GHSP 7 th Year Anniversary Celebration

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Hello friends , we gathered here once again for celebration of GHSP 7th Anniversary...


Geet is story of simple girl , which built dream with dev and follow the path which her family shown , but what happen when chooses path prove wrong
And all blame , all accusations come on her...
He entered in her life like breeze and turn her life for betterment, he is rude, anger always on his nose, but he is charming , in pari language he is totally dreamy
We just fall in love with maaneet, due to love, passion,companionship...
so today we are here for celebrating this day when first time geet entered in our life
We Love you Maaneet


back here for celebration
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Friends i hope you see each page not sees desired posts from index, because on each page , we did work for celebration GHSP Anniversary
from page 1 to 19

and one more request from writers please don't reveal your name

Index

Awards on page 1, 3, 6, 9, 12 , 17

VM on page 1,7, 9 , 18

Writing Corner on page 1, 2, 4, 6,7,9 ,11, 12, 14, 15, 16, 17,18

Edit on page 2 , 4, 5,6, 7, 8, 10, 12, 14 , 15, 16

Memories on page 3,7, 10, 13

zara hatke on page 5, 8, 11,13, 14

What D name - 11

Guess the Scene - 13

Special - 18 & 19
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So lets start celebration




This Year we organized some awards , so we going start ceremony with awards

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First Award Category is Most Active Writer of the year
nominee list is :
Singh24
priya_21
mgmahika
T.peru
Simran_B
LM1991
drrose31
Soniakn
richa_kapoor
kawaii_geet


Award goes to


Congratulation Di

1st Runner up is "priya_21"
&
2nd Runner up is "kawaii_geet"



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Next Award for "Most Active Reader of the Year"
and Nomination is
khawishfan
kingkhanfan
aprana 3011
nishimia
kabslocks
crazycutee
heemaasomani
Anu5
Drashtilove
tania


and award goes to

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After Awards now time come for some dance some music
don't get confuse friends
😉
am talking about


Massup - click me please
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After Music we feel light so now we can start reading beautiful stories on Maaneet

aap sb ka swagat hai yaha


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Lag ja gale...

Part 1

She remove her pyaal her all jewelers the bangles so her shadow also don't hear a sound of her walk or existence ..today she is fear as women ..it's no matter to her that form which country she belong ..is her country is right or not but today she want to be treat as human and save her dignity today her gender her feminism is biggest weight biggest burden of life .log koi bhi ho they r going to attack and hurt a women inside her which r going to a living death for her.she is belong to any country it's not her choice it's her birth ..where she took first breath ..

Someone fight for name of country , someone fight for religion, someone fight for power and someone fight for money but whether they ask to person what she need what she want ..they all fighting for them na than why there opinion is not IMP..they don't want this war , terror which is governing their life like big black shawo ,...jaha padai...khana .house ye need hai waha war ku jarrori hai ...and ye kaisi jang hai jo ...unka aman ,unki like unki dignity mang rahi hai ...kya suicide karna is way for her to save her dignity but why she have to sacrafised her life for someone so called war ,they don't took permission from her for war than why should she scarified her life for them why ..

So many thoughts roaming in geet brain she feel like her brain will be burst in any moment.she cover her face with duppata ..she hold her breath as she hear some footstep..it's coming closed and closed.. at last she stop to took breath ..she heard footstep its must be a shoes ..may be police or army person ..she pray its should be her side person but next moment her brain ..is they save her or use her to satisfied their hunger ..her soul shake for while with qus..yes man r man ..who give the guarantee ..

She is stuck now if she make any moment it will took their attention ..and if she will be not than ..may be she will safe or...or ...

And next moment before she run away or took any decision she is pull by force and next moment she land on floor a dirty floor ...

She open her eyes with fear and there she found 3,4 person is around her with full of guns and all ..their eyes start to turn with hate ness and lust geet hand went to knife which she hide in her dress ...she thought time is come to finish herself...she will not going to give her dignity no never ..

One man who cover with balck clolor face start to approach her ..to touch her ..geet hold tighten on knife ..before she cut her hand ...with knife someone stand between her and that man ..that man back is her side she could not saw his face ..but his word give her some hope that she will not get ruined or kill on name of war ..

