With This Taveez (2) .. MG New * ch 13 pg 135* new thd link pg1 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi avi ..
Beautiful update ..
Bechara patidev getting jealous seeing something something in his wifey eyes for dev...getting irritated and blasting ..geet ke dil mein ladoo foote dev ke liye . .aree pehle Tara ko toh dekh le geet ...rajesh and Kiran lovely together . ..

Thank u for the update .
Waiting for next . .
Loving this maan a lot

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

The mother in law asks the fake daughter in law about her real boss who she has a real crush on and though they know she is fakely married to their son they are being ridiculously possessive about her personal life.

Then these two rich brats(can oldies in their goldies be called brats..well whatever.) These two parents of Richie Rich ask her about her roti kapda and makan situation.

Then the pride of the lioness comes to her rescue...(arey not the African lioness pride, she is not that kind of four legged prani no...It is the mumbaikar kind of two legged pride)

Phir she phenkofies ki I am doing work for like aivayin aiyan purposes.

Then Raj...naam toh suna hi hoga, keeps his dhai kilo ka haath on his fake daughter-in-laws puny but real head and makes 1 to ka 4...4 to ka 1 of her situation. Kaise bole toh...dekho, Darji handed Mumbai package to Old lady Khurana, who in turn has let her son handle the situation, who in turn is trying to reel in his real son to take permanent possession of the mumbai package and fake it only till he makes it.
Badle na char haath...ho gaya na one to ka four...four to ka one.

So package is sent to the Devils lair to lure him.

So our darling package receives call from The Devil who is using her as stress buster massage ball...and he hasn't even massaged her yet(huh...huh wink wink)

Massage ball turns into a prickly hedgehog and they go at it for some time, either over their iphones or androids(hmmm makes me wonder)

Mandatory snooty receptionsit type steps on the mumbai lionessess tail and long story short gets her rear end chewed out and the lioness ends up in the devils den.

Fake wife finds Devil's Den ridiculously chak a chak. Not a chewed bone in site. Then she sees him with his minions and thoda impress ho jati hai.

Tabhi woh receptionsit with half a bottom(arey other half got chewed out na) draws the devils attention to her and vamoosh...she is gone.

Now the devil may care dude gets to stress busting session part 2 and keeps rubbing her the wrong way...and he hasn't even touched her yet(huh...huh...wink wink) and our prickly hedge hog turns into a porcupine right there.
She threatens homicide but somehow Mr. Potato Head here ends up calling her a vine ripened tomato and typical woman that she is... her thoughts go to...well does this make my bottom look fat(well in a roundabout way since it all boils down to cheeks)

Can't wait for these two to get to the perfection of fries and ketchup stage. Uh huh!!

Accha Richie Rich ka Rich Raj calls him and tells his sonny boy to take the girlie to aag ka shola and give her barf ka gola(arey wahi tumhara fire and ice)

Mr. Potato head calls all the slimy ladyfingers on his list and tomato feels main yaha baithi hoon and he is asking other skinnies ki lets ketchup.

Then they go to the house of the lady who has pulled an Udai-phoor on everyone, especially on Geet's Kishore. Arey yaar he is her kishore prem(aka puppy love yaar)
So anyways Kishore ko dekh ke Tomato starts squirming all around and starts living up to her name(from my head to-ma-toes..)
And the sharp-eyed Devil notices... Aha!!!
Now he ponders on this Pati Patni aur Woh situation
And goes from Devil to a territorial dog in seconds and pees all around her to mark his territory...aka the tu Dev main Patidev hissyfit he throws.

Geet who is in the throes of buddhilop(infatuation supposedly...yeah her buddhi has really eloped this once) relegates the devil to the OMG...He is just a friend...not only that she downgrades him to a family friend.

Maan ki tubelight jal jati hai and he finds himself flat on his bum. Yeah well that tends to happen when overconfidence has the carpet pulled from under its feet.

But he the man...he ain't backing off. He sizes Kishore up and decides to drag him to aag ka shola, barf ka gola fiasco that is about to go down.
Mr. Potato head commands(big mistake...big...huge like Julia Roberts says in Pretty Woman) Tomato to the fiasco and obviously she tells him to piss off


Cause I am the champion and you're gonna hear me roar
Louder...louder than a lion
Cause I am a champion and you're gonna hear me roar

Mumbai lioness is back

The Devil is not backing off though
So now we are in a pickle
The Devil is going and so is kishore, the ladyfingers are also swinging by, but what about the lioness?

Ok I have never ever found a more difficult task than this summary thing
I think next time I will stick to analyzing instead of summarizing.
Yep... Yeh apna chai ka pyala nahi re baba😆








Lol lol lol...dis made my day...i am still reeling in d after effects of readibg dis comment...homicide...aag ka gola...geet ka kishore...ha ha ha ha...😃...
Mmaaannn...firstly kudos to whoever dis is ...who has written dis...👏...how did u even think of all dis ya...
Secondly...such a romantic story written by a writer who is veteran in writing such passionate stories...who makes us fantasize maan even in our dreams...and dis comment ...literally stripped d story and eevry character...i am very much honest here wen i tell i forgot wat i had to comment...my thoughts went hay wire reading dis...😆 ...the best hs to be maan s territorial insticts...dat moment wen v are suppose to sigh and fantasize and drool wen maan acts all possessive about his gal...u described his claim as peeing around d gal...u seriously related maan with a dog...🤣...dat has to be d epic highlight of d comment...
welll.done ya...superb...👏😉...i think i ll read it once more later on...

so i am going to come back in a while after gathering my thoughts to comment...


