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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

such a beautiful shot..
a short one, but indeed a shot of life..
the 'may be tomorrow' happens with almost everyone in many situations..
though there is an escape from today and one may or may not get across it..but there is also a hope for the best to happen tomorrow..
loved it :)

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago

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Cumberben2

@Cumberben2

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: its_me
There isn't a question... Anybody who reads it would love this short n sweet try of a desperate yet anxious soul...

Lovely piece of work...

Keep writing !!!

Thank you ! for such a warm welcome .

You are right with anxious soul.

I hope to write more let see where it goes 😛

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Cumberben2

@Cumberben2

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
such a beautiful shot..
a short one, but indeed a shot of life..
the 'may be tomorrow' happens with almost everyone in many situations..
though there is an escape from today and one may or may not get across it..but there is also a hope for the best to happen tomorrow..
loved it :)

I am glad you found this up to your taste.

Thanks :)

Situations can be peculiar at times , right?

Thanks again.

Edited by Cumberben2 - 8 years ago

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Cumberben2

@Cumberben2

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

@ Veil - I literally had to read your comment on the OS in between the lines😛 Thanks! for giving such a warm response hope to see you around.

Edited by Cumberben2 - 8 years ago

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: cumberben

I m glad that you can associate with the character.
Don't worry you will find your way to your he soon.
Thank you for your appreciation!

nah 😆 right now don't want a he, all i care about is for my train and bus to be on time 😉
and you're most welcome
See you around

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Cumberben2

@Cumberben2

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

^^I totally understand your stance. I for one will run for my train as the 2 min are very precious to me and Maggie😆😛

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: cumberben

Done that? regrets ?or tomorrow did materialize?

English teacher! Nope my attention span plus patience adds up to bare minimum 😆

I was talking about such situations in general when I have chickened out. Not about a particular situation 😆

Somehow the whole tomorrow reminded me the song from Annie

The sun will come out tomorrow

So you got to hang on 'til tomorrow, come what may!

Tomorrow, tomorrow, I love you tomorrow

You're always a day away😉

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Cumberben2

@Cumberben2

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

@ Susegad-Humble apologies! to pick up on (pun intended) the most cliched aspect of the OS .😛

I just get adrenaline rush out of it. 😆u know

posing all those Did you ever question at readers.😆

Annie? Dude you know so much!

PS -are you updating today ? I want to see the consequences !

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Cumberben2
^^I totally understand your stance. I for one will run for my train as the 2 min are very precious to me and Maggie😆😛

ahh the precious 2 mins😆 understood 😉
there's this particular bus driver were every sec counts, the mean jerk drives off the second i reach for the door and laughs in my face, i've even stopped running for that bus now
atleast that way a fall is broken 😉😆

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Cumberben2

@Cumberben2

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

ahh the precious 2 mins😆 understood 😉
there's this particular bus driver were every sec counts, the mean jerk drives off the second i reach for the door and laughs in my face, i've even stopped running for that bus now
atleast that way a fall is broken 😉😆

What a meanie! I hope the missing bus or train nightmare haunts him once. It will set him right!