That person voice have such aroma that could put scared to other

U r not going to touch her ..

That bad man - who give u authority to give order to your superior officer mr.xyz ...

Man he answer with calm yet authority voice The army law give me authority that to protect innocent I have right to stop or order to my superior authority ...and sir I am not any XYZ I am commando Maan singh Khurana vikram sir ...he say with full pride ..

Vikram - camando u r new here and yaha mera law chalata hai ...waise bhi what if she belonging to that anemy so ...

MSK - vikram sir if she belong to them we will send her to her place ..which is said my our army law sir ...

Vikram - mr msk I already say yaha sirf mere rules chalet hai ..

Msk - in that condition u have to fight with me ..sir ...maan say in loud voice ...

Vikram pull his gun and put that on maan forehead ...but other stop vikram ..to shoot bullet they pull that gun from him...

Other don't vikram ..he is not that smiple ...

Vikram - msk now u have to save her from me ...if u go little bit away from her than she would be my ...u know na what am I saying vikram say with full devil grin ..

Maan only nodded ...once vickram look to her and went away from them with his men ...

Other side geet took deep breath .

Maan turn to her ...but he also have black color on his place geet open her mouth to say something but maan cut her no need of thanks and ect ,ect we have to go out from this area...first he will come back again and every time I can not save u so move ...hurry..up .

Geet try to get up from floor but accidently she push to knife and her palm get cut with she hissed in pain..but that's not loudly so maan don't get any idea of her ... situation .

They both r middle of jungle and first they have to come out from it..maan once again saw her who struggling for stand up ..He feel like what the hell , why she is wasting such time ! he took some steps to make her stand but before that she somehow stand on her feet. maan hardly say come now start to walk behind me..

Geet feel so much pain on palm which get cut because of knife , but she don't have courage to stop him or say something to him ,He is right they have to come out from this place else..her soul shake with just thought ..she clutch her palm so blood get stop and took long steps behind maan ...she almost running ..

After and half hour Maan stop when he found water fall ..he also feel thirsty ..once he look back found her breathless ..

Maan - we stop hear for while drink some water ..

Geet took deep breath she really need that ...she somehow took control on her breath than went near waterfall and first clean her palm ..a soft cry come out from her mouth ..which took attention of maan he bend little and saw a cut on her palm ...don't know when his leg took him to near her and he took her hand in his hand ..which make shutter geet ...she found odd ..with maan touch till now she is not get touch with man...

And few hour incidence make her more scare she took some steps backside ..maan saw a fear in that beautiful almond shape eyes ..Where innocent and fear both emotions oozing out from it.

Part 2

Maan took deep breath he don't want to scare her ..he don't want to come near her but when he saw cut on her palm don't know why he could not stop himself ..he mummer sorry ..but your hand need medicine .. he don't want to make her uncomfortable ..he remove his bag from his back and offer first aid box..

Other side geet took deep sine when she found his softness and gentleness ...with shaking hand she took that first aid box ..she got cut on her right hand ...she first clean her palm than she try to applied detol on it with left hand but ..she having difficulty ...

Maan again push his hand to hold her hand ...but she pull back her hand ..now that hit maan ego ...he scold her ...stop your all antic ...if I want to misbehave u than tabhi karata ..when they all ready to abuse u ..i just want to help u ..girl ..with that he forcibly took her palm in his hand and applied some detole which brought tear in her beautiful eyes ..she bite her lips to stop her moan ..her cry...some tear fall on maan hand and he look to her don't know why but he feel pain in his heart with her tear ..

Maan - bus thodi der than u will feel ok ...geet again get surprise with his softness and care..she nodded ...

Maan smile on her reasons and ask r u mute ...u c an not talk kya ...

On that geet imm replay no no aisa kuch nahi hai wo hum apse dar gaye the...so

Maan chuckle on her response and she get he is pulling her leg she once look to upper side and mummer something maan amazed with her action ...but same time he heard some voice ...he imm push geet to back side of tree ..and put his palm on her mouth to stop her voice because ..his sudden action ..make her shelter and she try to cried in fear ... maan bend little to her . and mummer ..please don't make any noise someone coming this side...maan hot breath falling ...on her face and smoothing missed in her heart ...she almost lost in his mainly voice and feature thou till she could not saw his face yet clearly because of that black color but ...his structure could not hide also.

