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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: cumberben

Disclaimer - first and foremost I suck at commenting on stories that's why I prefer to lurk around .

But I had to break my silence today and I did .

The late 80's and onset of 90's
I wonder why you chose this setting.
You sure have way with the words, I am hooked up with your story.
Can't wait for this intriguing 18 year old (aka ex- brat) .

Waiting for more!

PS - I love your username!

You are kidding right when you say you suck at commenting?(casting a glance around for the sarcastic smiley)
I chose that time period coz that is my absolute favorite era of all time.
Why are you assuming it's the 18-year-old brat?😆

Thanks for the accolades. Hope I really live up to it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
ehh lo.. mere comment karne se pehle hi Like kar diya aapne😆
badi jaldi hain...

ok ab edited.
phir mujhe mat bolna k i talked shit😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Kiski hai aahat

Kiska hai saaya
Dekho chaand aaya
Chaand nazar aaya

😆

Hello there!

****

Sridevi is hot man! She is. Whether be it in Lagi aaj Sawan ki fir woh jhadi or English Vinglish Navrati.

And then that song
Tut gayi tut ke main chur ho gayi
Tera jadu chal gaya oh jaadugar

I liked this Adi-manav😆
He wolf whistles, is a cricket fanatic and is your next door guy. I hope we see Adi in future episodes too.

Then the uncle's story is quite interesting. Ran away from home when he was fifteen. Then went on to become a teacher. I love teachers you know. It's sad we live in a age where's it's uncool to respect teachers and not call them by their given names. But I had read a Hindi story long back. Mastersaheb.

So the story was like this that Vinayak, is a misfit
He is teased by his class fellows. And it is this geography teacher who adores him and makes him incharge of his class. So Vinayak always waits for Geo period. It is the existence of Master Saheb and Geo period that gives him something to look forward to and makes his school life brighter and a little bit easier.
So years later Vinayak returns to school as a Principal and the teacher is still there. Mastersaheb has aged and he is often found dozing off during classes. Vinayak finds this situation uncomfortable and disconcerting. One day he is on a round and Mastersaheb is as usual sleeping in the class while the class is a chaos. Children are fighting. He shouts, "Mastersaheb" and his former teacher and present employee he immediately gets up and ashamed doesn't meet Vinayak's eyes.
Later, Vinayak feels extremely ashamed of himself about shouting at his teacher. Bare footed, he goes to find his teacher in a summer afternoon and falls at his feet crying for forgiveness.
Master saheb draws his student in his arms. Later through Vinayak's recommendation, Master Saheb is transferred to a primary school as the Principal.

I went off topic I know. But I had fallen in love with this story when I had read it.


Now coming back to uncle, I am looking forward to meeting him. He seems like an adventurous man. A man of principles too.😊

And Sir jee as in Maan, he's being the typical young lad in not wanting to meet the relatives.
Beta do bacche hai unke mil lena, toffee bhi le ke jao kya bacchon ke liye
Kahaan hamein Goa ki sundariyon ke darshan karna tha...kis jhamele mein pad gaye

And then mention of two girls
15 and 18

Shayad rishtedaari nibhane ka khyaal
Mummy ko aaya hai
Isliye mummy ne meri
Mithai ke dabbe ke sath
mujhe tumhara ghar
Bhijwaya hai...😆


Ek athrah varas ki hooo
Ek pandrah varas ki
Na jane Sir jee ka dil kis par aayega

What a start Di!

Nabbe dashak ki baat hi kuch aur thi
And you know I feel I am living in the wrong era
Mujh jaisi kamsin majbut kali, jiski aadayein Sridevi se kam nahi uska Padukone or Chopra yug mein kya kaam

Vaise dekha jaye toh hamara janam toh Darcy era me
hi ho jana chahiye tha
I have fine eyes too. Quite a lot of gentlemen would have meditated on the very great pleasure which a pair of fine eyes in the face of pretty woman could bestow 😆😆

I am chand alright, and that too poonam ka chand in all it's fat, round glory😆

Adhi-Manav hehehehe. That man's thought process can really be primitive sometimes, so the name suits him perfectly😆

I have lived with two teachers all my single life and my respect for teachers is double fold for this reason.

English gentry take an unnecessarily long time to put pomade on their hair and tie those damn cravats and pull those long boots on, all the while crooning muje sajna hai sajna ke liye So just be a little patient with the guy. He is probably on his way o kamsin kaddu😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

res
okay... celebrations are a priority in my life...
3...2...1...

