MG SS- Tanhaiyan Part 4-pg 22, 04/06/17 - Page 6

Prologue - so maan & geet were married to different person. Maan wife left him leaving their daughter. And here geet;'s husband left her leaving their son with him. Aisa kya ho gaya ke geet ka pyar se bharosa uth gaya and maan s wife left him.?

It will be interesting to read how their tanhayian will turn into world of love.

CS - so maan was married to naina and they have one girl. Geet too married and her husband left her. but still her in-laws were supportive to her and not their son. How come geet's son's surname is handa.?

MG SS- Tanhayian

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Part 1

Hum khush the humare jahaa main

Saath uske guzaar rahe the hasin lamhe...

Humari nanhi jaan se zindagi gulzar thi

Uske aane se zindagi humari mehki thi...

Kyu tum chali gayi hume chod ke

Humare sapne ko adhura kar ke...

Tumhare gum ko chupaye rakha

Us nanhi jaan ke liye hasna fir sikh liya...

In the huge mansion he was sitting alone in his room.. The room had no light, darkness surrounding every corner of room but he did not care. He was used to it now in other words he loved this darkness actually. He just sat there immerged in thoughts about his life.. How happy he was to be with piya and his baby... Their life was like fairytale but then everything changed after that one incident. He still can't believe piya left him alone.. Left naina with him alone.. "Why God is punishing me like this..?? First He took my dadima away who was very dear to me. She was my friend, mentor, supporter everything, then he took away my love my soul from me.. Why me god..?? Why me..?? It's said that god take away the people who are his fav but what about our baby.. our naina.. Does she not require love..??? She is so small... How will she live without her mother..??"

"Paa... Paa open the room..." Maan's trance was broken when he heard the knocking and crying voice of naina calling him... He immediately rushed to switch on lights and went towards door to open it.. He saw naina rubbing her eyes and crying. He took her in his arms and hugged her... "Kya hua mele baby ko... Bad dream Dekha..??" Naina hugged him tight keeping her head in crook of his neck.. "umm.. Bad dragon tha.." He patted her back consoling her with sweet and soothing words.. " Kuch nahi tha shone.. bad dream tha.. My naina is strong na... She does not fear anyone.. Hai na..??" "Umm" Naina was in half sleep so again drifted to sleep when maan patted her back... He kissed on her shoulder and went near bed.. He made naina sleep on the bed.. Covered her with blanket and sat near her.. Maan thought how innocent she is looking in her sleep.. He kissed her forehead and cheeks saying gn to her and he also slept near her.. Naina is his light in the darkness.. Whenever she is around him she makes him happy.. Either she will play pranks on him by hiding and troubling him or she will talk too much till maan makes her shut with his tickling.. She is his life now.. He sees piya's reflection in her.. He can't forget piya and will never.. She was his everything...

"Veer... Veer Kaha hai tu..??? Dekh badmashi bahaut huyi teri.. Bahar aao abhi.. It's sleeping time baby.. Dekho mumma ko bhi nind aa rahi hai... Kal school jaana hai na mumma ko.. Please baby.." Geet was saying this 1o^th time now searching veer.. He was very naughty and was in playing mood.. He was hiding somewhere as geet was adamant to make him sleep. Veer was hiding in kitchen below the table.. He was smiling and listening to his mom shouting for him..

Gaurav: Kya hua geet... He was going to sleep when he heard geet shouting for veer..

Geet: Nothing papa.. Wo veer is in playing mood. I have school tomorrow so thought to make him sleep with me early but dekho na he is hiding somewhere now... I searched everywhere but ye veer mil hi nahi raha... She pouted like a child as if she is a child not veer..

Gaurav smiled hearing her complain.. He said he will search for veer with her.. Did you see in kitchen..???

Geet: Noo..

Gaurav: Wait I will go and see..

Gaurav went to kitchen searched veer.. Finally he heard a soft giggle from down of dine table... He sat down and saw veer there.. Before he could say anything veer spoke...

Veer: Daddu ssshhh... Don't tell mumma I m here.. Warna wo mujhe sleepy sleepy karne bolegi... Mujhe khelna hai abhi aur...

Gaurav: Ohh So mere Raj ko khelna hai.. but beta its late na.. and at night you should sleep early warna dragon aa jaayega tumhe daraane.. He said with a serious tone...

Veer: uff.. Ale mele pyaale daadu.. aap bhul gaye kya hume wo tv pe dekha tha na ki dragon ab nahi hai... They are not in this era daddu.. Lagta hai gf(girlfriend) ko bolna palega aap ko almon(almond) dene ke liye...