Noise of Foot step start to come very close to them both almost stop to took breath and their eyes glued on that direction itself ...and someone come out form that bushes ...and both souls eyes winded in shock and next moment ...maan feel like ye kya hai ...he took back his palm form her mouth and next moment her giggle sound ..spread in that place ...

Maan also could not hold his smile and laugh with her...its small kitten who come out from bushes ... maan once look to her and like the spark of her eyes which a smile brought in it ..pain and scare disappear from them...now he really want to see her glimps of her face .. just once time ...

Maan got shock with his own thought .he took deep breath and say in strain voice ..come on we have to move on before its get more dark . geet scare with his sudden change in talk ..she mummer sorry and start to follow him .maan scold himself in mind to behave like this but her frustration with himself why he want to see her face ..in first place ..till now so many beautiful women and girl try to woo him but he never give chance to anyone ..but this girl he only saw he eyes which gave so much impact on his heart .he took fast steps in frustration and his own thinking and poor geet fail to match his speed of walk ..

After 5 min maan feel so silence around him ...his heart beat skip for while he turn and froze in his place ..that girl is not behind him...sweat appear on his forehead ..but he somehow control his mind and start search her ..he cannot make noise else any type of enemy get alert and upon that he don't know her name ,he though for while is she scare with his behavior or any other problem ...god Ye ladki muje pagal kar degi ...he took small steps ..to find her he come back to some distuence and there he found her ..her back to maan ..

Maan fear that he lost her make him more angry and he march to her and turn her harshly ...with shoulder ...but in this process her duppata come out which she wrap around her face ..and maan forget to took breath...he is so lost in her beautiful yet innocent face...other side geet gasp with maan sudden act its so sudden ..she never display her face to any other man rather than her family its crime for her ...his finger dug in her shoulder which hurting her ..

She is looking to him with her teary beautiful eyes maan heart arch with her tear he took his hand to clear tear but stop in middle ..

He come out from his daze stage and say dam it why u stop hear ...she took to step back with his angry tone ...

Maan ask one more time girl ans me ..

Geet - wo app abhot tej chal rahe thea I try to match your speed but can not and pitche reh gai sachi she pinch her neck like small kid ..

Maan don't know how to react ..is he have to be angry or happy ...

He took deep breath and mummer kya karu main ye ladkika .

Geet app bahot dur chale gaye thei kya ...

Maan nodded in no and say chalo we have to move ...

On which geet make face maan found her very tired they r walking from last 5 hour ...

Maan look around can they rest for while hear ...ok we will rest here while ... till than I will back ..

Geet hurriedly ask app kaha ja rahe ho ...maan amazed with her q but he get that because of fear she ask ...he say ...don't worry muje sirf fresh hona hai thoda face wagere saaf kar lu than ..

Geet nodded like small baby ...

Maan wash his face come back with some lakadi...

Geet heard his foot step ...and turn to look that side ...and she gasp he is so handsome ..big eyes ,m shape lips and beautiful black hair which r adding beauty in him ..she almost forget to blink her eyes ...shadow she first time looking a man ...so closed to her ...

Maan put that lakadi on ground and start to arrange a chula ..he want to make some magi and coffee for both because after some time when dark is appear he can not took risk of fire .he have big work to save geet .

He stand and caressed his wet hair with palm in that process some water drop fail on geet face and that brought geet back from her la la land ...a red hu appear on her face she mummer geet duffer how shamelessly u looking to him ...

Maan felt gaze on him and with corner of eyes he saw he gazing to her face ...he softly smile on her reaction but same time he don't want to make her embrssed ...so he intentionally caressed his own hair..

She again set her duppatta on her head ..and turn her gaze to ground ..her heart start to run like machine .. she never face such thing ...its first time she feel something odd with man presence. She seat near tree and closed eyes to get grip on her thought ...

