Knight on Ninety Horses-Short Story-Note Pg 102 Dec 1, 2017

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Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Chara pani.. kahan se laati ho behen 🤣 😆

Main nahi lati, jinko khana hai woh hi jaake late hai😆

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Susegad

Main nahi lati, jinko khana hai woh hi jaakelate hai😆

Aaj kal ke gaaye bail bade smart hogye.. nahi? 😆

When are you going to update 😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: dqno1
i love her 😆
You love her and I love ya.🤗

the innocence of saying what you feel; how soon does it seem to fizz out when we arr taught to be proper?
How sadly true is that. Par woh zamana hi alag thi. Not much political correctness was to be found, let me tell you😛
He is funny and quirky and he has skinny arms 😆 grow up soon boy!
Silly teenage girl I tell ya. She noticed his skinny arms and got stuck on it. Par kahi toh kuch to asar hota hai na bade dilwaon ka. No matter how skinny the arms. Huh?😉

So they are off on an adventure?

Oh and what a ride it is going to be.😃
likho likho likho 😃
😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Aaj kal ke gaaye bail bade smart hogye.. nahi? 😆

When are you going to update 😉

😆

Few more comments and then I will update

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Susegad

😆

Few more comments and then I will update

Okay you reply to them.. I'm enjoying reading the comments 😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Geet is unbelievable.
Maan has conceded small defeat
Eager to read more of their interaction.

Thanks buddy. Glad you are liking the characters😃

Originally posted by: maneetarsh
Lovely story, so maan is engineering student and geet is 15 yr old brat. Is that maan is going to fall for geet whom He thought to ignore as child

Toofan ko bhi koi ignore kar sakta hai kya? She has stormed into his life now😉

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Cute yet hilarious update maan was very much impressed by the house of handas though he saw a very unique creature trying to get her cat he tried to help but she fell down but the moment he saw her eyes an instant attraction for him though he was irritated how she called him a salesman but something about her attitude maf him provoke her thank God to Meera who saved maan also scold geet for her childish behavior but maan seems to be intrigue she actually called him Bombay duck so cute geet going to get her dad maan accompany her but geet refused seems she is in too much fashion but maan didn't mind as he let her correct him loved it so cute story

Thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan
wow.. didn't know you started a story till i saw the PM. Thanks for it.
Love the story.. so Geet is the 15 yr old brat.. lol...

Thanks sweetie. Plese bm it as I am not sending an more pm's.

Originally posted by: angeldream14
geet is a fire cracker
Maan is skinny not macho

Thank you. They are still young na😉

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
splendid update! well written! Maan n Geet start in the wrong foot! Meera saves the day! Geet thinks he is fashion disaster! Geet is feisty! Maan no less! update soon

Thanks khwaish. You are one consistent woman. Always here. You never forget nor let us forget our stories.😃

Originally posted by: Miss.Hoshiarpur
Oh so Geet is the 15yr old and not the older one. Loved the update. Wondering where the story could go. Waiting for more

Thanks. Wait and watch 😉

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

wow...it is very interesting...

Adi bechara Maan is always making him ullu...

Maan was interested in meeting elder sister but he met younger first who is a brat...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

Thanks Kiran. Glad to always have you at my stories.😉

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
WOW!! Interesting story...very funny...loved it dear...continue soon

Thanks Sangitha😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Sheen in one of your comments, you asked my how old Adi and Maan are?

Adi is ageless antaryami. Muje bi nahi pata usli age😆

Maan is 20. Five years older than Geet😃

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cumberben..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Koi gal nahi !

Tussi...

I suck at this 😛

Take your time 😆

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Susegad
Sheen in one of yourcomments, you asked my how old Adi and Maan are?
Adi is ageless antaryami. Muje bi nahi pata usli age😆

Maan is 20. Five years older than Geet😃

Seriously ageless antaryami 😆 😆
Maan ki age ka hoga shayad.. they met at the university 😕
Hai na? Age ka bht tension rehta hai mujhe 🤣 😆