Edited by nish285 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Kiran was not so happy hearing dev's
name from geet and geet blushing
Says she had a crush on her
Raj told geet it is not safe for her to
Go alone and to go with maan
Maan who was a different person
In office and a totally different in front
Of her
Maan calling his friends for the club
Opening his behavior to know dev
Very interesting he is not liking the
Idea of geet going with dev
Waiting for the next update

Thanks for the pm and pw
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Avi thread 2 🥳
OMG i'm so trying to get the celebration mood going but its so hard right now, i'm in so much pain. Went to a wedding y'day and my heels, actually me as a whole 😆 in pain
thats the reason i hate wedding and nagging circles of middle-aged ladies.
The whole how old are you, pisses me off. I can be 60 for all they care 😡
any way just needed to get that off my chest before chap 7, my foul mood might not do any favours on Maan (somewhat my punching bag, although i do love him here😳)
Crazy wacko guys are so cool 😆 This Maan's crazy the the way he riles Geet up 😉😆 and i love that 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG's just noticed my apples back, how and when😲 i actually lost hope of it ever coming back
Now thats got me going😆

Chap 7

You know seeing two links from you excited me so much, and then deflated like a pin to a balloon😭😆. Starts off with Dev, Kiran's alarmed and Raj, he's so stuble. He's also worrying but with an invisibility cloak. I totally get Geet trying to hide her financial status, they haven't yet made it to her trusted list which i cant blame her for. But I do love Raj here, his ... i don't know how to explain it. His a father, daddy, dad, papa you get the jist right. A father, and we all love our fathers ❤️ His just a prime example

Geet still trying to waddle out of this, Maan i believe isn't making it any easier with his constant BIWI triade, the girl wants to forget and he sure isn't letting her 😆 Gosh he'll be annoying to know in reality, in fiction though his very endearing 😉😆 ofcouse not for Geet 😆

He's started again through the phone, will he ever give a rest😆 wait wait wait wait do i want him to give it a rest hmmm hope never, i like it as it is 😆 do i sound mean in mocking Geets current sitiation😕 i don't do I. Geet my girl is going through crap all because of a guy, whom is kinda charming 😲 oh no i never 😆

Funny thing i've just listened to that song, they had been blasting it through in the hall y'day, that too on repeat. By the end i had a headache, so no cheeze was most definitely not mast 😆 or mast mast😆

The receptionist seemed irritating, the whole SIR thing like yes we know he owns the business but woman Geet isn't an employee nor would she ever think along those lines, not for now atleast especially with him being a total creep in her eyes😆 hang on plump girl = pinky, i'm i right? 😊

shoot he's startedd again, the whole sweetheart thingy like is he serious and studying at night 😆 his totally overbearing, i'm hating that i'm liking Geet's situation 😳

Calling up a dozen chicks just to peeve Geet off, i reckon he was doing that just fine before 😆 and now girls. I feel sorry for him, painting a bad image especially with Dev coming. Man he needs to wisen up

hahha Dev, and a shy Geet. So Maan realises somethings up, phew i hadnt thought he'd realise but he did and now his planning. Jealousy hmmm😆
he'd probbaly stop irrittaing her or do more of it😆

Thanks for a awesome part Avi


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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
So geet is begani shaadi mein abdulla deewana,dev com for tara and geet madam bekar mein hi deewani hui ja rahi hai,I can't stop saying that I love naughty maan too much.
Update sson.
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Posted: 8 years ago
7 wow I can see possessiveness in maan for geet when she shies seeing geet...he can see that geet likes dev, but then dev loves tara...wonder why they have a MU...and what is geet doing in-between them...hi sweetie focus on your maan instead and bring your friend and your boss together...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
Love the way maan always irritate geet by small things and mr and mrs khurana also wanted geet to accept as there dil
Thanks for pm & pw
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow nice update

maan is totally irritating

maan is jealous of dev

geet felt bad when maan started calling each and every girl he know

loved the office part

i didn't know maan would be this much jealous

thanks for the update

thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ch-7
This Maan may be irritating ,annoying for Geet but we are enjoying his teasing. Of course, our Mumbai ki sherni bhi kam nahin.
Why Raj papa is so caring towards Geet now but not before. For Dadimaa they are happily married. It means she Is unaware of Geet's financial condition. I don't think Maan's parents were bearing expenses of Geet till now. So why now... tumhe kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet. Tum jaanti ho na tumhare Darji ne tumhari zimmerdari Ma ke haatho mein di hai. Ab Ma se nahi toh mujhse, tum jab chaho jo chaho maang sakti ho, right?"
May be because Geet is doing so much for Dadimaa..
It is a human tendency...we don't care for the person or thing which we have with us but as soon as we are on the verge of losing the thing or the person ,only then we understand their importance. After seeing Geet's liking towards her boss Dev... our possessive Munda jaag utha.
Loved the update Thankyou so much.

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