Knight on Ninety Horses-Short Story-Note Pg 102 Dec 1, 2017 - Page 12

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

First of all,

I love you.

Love me like you do, la la love me like you do. Ok further than that I won't sing I think. That would have to be a whole different forum.

But me lubs ya more than more...in a very sisterly kind of way of course😆

Aakhir aapko yaad aa hi gayi, ye choti behan jisko aapke stories ka behad intezaar hai.

All hindi speaking states threw up in their mouth reading my Hindi, didn't they?

Not at all. You said that perfectly...in Hinglish of course. Can't really say about your Hindi now can I?😆

This had been such an amaaazing chapter mainly because it had been that one moment when the foundation was laid no?


Let's just come to Maan pulling her pony tail first. Having a pony tail and male cousins all the freaking time in my house, I know the problems of it. Oh, recently some colleague of mine did that too. What, do people think of my pony? What does men think of any pony ever?

Horse's back end? They like the buns better. I meant the one we put up on our heads woman. Stop giggling.

But you see guys going around with man buns these days?

Hmm that makes me wanna write a story with a man bun hero I think😆

My brother once told me why they are called pony and told people compare girl's hair with a tail and I was little so i ended up crying for the insult.😆

Aww you poor baby. Siblings are a mean bunch I tell ya

I hate boys, honestly.

Anyway, when Maan described her pony tail, I laughed out loud.

And dont even get me started about the F bomb. My brother hates it and I screamed it once when we almost had an accident. I am so glad he was so freaked out by the almost accident that he didn't notice. Strange how no matter how much of a badass we are, before our elder sibling, we are that silent kid who would obey to everything they say (or at least pretend to )

Yep and those hero worshiped gods trampled happily on our fragile hearts with their superiority complexes


Also Bombay duck is a sort of fish no? Why is he called as Bombay duck.

Oh the tale of the Bombay duck has just begun. That's all I will say😆

A Hyderabadi Hero. God, can life get any better?

Technically...well never mind. I still like Mahesh Babu better😎

Love you like I do la la love you like I do

🤗

Originally posted by: lizzy84

I literally rubbed my eyes when I tumbled upon this update.

Thank you for updating!

I can't stop laughing at the whole salesman confusion with Geet flat on her behind.

So geet is the fifteen year old brat, I hope Maan stop being intrigued by the 18 year old!

You always steal away hearts of your readers with your spontaneous humor and wit blend with good plot.

Can't wait for more.

Waiting.

Originally posted by: Cumberben2

Inteha ho gai, intezaar ki
Aai na kuchh khabar, mere yaar ki
Ye hamen hai yaqeen, bevafa vo nahin
Phir vajah kya hui, intezaar ki, inteha ho...😛

Originally posted by: Susegad

I got a species called Husbandry at home which is more Animal than human and subah uthke usse chara paani dena padta hai😆

So now I am done with my morning chores, andam back to my more important forum pe story updating stuff😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

Originally posted by: Susegad

I got a species called Husbandry at home which is more Animal than human and subah uthkeussecharapaani denapadtahai😆

So now I am done with my morning chores, andam back to my more important forum pe story updating stuff😆

Originally posted by: cumberben

2nd Runner up . That will do for me I was never the one with sporty genes so yaa!

Did I just make a huge mockery out of myself for pining for the 'older-18-year -intriguing -subject -for -ex salesman' ?

Did you now? Maybe...maybe not..,but then again maybe😆

The interior monologue of Maan in the the beginning was a read treat

"She had a fat pony tail swinging mightily just like any self- respecting horse's bushy tail."- I refrain from doing this quote and comment ritual but this one had to come here I was having a mad Rolf moment reading this .

His pony epiphany sent me into hysterics! freaky kapus made Maan's and my day.

Guys and ponytails not a pretty combination. It calls out to some primitive urge in them. Have you dangled a thread before a cat?Yep a reaction akin to that😆

Now for the cringe worthy fashion disaster of Maan, I can't help but imagine Maan in hipster loud shirt with shabby sleeves and doing Mithun's Disco song.

No loud shirts and definitely no Mithun in Disco. Loved Mithun in Disco dancer btw😉

This Maan dude's got two lefter than left feet. More on that later.😆

Mayday! Mayday!

Kisses for the Meera for coming to the rescue of Maan.

This knight sure has a weird Armour !

PS - have a great laugh at my expense! over

I - m - pining - for -18 -year -old- brat.

I am a all- show -no -know It -all.

PPS- you are so easy to please

😉

Some people may beg to differ, but I am happy at least you think so😆