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Veil

@Veil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

^Dayum.

I just opened my big mouth and inserted my foot. Lol. Sorry for jumping to conclusions.

A bit weird start though, but pleased to meet your acquaintance.

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Veil
^Dayum.
I just opened my big mouth and inserted my foot. Lol. Sorry for jumping to conclusions.

A bit weird start though, but pleased to meet your acquaintance.

No! not at all its amazing how you tumbled upon my comment here and came outright to deny any association with the story.. A rare quality nowadays where people are hungry to fake And take away other's credit😆

Please to meet you too

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Love the title
Can totally associate with this girl here. trains, tracks and stations: practically lived in them for the past few years 😆 however haven't ever come across the likes of a he, the one that makes the heart beat faster 😆 maybe because I'm always tuning, wishing not to be missed lol. Here we can't chase after a bus never mind a closed off train unlike some other lucky places or shall I say the movies lol

So she bottled in the end, a good enough attempt for me though 😆 at least she tried 😉

Beautifully written
Welcome to GF and do write more 😃

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

There isn't a question... Anybody who reads it would love this short n sweet try of a desperate yet anxious soul...

Lovely piece of work...

Keep writing !!!

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MrsBenedict

@MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sundari.
Hate it ... Absolutely no!!!

It's lovely, i wish i had more time to admire n analyse ur eloquence, but would concentrate on the plot for now,

It's very difficult to give words to ur feelings sometimes, with the fear of words not being able to do proper justice to them, and then there's always a tomorrow! Only the fear of no tomorrow can make a person confess!

Thanks for your lovely response :)

the poor girl here is too optimistic , hence for her tomorrow is always there.

Thanks again !

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MrsBenedict

@MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Commelina
This one shot is true for all kinds of confessions no?

There are times we want to take a step ahead but we are too afraid of the outcome

NOT TODAY MAYBE TOMORROW

Absolutely loved it !
I have always admired writers who are able to tell volumes in just a few words.

Keep writing!

Hope to see you around more often.

PS- not a writer? Are you sure about that?

Thanks! this procrastination applies to every situation.

Aww once again I m grateful for such warm words.

I hope to see myself around here too :)

PS -I solemnly declare my status as a non -writer!😛

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MrsBenedict

@MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lizzy84
Cumberben? That sure ring bells. 😛
Awesome os! I want more of this .
Are u new to forums or just said goodbye to the veil? 😆
Hope to see you with more such stories.

Do I have another Mrs Benedict Cumberbatch here😛

Thanks!

Guilty as charged but I finally left the ghoonghat for good.

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: cumberben

Do I have another Mrs Benedict Cumberbatch here😛
Thanks!
Guilty as charged but I finally left the ghoonghat for good.

A through through fan😳

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MrsBenedict

@MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Susegad
Chicken little's heart couldn't handle the sky falling on her that day. So she ran.
Totally empathize with her predicament though😆

Been there done that.

P.S Are you an English teacher by any chance?😛

Done that? regrets ?or tomorrow did materialize?

English teacher! Nope my attention span plus patience adds up to bare minimum 😆

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MrsBenedict

@MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: DaftGirk
Love the title
Can totally associate with this girl here. trains, tracks and stations: practically lived in them for the past few years 😆 however haven't ever come across the likes of a he, the one that makes the heart beat faster 😆 maybe because I'm always tuning, wishing not to be missed lol. Here we can't chase after a bus never mind a closed off train unlike some other lucky places or shall I say the movies lol

So she bottled in the end, a good enough attempt for me though 😆 at least she tried 😉

Beautifully written
Welcome to GF and do write more 😃

I m glad that you can associate with the character.

Don't worry you will find your way to your he soon.

Thank you for your appreciation!