ME FIRST!!!

and since you are here after a long long lonnggg time...
*ahem ahem.. clears throat*
tum aa gaye ho... tho noor aa gaya hain
nahin tho charagon se...lau jaa rahi thi...
Jeene ki tumse wajeh mil gayi hain
Badi bewajeh zindagi ja rahi thi
Tum aa gaye ho noor aa gaya hain

han bhai... tho kya chal raha hain...
Maan and Adi watching Cricket!!!❤️ my reactions on this very updt are going to be so obvious di😆 to watch tendulkar batting is a treat🤪
Chandni movie dekhi nahin... but i know the story plus that sawan ki jhadi song bhi nahi suna...
but ek gaana aata hain..
rang bhare badal se.. tere naino ke kajal se...meine iss dil pe likh diya tera naam
chandni... oh meri chandni...😆
Maan gearing up for goa to meet the 18 year old sundari be like- Goa is on! Goa is On!
Go Goa...! (wo Goa tourism ka song yaad hain na?)😆
but kismat bhi badi kutti cheez hain... kabhi bhi palat sakti hain😉

bahut dialog baazi ho gayi aaj meri..but it excites me all the more because of the timeline of the story which includes handwritten notes.
You know my love for those, don't you?❤️

I too have recieved one in my life... 😳😉 only one till now but even that is special...☺️ aapko tho pata hi hain😆😆

so, maan meeting the brats in the next! totally excited to read. I can literally hear Chulbul Pandey's voice in my head- Swagat nahin karoge humara?🤣

next updt soon pls😃


Sahi mein Noor aaya hai kya? Let me check on my doorstep😆
I have a foodie friend named Noor and that is the only Noor I know😆

Sacre Bleu!!! You haven't watched Chandni and cheery on top, you haven't watched Lage aaj zawan ki song. Hawww!!!😲
Go run and watch the song right now woman or not. I dont care either ways😆

Kis gadhe ne bheja tumhe handwritten note?😆
That person needs their head examined...or maybe not. I don't care either ways.😆

Chulbul Pandey se pehle hum unke Prem bhare chocolate abs pe fida ho gaye the. Just saying not that you should care either ways

🤣

Ok no more.
But really go watch the song woman
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Susegad


Sahi mein Noor aaya hai kya? Let me check on my doorstep😆
I have a foodie friend named Noor and that is the only Noor I know😆

Sacre Bleu!!! You haven't watched Chandni and cheery on top, you haven't watched Lage aaj zawan ki song. Hawww!!!😲
Go run and watch the song right now woman or not. I dont care either ways😆

Kis gadhe ne bheja tumhe handwritten note?😆
That person needs their head examined...or maybe not. I don't care either ways.😆

Chulbul Pandey se pehle hum unke Prem bhare chocolate abs pe fida ho gaye the. Just saying not that you should care either ways

🤣

Ok no more.
But really go watch the song woman



Gadha???!!!
hehehehehe not saying anything there... giving you benefit of doubt😆
watched the song... that woman was hot... 😉
tabhi adi was so excited...
I am not into movies... tho you really can't expect me to know a lot about them😎
am a dumbo when it comes to movies.😃
Prem and his abs... reminds me of another song.. ahem ahem...
*coughs in madhuri dixit ishtyle.*
will save that for later use😆 abhi time nahi hua hain uska😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
SO anyone wants another update?😉
Edited by Susegad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is officially the first day of spring today and I am mentally sitting on that bench with my morning cuppa of tea. 😃

Here's wishing you all bright sunny skies and cool breezes with sips of bracing hot chai😉


Knight on Ninety Horses
Chapter 2

"Hey Maan, why don't I tag along with you?" Adi put an arm around Maan's shoulder.

"Oh that's quiet alright Adi. You'll just be bored meeting my uncle, his wife and kids. Also, they have invited me for dinner and I'm not sure it would be polite to show up with an unexpected guest. I will meet up with them and be back in a few hours. Why don't you just hang out with the other guys. I'll be fine."

"Ok then. Enjoy your boring dinner. We'll not miss you at all. See you later in the evening at the hotel room."
Maan shook his head as Adi slapped him on his back and walked away, feet sinking into the soft silvery sands of Colva beach.

He'd met Adi in the first year of college while standing in the queue outside the main office of their university. He had cut in line and when other students had started protesting, he'd put his arm around Maan's shoulder and said that they were best buddies and that Maan had been holding his place in line for him. His eyes had pleaded with Maan's to go along with the small fib to which Maan had just grinned and nodded. That had gained him the lifelong friendship of one Adhish Nanduri, better known as Adi.

They were third year, Mechanical Engineering students of Osmania University, Hyderabad and were on a so-called industrial tour in the picturesque state of Goa. Thay had not visited any industries so far, however according to Adi the tour was a success coz he had industriously watched all the pretty ladies on the beach.
Maan grinned and wondered what kind of people the uncle and his family were.
He just hoped he did not end up feeling bored.
Geet was having a hell of a time. The stupid cat was refusing to come down off the roof and howling crazily from the tiled rooftop.
She was balanced on a tin box they used for storing rice and extended the handle of a broom towards the cat for the umpteenth time. The cat moved further behind.

"I am not going to hit you with it, you stupid cat. This is a lifeline I'm offering you. Stop howling and come here right now."
The cat refused to budge. Just then her mamma called out.
"Geet, let that cat be. It will come down on its own. Come help me with the rotis."
"Roti." Geet yelled.
She ran to the kitchen and grabbed a roti.
"Geet where are you going with that? Come back here right now."
"Just one minute mamma."