Maan once and trun to look her and found her seated with close eyes ..its so beautiful scean for his eyes ...yes she is beauty god took extra time to make her ..flawless white skin ...beautiful eyes ...small nose and rosy lips...yet he could not able to look her hair ...next second his mind start to say no maan its not right there is no manzil for this way ...koi manzil nahi hai ..they will never be with each other ..she is his duty only not eles so ...

He turn his face make some magi and tea ..and called her ...finish this soon and he went to waterfall side ...the place is indeed beautiful but now night making it ...a little scary for geet she took deep breath she is amazed with her own ..heart how she start to get affected with other man when she already engaged in childhood itself ..she finish her tea and magi ..and once again her eyes start to search him..and found him near water fall ...his back to her.. her eyes went to his foot ..she found something is shining in night and next moment her eyes winded in shock ...she took a burning stick in her hand and run to maan as fast as possible ..and before anything happen ..she push that creature ( snake ) away from maan feet who is all ready to took bite of maan feet she feel like her heart will stop any time she push that creature who make angry sound and went away from them ...she took deep breath and turn maan angrily with shoulder and say with hard tone ...u r not standing in garden ye juangle hai ..please look around you ...abhi ...u got going to finish Mr. solider ...

Maan give her look like what r u saying ..with his look geet get that he know nothing ,,poor girl mummer something looking upper side ..

Geet - nothing much a snake trying to took bite of your feet ...geet show the direction where that snake is going ...

Maan got shock with realization ...he is in so much thought don't know what is happening around him ...she save his life ..he mummer daring girl...good.

Maan come again near that fire place ...

Maan - thanks for saving my life ..but now I ma thinking its danger to move ...its turn dark so we have stay hear ...at night ...

Geet nodded in yes and closed her eyes she is really hell tired with all day event ..its stressful to her body as well as mind...

She need brake ...to stop this man effect on her ...

precap

lag ja gale ...

part 3

Maan - thanks for saving my life ..but now I ma thinking its danger to move ...its turn dark so we have stay hear ...at night ...

Geet nodded in yes and closed her eyes she is hell tired with all day event ..its stressful to her body as well as mind...

She need brake ...to stop this man effect on her ...she feel small fever in her body ..her injurer start to get infection and fever is result of that ...if her fever increased than its become hard in this jungle ..she mummer please no fever please no ..i don't want to make him more suffer for me please ...its make this situation verse ...but destiny smile on geet talk destiny know what she all ready write for this two souls ...don't know when geet closed her eyes ..in tiredness .

Other side maan whose heart and mind fighting with each other for his attraction to that girl. He very well know they r cannot be each other ..he have so much control on his mind but today why his mind ..and heart not lessoning to him why he is feel so helpless so much attraction to her which is wrong ...with so much thought he also slip in sleep ...

Maan sleep broke with soft voice of painful moan he get alert with such sound and he almost run to geet side with fear ..that thought ...what happen to her ...he found she is crying in sleep itself ...he try to t ouch her with his palm but stop in midway ..he remind her reaction when before some ..time . he stop his plam and try to call her but ...big q he don't know her name

Maan mummer u r impossible maan now how in earth u going to called her ..same time he saw her shaking and maan forget all things and touch her shoulder ...and try to wake up her first he thought that she is watching any bad dream but when he touch her got that she having fever and because of that her body shaking like that . just than his hand touch her wounded hand and painful moan come out from her mouth ...maan look to wounded hand and found some swelling on it .

Maan got that she get fever because of wound ... he put her softly on ground .and took his first aid ..he again clean her wound and applied some cream on it...than he took of her duppata from head and clean her forehead and face with wet cloth ..but still her body shaking in fever .which is not good he have to do something ...else she start to drop her body heat which is not good for her .

Maan hand start to turn cold with thought ..its not first time he facing such thing but this time a emotions of heart making its difficult for him.he took deep breath and start to carsed her toe so she get some body heat but ..her body start to turn more and more cold ...

Maan took her head on his leg and called d please wakeup ...wakeup I could not forgive myself if something happen to u please wake up ..but don't get any response from her .at last he put her head down and took his bag and pull out his sleeping bag... He give her some medicine and put geet in it than with so much thought he slip near her ...he know my be he get accused when she get her hosh but ..he is doing what is best for her ...he is ready to took all allegation and all but her life her health is more imp .