Gaurav was too shocked with his talks to react.. Till that time veer came out and tiptoed out of kitchen very slowly not to be catch by his mother.. but alas he was caught by geet.. Here geet was coming towards kitchen when she saw veer coming out of kitchen seeing here and there.. She went from back and caught him.. She took him in her arms...

Geet: Veer kyu satate ho mujhe itna.. Kitna search kiya tumhe meine... and Badmash what u said to daddu han...

Veer smile and said... Kuch nahi mumma.. Meine kuch nahi kaha.. Making innocent face.. Gaurav also came there and saw geet with veer..

Gaurav: Geet tumne iske time pe kya khaya tha.. Ye toh mujhe bhi nahi chodta.. Badmash... He said with naughty smile eyeing veer...

Veer: Daddu gf ko bolu kya aapne afternoon me mitha khaya tha...

Gaurav looked lil scared and said Mere Raj mujhe baksh de..

Geet: RajVeer Handa Is this a way to talk..??

Veer put his neck down and nodded his neck in no.. Sorry Daddu..

Gaurav: Ale mele baby ko kisne danta.. Mein toh aise hi bol raha tha geet..

Geet: I know papa but now a days he is becoming too naughty and we should control him lil...

Gaurav: Hmm Thik hai... I m going to sleep.. You also go and sleep... Gn..

He kissed veer and said gn to him.. Veer also kissed him and said gn.. geet took veer with her in room.. She made veer lie on bed and she also slept near him..

Veer asked "Mumma aap ko kal school kyu jaana hai.. aap toh chote nahi ho..??" Geet smiled at him and kissed his cheek.. He was looking so cute asking that question.. She said "mein tumhari miss ki tarah miss hu.. I teach in school.." Veer thought for a sec and said.. "Ohh matlab aap mere class me bhi sikhaoge mumma..??" Geet laughed at that and said "Yes I will.." Veer hugged her close and asked for a story.. Geet told him a story and he slept listening to it... Geet looked at him and thought.. "How cute and happy he is looking.." Sleep was far away from her.. Every night was like this for her.. She thought how her life has turned upside down in last 4 years.. She got married to her love Abir.. How happy she was with him.. She never saw her parents. She was raised in an orphanage.. But when she met abir she thought god gave her a chance to love and to be loved.. She got love of parents from her father and mother in law.. They always treated her as their daughter... But then after a year Abir started to behave strangely.. He used to get irritate on small small things and quarrel with geet.. When geet got pregnant she was very happy.. When she told abir that he is going to become a father he had very different emotions reflecting on his face.. He told to abort the child as he was not ready for that responsibility.. But geet was adamant and did not listened to him.. Later Abir went away saying he is going out of station.. But that same day when geet and her in laws went for baby shopping they saw Abir there shopping for baby.. They first got happy but then when they saw a pregnant girl talking and laughing with him.. They were shocked to the core.. None could say a word.. Geet went near abir and slapped him at once.. She did not say a word and came back home.. Her Father and Mother in law supported her so much in that phase.. They told their son to get out from the house and their life.. She never asked abir why he cheated her.. She was broken from inside but stayed strong for her child.. She knew she has to live for her child and her in laws who were her parents now.. She lost her trust in love and relationships.. For her love means her VEER.. Her motherhood.

Shaadi ke baad zindagi jaise badal gayi

Uske pyaar ke liye mein tarasti reh gayi...

Har pal mera vishwas toda usne

Humari pyaar ki nishani ko dekha tak nahi usne...

Pyaar khilne se pehle hi murza gaya

Akele mujhe chod ke wo kisi aur ka ho gaya...

Ye maasom jaan hi ab meri zindagi hai

Uske liye hi zindagi jeene ki chah hai...

Wo nahi hota toh shayad mein nahi hoti

Meri zindagi main fir khushiyo ki saugat nahi hoti...

Veer was her life and she need to stay happy for him.. Though she was sad thinking he will never get to see his father and would not get a love of father but its destiny.. We can't change it... Her life is changed now.. It revolved around veer only.. She had a smile on her face.. she hugged veer.. Kissed him and drifted to sleep..

Two souls were sleeping leaving their worries for now.. They didn't know their life is going to change... What they thought would never get will knock their door soon and this time it will make them happy forever.. Destiny has its own plan to execute...

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Precap: "Are You an angel?? Paa says god send angels to help small kids"

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@Note: Geet Did not want Abir anywhere related to VEER and She Hates his name so She Use Her Parents Surname And Her In Laws Understand the Reason of it...