Geet tied the roti to one end of the broom got back on the tin box and slowly extended it towards the cat.
"Here Kapus. Here meow. Come sweety, see what I have. "
Kapus inched forward slowly, intrigued by the smell of the ghee wafting from the warm roti. As soon as he was within arm's reach, Geet tried to make a grab for him. He turned and started climbing back up. Geet yanked on his tail which was within reach. The cat meowed loudly, slipped and ended up in Geet's arms, scratching her wildly in the process. Geet was unbalanced and landed hard on her butt, her arms full of cat, a broom and a roti. Her arms and butt were stinging like hell.

Just then she noticed a pair of sneakers right next to her. Her gaze traveled up a pair of cotton trousers, to a short-sleeved shirt with the cuffs folded up.
What kind of crappy fashion was that, she wondered. He was skinny as hell and had no biceps to speak of. The upturned shirt sleeves looked almost comical hanging from his shoulders. That is when she saw the large bag on his shoulders and her eyes narrowed.
She jumped up to her feet. Kapus had long since escaped. She was hurting and mad. Geet picked up the broom and pointed the handled end at the young man standing in front of her.
"I don't care what you are selling, whether it is sarees, bedsheets, soaps, sanitary napkins or whatever junk. I neither want free samples nor do I want to buy anything. I'm sure you'll find far kinder people in that house there than here. She vaguely pointed out to a random house in the neighborhood.

"Your arm is bleeding and your butt's probably hurting too." He pointed out drolly.
She gasped.
"I'll take care of my arm and my posterior, thank you very much and I still don't want any samples."
"Ok then." He shrugged and walked to their front door instead of walking away from it.
"Oh hello, where do you think you are going?" Geet called out.

Just then her mamma came out to see where Geet had gotten to.
She looked at the young man and smiled gently.
"Oh Maan your'e already here. Welcome beta welcome. Do come in." She grabbed his hand and started petting it gently. "Uncle has gone to the bus stop to pick you up. You must have missed each other."
Geet who was a few steps behind and hadn't heard their exchange yelled,
"Mamma I already told him we are not looking to buy anything, so please don't pity him as usual and get conned into buying stuff that we don't want or need."
"Geet!! Shut up."
"Oh alright!! Maybe one thing is ok, since it is so late in the evening and he seems to be desperate."
"Geet I will hit you with that broom if you don't shut your mouth right now." Her mamma whispered urgently under her breath and then continued loudly.
"Geet he is not a salesman. He is aunt Shalu's son, Maan. He is the guest we've been waiting for."
"Oh fuc..."


Edited by Susegad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
😛

F.I.R.S.T.⭐️⭐️
Yuuhooo

out of everything in the update...let me start off with the most *important* thing.

ALL HAIL MIGHTY KAPUS
the god has made an entry...make way...make way!!!🥳

So, Mechanical Engineering eh?!! We have too many jokes on those people but I will shut up because in general, all engineers have jokes on them.🤬
Every guy becomes industrious in Goa... doesn't he? I recall my guy friends going on a trip to Goa and sending us pictures of girls on beaches on whatsapp and of course the infamous alcohol!😆

Finally, Maan is there at the doorstep of his destiny😆 a disaster queen destiny with a broom and roti and a might kitty and is mistaken as a salesperson!
Gosh, I need the courage to shoo away those salespersons like Geet does... that woman has already set goals for me. I need to learn that art of shooing!

But of course, they say first impressions are the last impressions and I cannot wait to see what more impressions they create on each other. Maan was lucky that his aunt came to the rescue warna tho geet usey ghar se bhaga hi leti.

and here comes the famous maa ka dialog, "Pitai with a broom."
Isme mera bahut experience!😎 kabi fursat se poori details mein uss pitai ki experience and the kind of emotions I went through those moments (pain tho normal baat hain..) bataungi. ahh those beautiful memories... (of course of my mom...)

Ohh Fuc...
Don't say it.Don't say it Geet. Your mom is going to screw you.
the meeting was bang on di... sparks flying already but yet to see who realizes it first. 😉😉
and jhalli geet... tera kya hoga kaliya?😆 the threads of fate has already been tangled...
ab bach ke kahan jaoge bachu?!😃

next updt kab?kab? kab?
humko... aaj kal hain...intezaar...
koi aaye leke pyaar...(read update)😃

till you updt the next, back to the *bugging you* mode.😎
idhar se phooting... warna aap meko jutte maarke bhagaying...




Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Spam spam spam... spam spam zamaana bole😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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tumko dekha tho... ye khayal aaya...
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dilbara...eh dilbara... apun ki tu...apun tera..
tujhse dil lagaun mein bhi family banaun
ab yahi tho bas iraada hai mera...

dunno why but iss maan ke liye filhaal mere dimag mein yehi gaana chal rha hain😎
Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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