Geet ..in unconsiunce mind feel that someone clean her wound than ..someone is closed to her she so much try to open her eyes but all went vest she don't even open her eyes once ...she again slip in sleep ...nd after hour or two hour ...she feel weight on her body ...she slowly open her eyes and try to remind where she was ...than full days event passed from her mind ...she found something or say someone is close d to her very closed to her ...actually she is in someone arm a ground slip from her feet ...she wriggle in her that tight hug..but no use that grip is like iron ..she once look to person ..both body glued to each other like two pieces of puzzle..

Her eyes fall on that person face and she forget to took breath they r in sleeping bag where they have little much space upon his tight hug its making more and more hard . she at last stop her wriggle and start to wait to his wake up ..

After few min maan wake up with jerk he is in still in that thought about her that she is unwell ..he ask in fear please wake up please open your eyes now u scaring me like hell please ..

She slowly open her dow shape eyes and mummer shant ho jaiye ...main thik hu bhkar chala gaya please don't u worry ...

Maan feel like he was on top of world . he got life back ..in that feeling itself he hug her tightly and mummer u scare me ...meri jaan nkal gai thi ...he almost kiss her on her forehead when he got what he doing in ..happiness ..

He shut his eyes ..mummer what the hell u r doing ...

He shutter for while now he is more than 100% sure she is going to accused him..he wait for her bad word ..

Geet - who get with his face emotions that he regretting for his act .

Geet softly say - humko bahar aana hai slipping bagse

Maan open his eyes and nodded than he come out from hug and make some space so she come out from the sleeping bag.

She again cover her head with duppata like she always wear than turn to maan and say ..thanks for saving my life

Maan who all ready to lesion all accuse ...get shock with her talk ..

I know I have habbit ki thodisi chot ke baad bhi fever ho jata hai and body temprachur gir jata hai so I know ..that u r closed to me to save my life ...

Maan took deep breath a soft smile appear on his face ..which took breath away from geet he looking so smart with that smile ...

geet so much want to touch his face but her brain stopping her to do so. And next nature start to took big exam of maaneet which is going to test their self ..control as well as love both soul who stopping them self with a though that they belonging to enemy country .

Before they save themselves ..rain drench them in few second ..both from toe to head get drench in rain ..geet dress glued to her body like second skin and other side geet cannot tore her gaze from maan wet handsome attired in rain.

Maan once look in geet and lost his all thinking and all ...thought his heart only saying she is your only yours .same thoughts spread in geet heart also .her eyes start to feel with her heart and helpness ..she can not accept what is her heart saying to her ..

Rain stop ...and fog start appear there ...maaneet who is standing little bit away from each other ...they feel like there soul come out from body and start to take slow step to each other ..with giving them smile like saying u stop your body and mind but do ruho ko ek hone se to kudrat bhi nahi rok sakati

Geet soul went to maan hug ...like their heart singing lag ja gale ...geet first touch to maan heart with her soft and shking heart than she kiss to him on his heart ...her simple act give all her heart word to maan that she accepted his unspoken love ..maan tight his grip around geet ...

lag ja gale ki phir ye hasin raat ho na ho

shaayad phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

lag jaa gale se ...

maan once look geet with so much love and kiss on forehead than slowly took off her duppata from her which is always irritating him...duppatta fall from her head to their legs ...geet suddenly feel so much shy without duppata ..she turn to other side and hide her front with her hand a read hu appear on her cheek .

maan smile on geet reaction and come around to her and blow a air to her eye...like demanding her to open her eyes ...that hot blow from maan mouth make shake geet ...she feel all Goosebumps on her body.maan little bend to geet and pick her redish cheek with so much love and ...geet open her eyes with shock its her first kiss na na pick ...next seond her eyes start feel with tears because she know its for while uska sath kuch pal ke liye hai than they have to parted with each other ..they got this time because of destiny ..

geet took bold step and she took out her hand from front and maan gasp with her beauty and her tear ..he drink her tear with his shaking lips he know that what is she thinking ye Milan ki baad ki judai ...going to make them...incense they even don't know even they going to meet again or not .

