maan think for while and nodded in yes.

Again adi arrenge every thing and now maaneet ,adi , adis lawyer and doc present in Judge chamber ...and judge blast on maan advocate ..for hiding such things ..

All appolized on it and doc say about meera medical condition ...judge incrised maan punishment for month for hiding such things and called meera in court ...now there should be some change in Mr khurana punishment .

Maan and geet very tense for meera ..and after hour meera come in judge chamber proceeding should be put in camera .so selected person are present there .

Maan and geet heart acch after looking to meera so lifeless . ...she is with nurse and doc ...she is not recognized anyone including maaneet ...

But when mr khurana come in front of her ..her face start to change its start to turn pale and more pale now everyone start to fera about her reaction ...

Meera start to shake in fear ..same time someone hold her hand ...a boy or may a doc ...

That doc - if today he will win he will ruin more Meera ...bol do meera jo bhi bolna hai u r safe here ..with me with all of them. Ajj darna nahi kuch kar jana hai meera ..

Meera once look to Doc with teary eyes and nodded ...that doc hold meera by sholder and meera walk to mr khurana along with doc and next min that place eco with sound of tight slap . meera slap hard on Mr khurana face its so sudden and hard that mr khurana shake for while ...he almost collapse . ...and before he stand he get another slaps form meera ...she cried in hight ...meri geet ko badnaam kiya ...

Geet hold palm on her mouth that in unconscious mind state also meera is thinking for her ...next doc make meera stop and nurse give some water to meera meera took sip of water . she clam herself than once give look to surround to her ...she get it she in court but why she feel like she wake up from deep sleep.

Meera eyes fall on geet and her eyes start to flow with tear of happiness and pain ...she open her arm for geet and next moment geet in her hug crying her heart .

All get senti with reunion of this two friends .

Judge ...ask meera is she ok to give confession ...meera nooded in yes and she say about all things to court ..

Court incrised punishment of Mr khurana ...

Next 6 month went in hurdle burdle all waiting for released date of maan from jail. And that day come and all standing outside of jail ...geet eyes searching only one face .

And t here he come ...a clam face and soft smile geet feel like her image going ..faint than she get that tear gather in her eyes ...he open arm for her and next second she is in her Maan arm ...two should meet each other after 6 month ...they forget all present there bas ek dusre ko mehassos kar rahe they.

Meera - we are here jiju she say with naughty grin ...

Maan come out from hug ...and say how I foregt that devil on my head now ..name meera .

Meera cried jiju and sametime someone took meera in side hug ...same doc who protect her in court its doc dev ...

Doc dev - main hu na meera don't worry ...mr khurana my would be is not devil she is angle ..

Maan nodded and say happy for u too ...but where is adi bro he is not come

Geet giggle on maan q and say mr . mk your brother arranged big surprised for u so u have to wait till reach home. All giggle on geet talk and maan found something fishy .

Maan shrugle his shoulder and all come to Km ...

Pinky sound make stop maaneet on door ...maan look front and found adi and pinky on door with pooja thali. Maan come to closed to them ...and ask why u two not come to recive me ...

All giggle on maan qus...

Maan give look to other what is joke in this ...

Geet called out maan two nahi four

Maan give confused look ...like what is geet saying ...

Geet - budhhu ...look here and she pointed to pinky big belly ...MK ye do and inke do ...humare aane wale two new family member . its twince maan your fear come true adi bro cannot control himself and marriage se pehale hi SR...and all burst in laugh when maan jump on place give horrified look to pinky belly than adi...

Pinky and adi turn red in shy and embarrassment ...

But maan turn serious he come to pinky and mummer in soft voice can I touch once I want to feel them once he look with so much hope ...pinky took maan plam and put it on her belly and next moment pinky and maan eyes winded in shock when both feel kick on babies ...

Maan - they kick they know me ...know me he is almost jump on his place little bit away from pinky ...adi hug crying maan ...adi thought ...shyyed maan ka bachpan lot aaya in dono ke sath . maan childhood come back with babies .

And adi word come true maan s tart to live his childhood with this babies .

Next few month meera marriage and babies arrivel ...all is good in their life their life turn as bliss for everyone . specially maaneet .they decide that they have their own baby when adi baby turn 4 year...

Kuch agony life ko barab kar deti hai but aise hi agony main jo sath deta hai wahi soulmate hota hai like maaneet.

The end ...

Mahi ...


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look heera i fullfill my promise and give proper end to story and now i want to ask do get proper response ...for my work?


other updates



marriage mi...note and part 54 on page 15-25 july


Mg do kinare ya humrahi ... part 12 on 49 page -26 july


Edited by Mahimaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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How can someone be so cruel like mr. Khurana!!finally all is well, thank you for the wonderful story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excellent updates dear, maan is father such a cruel monster, who wants to destroy his sons life, but finally he got punished and maaneet living happily with their loved ones
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Posted: 8 years ago
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mind blowing update
lovely end of sad n painful story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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locvely update dhamaka update life was bliss for maaneet but not for long as maan dad came as storm in his life he target meera trying to manupilate her to get close to maan he send him videos that had sarted to affect maan he even hid abt theose videos to geet and his doc to create misunderstanding between maaneet maans dad made a fake video of meera and geet maan became furious meera was shocked she ran and maans dad pulled her in his cabin he lusted her and wanted to have her maan after talking to geet understood it was all hsi dads plan to ruin him he went out only to hear voices coming from his dads cabin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely and very interesting ending so man hearing voices entered the cabin and he wwas disgusyted to see his dad taking advantage of meera he punched him and took meera to hospital poor meera coz of the incident she lost her mental stabilty maan was wporried as he hid abt meera adi sugget to make meera met his dad so that she can come out iof hjer trauma thpough maan was scared but agreed poor him his punishment increased biut meera came out of trauma slapping the devil the doc who was traeting her was dev both fell in love and now when maan punishment finally over he came back to get shock that his brother had become a fther finally a good ending to a excellent story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all thank you so much for accepting my request and give proper ending
What I think about this story first I thought maan is criminal and heartless monsters but I got shock knowing geet soft corners for maan I was kiya mahan Hai yeh geet asey pati ko pyar Karti Hai
Same Eastern girl whom tought that husband is like God gree
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But when story fold and show maan childhood I felt like crying how pain fullhis childhood parents are blessings but after reading this I will say a good character parent are bless and honour for child

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