Knight on Ninety Horses-Short Story-Note Pg 102 Dec 1, 2017 - Page 53

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Posted: 8 years ago
Just read the note.
Jaldi thik hojaao
I will wait 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 1 - Lovely start nisha. So story's background is of 90's. it would be interesting to see how maan & geet will be. The start with chandni and adi's dialogues were funny. He was asking such question to maan and maan was avoiding him. Agreed to see the pic in goa.

So they were going to goa and his mom instructed to visit anna's family. First he was not interested but then knowing they have 15 year old girl then he was excited. So both will meet soon.

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Part 2 - Liked adi's new avtar. Watching all half clad girls at beach. He was on study tour and this is what his study going on. lol.

Kapus... cat's name. Mala avadle. Lol. What was her welcome. She assumed him some salesman. Achcha tamasha bana diya apna maan ke samne. Chatter box geet ki botli band knowing who was he.

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Part 3 - Bombay duck...lol. So she showed his sleeves to meera and was commenting. Meera seemed more sensible and mature. She was angry on meera that she did not let her read so she was going out to find her father.

Maan also wanted to accompany but what was her condition...lol.. oh... dosti bhi ho gayi bet fashionista and Bombay duck

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Part 4 - geet is right being in 10th std means so many restrictions from own family and from far families too.

Meals & Bone...rofl...

Mai too brought Bombay duck, a skinny fish. Now maan must know why she call him Bombay duck. Poor geet...buri phas gayi.

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Part 5 - oh.. maan didn't like fish and mohindar was forcing him to eat more. But geet was smart and asked her mom to bring another plate full of dal, curry and roti for maan praising her own style of eating. She threw the fish with roti under the table which kapus had eaten all. this kapus had to settle his score with geet so he tried to bite her but his hand get scratched with its nail.

Geet is full of entertainer in the house. Maan could not stop laughing on her craziness.

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Part 6 - Lovely banner Sameera. So mehfil jam gai on dinner table. Mohindar telling his life's stories and geet was reminding one after another. Then she started with her stories. maan never got bored with all this.

The brushing part was funny. After dinner again all sat to talk and he fel jealous seeing all of them to close specially the sisters and mother. He adored them a lot.

She was sad and all teary to know that he leaving.

He asked for group photo. She asked him roll on his shirt sleeves in the remembrance of this funny time. It must be his one of the best moment of his life that he met geet and her family.

So time passed on and he was remembering all this seeing that photo. He was eager to meet her again to attend a wedding in their family.

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Part 7 - wow... what a lovely part. I liked geet in this whole story. Seems her taste of fashion has changed. She has become mature than earlier. She was upset seeing her old type dress with big flowers on chest under the name of fashion. "Was it to cover or to draw attention to her flatlands?"...Lol.

She could not sit quite at one place. She made jiju to open series of boxes inside another and found out two melodies inside the matchbox. I liked Mahesh jiju. He was sweet with geet and her mischievous.

Oh...here comes Bombay-duck-maan who stole geet's line melody khao khud jaan jao.

So waiting to see their meet...can't wait more now. Please update soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Catwomania, ki haal chaal hai?
I hope you are feeling thoda better now :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hats off to you writers
Out of the world update
The naughty brat that geet is
Taking revenge from her jiju
Though she liked him
Very smart use of the
Dhoondte rah jaaaoge
And
Melody khao khud jaan jaao
And about the dress
With Rossetti
What Maan is going to say?
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