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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Part 38 - Lovely update. So new entry of Omkara Oberoi as ACP to find out who was behind maan's accident. The start was hilarious. Dev & adi were so scared of maan's scolding and his interrogation. But OSO saved them and he assured of catching real culprit.

Ye nakul ko abhi aana tha. Maan was going to confess and he interrupted their cute moment. Maan could not stay away from her. whenever he was near geet he starts drooling over her and keep watching her openly till his heart content.

OSO & ana's cute cat-fight was nicely spice uped the part. So they were childhood friends-cum-enemy. Would like so their love story.

Maaneet going to dance. Again maan lost in her and didn't see the chandelier falling on them. Hope both are ok. Seems someone from family wanted maan to be dead. Who could be that person.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Part 39 dev had suspicious on nt from the beginning but she was proved innocent besides her being responsible for noida site blast. She confessed everything to dev & omkara. And adi's call of attacking on maan again proved her innocent. To phir kaun ho sakta hai.? Ghar me to ab maan, geet, savera, annie, Vicky and vidyut. So my doubt is on vidyut or savera. Vidyut had motive to hurt maan but savera..? cant say.

What is this geet being killed saving maan...? And guruji said that both will be alright if they were together. then why this twist...was it a dream.? Please don't go on ekta's way and bring back ghost of geet, like that something.

Dadi was more scared about them after guruji predicting that death of someone.

Its becoming very exciting.

Please update next part soon.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Wow lovely thud thud emotional blissed update..omg their lovely moment was crushed wen te candellier fall on my maaneet and everyone was shocked but geet saved my maan and got hurt and my maan ki panick was lovely emotional..te way geet's words shows how much she love my maan and he kissing her fearing abt her words..te way my maaneet ki unconditional love making me speechless..omg still my maan wants to wait for three more days haan..omg wat is tat my maan crying seeing his geet leaving him,omg..te way dev and omkar trying to find te culprit and trapping nt but she was denying and now again attrack on my maan..te way guruji ki words startling dadi and making her to worry..i love te update

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Shocking update dear

Roller coaster update

Every minute maan's life in danger

Dev suspected NT behind all the happenings in maan's life but it was proved wrong

She wanted to destroy maan but backed off the moment she feared doing so !! If not NT is it Vidyut behind maan's life !?

Hope Guruji's words turn positive for maaneet

Geet's life is critical !! Hope nothing happens to her but maan's words are really alarming

Loved maaneet unconditional love for each other

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update

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sirisha16

@sirisha16

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Fabulous n shocking update. Who r attacking maan evertime. If Not is not culprit. Then who it is. Please clear the suspense.

No he kya Geet ko kya hua hai. Playback don't separate them .abhi who some life bhi shuru nahihn kiya. Old Feet ki kuchmuth hone dena. don't separate MAANEET.

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

You Distracted me because of Omkara...

The Fav character u use in your story i forget all the part and my whole concentration shifted to this character any way...

Last two chapter Attack on Maan i was pretty sure it's not NT at all... Vidyut suddenly apologised mera dimaag nhi maanta aur dil b nhi...

Dadima was worried and met the guruji and he said something which is really worryful

NT came in front of Dev but Attack already happened on Maan...

Really it's sad to see the loved one suffer and dieing is next to impossible

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Well the story is really a new one i have seen lot of ideas where Maan is always in denial...

here too he was but he never run away from her he try to make her comfortable every relation has it's own ups and down where Geet's past vidyut came but i don't think that he was a past because Geet never felt it was vidyut's delusion he really become a negative character slowly slowly...

Geet meeting vikram and feeling creepy then she was on verge of dieing but saved by Maan glad he came on time and after that for consoling her he did what was right... Maan was in denial and whatever conspired i won't say he is wrong in thinking sometime situation is wrong but I was glad that he had stopped in right time because it will become more complicated... Where maan left to make himself free from the unwanted guilt and all he came but NT played her cards and he said what he doesn't want to say and hurted her...

MAnaofying was amazing specially Vicky's line NO SMOKE OR DRUNK CHECK... NOT BUNKED CLASSES Checked didn't indulge in Fight check then why the hell bro wants to meet me lolzzz hillarious one🤣

and his list making was amazing lgta hai savera k liye apply karega... Finally he was successful in making her went out her frustration then... he also confessed what he was going through and apologised...

Maan's accident i had feared that he may loose memory glad you didn't make that track phew...

the love was strong and it wins too...

After the moments between them and the attacks and the scenes you write was amazing...

Hope i am able to summarize the thing...

P.S. I wish Vidyut must not have turned villain but you may never know what happens in life...

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Shocking update. Constant attacks on Maan and Geet always shields him from danger as Guruji says. Dev suspected NT to be behind those attacks but it turned out to be untrue. I have a strong doubt on Vidyut who may be planning to get rid of Maan to get Geet . The love Maaneet feels for each other is so deep and intense that anyone trying to separate them would be living in fool's paradise. Hope Geet is fine. Loved it.

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Things are getting really interesting ..eagerly waiting for mystry to unfold ..

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bina_a

@bina_a

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#200

This is a bigger twist then expected :o, but i feel like i can ALMOST guess who can be behind all of these troubles & attachs. And who wants sot get rid of Maan. I'm just not able to believe it. But I might be wrong with my guess. So will wait & see how you reveal it. And who teh actual culprit is.

Oh no... I almost forgot, I was reading the flashback right. So Geet is really dead is it?? Nah... hopefully not. Ab mujhe tension ho rahi hai yaar... please jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi next update dena. Pleaseee pretty 😳

PS; I love reading in HINDI. If possible continue with the way you are writing currently. But I guess there might be someone else who may need to read in English. Its alright I love your writing either ways 😉

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