ham ko mili hain aaj, ye ghadiyaan nasib se

ji bhar ke dekh lijiye ham ko qarib se

phir aap ke nasib men ye baat ho na ho

phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

lag ja gale ki phir ye hasin raat ho na ho

maan took few step back with thought that is he doing right or wrong ..its not going to easy to face her family and all ...geet get little bit hurt with his action but she know that he is thinking about her only ..she took maan plam in her plam and put that on her thudding heart ..her action say all things to maan that maan ki geet to maan ke liye kcuh bhi karne ko tyyar (ready)hai.

paas aaiye ki ham nahin aaenge baar-baar

baahen gale men daal ke ham ro le zaar-zaar

aankhon se phir ye pyaar ki barasaat ho na ho

shaayad phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

her eyes spiking to him please lesions to your heart and forget all things ...because she can not come again again to him..dont know in this life they able to meet each other ...they have so much distance in them distance of country, religion and hateness ..lakir jo kisine kitch di hai un dono ke country main.

lag ja gale ki phir ye hassin raat ho na ho

shaayad phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

lag ja gale ki phir ye hassin raat ho na ho

next moment maan closed the distance between two lips ...which is going to change their destiny ...geet start to melt in arm ,love of her maan.

Same time someone shake her with shoulder ...kuch kha lo beta ...tumko jarrurat hai u need it ...

Geet with teary eyes look to that lady who taking her care from last 6 month ...geet hand reach to her baby bump who start to see now..her eyes again start to feel with tear ..tear of agony tear of her lost ...she nodded and come out from that small house and went near a small plant where a small ...name is written on white stone ...Late ..Maan singh khurana...

Geet who got and lost her love ,life in same day when they wake after became one in all sense .maan took her in hug and mummer we have to run from hear ...to my house side ...and both start to walk but destiny play next card and ...both become target of both side army near LOC in darkness and maaneet fail in deep river ...when she got her hosh she found herself in this small house with that women who become her mother now...geet may kill herself that time if she don't get about baby ..baby of maaneet.

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Tere Nishaan

CID bureau

Shreya : sir someone drop the one letter out for us

ACP : maan isse open kro

Maan- yes sir.

Dev wants to kill Raghav- Raghav wants to kill Roy and Roy wants to kill Dev.

ACP looks like he is about to cry. His other hand now comes out of the pocket. He throws both his hands towards the ground saying- but where these three are and how do you save them. If we do not find them then they will kill each other.

Abhijit- but how do we find them...we do not even know who they are...

ACP- by saying this we cannot sit quietly- we cannot wait for the bodies to come to us. That man threw the letter- that means he wants us to stop the crime.

Sachin : Ye kaisa message hai sir

Abhijeet : maan isme dekho koi aur clue hai kya

Maan : sir iske andher koi stamp lagi

ACP : pata kro ye stamp kis ki hai

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Abhijeet : sir pata lag gya

Ye koi college stamp hai

Daya : ye koi engineering college hai

Jaha se Raghav ko expelled kiya gya hai

Hume starting yhi se krni chaiye

Abhijeet : Sir

Daya biklul shi kh raha hai

Hume us college jaana honga

Jaha Raghav pdta tha

Daya : ab Raghav hi hume Dev aur Roy tk puchaayenga

Acp : intzaar kis baat ka hai

Lag jaayo kaam pe

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Indian Institute of Technology, Bombay

Purvi : sir ye last college bcha hai

Daya : hmm

Yhi se hume humara phle clew milenga purvi

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In principal Cabin

Principal: how can I help you

Daya : hum ek student ke bare mein puch taach krni hai

Purvi : uska naam Raghav hai

Usse kuch hi din phle college se expelled kiya gya tha

Principal: ha kiya toh gya tha

Daya : kyun

Principal: sir

Usse cheating krte huye humare professor ne khud pkda tha

Purvi : hume uske ghar ka address chaiye

Principal : ji madam

Daya : Raghav ke friend circle ke bare mein aap kuch jaante hai

Principal : sir mein toh nhi jaanta

Par ha

Aap chahe toh uski class mein puch sakte hai

Daya : wo toh hum kr lenge

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Classroom

Purvi : hum yaha Raghav ke bare mein pata krne aaye hai

All students little confused why she asking about Raghav...one professor clear this and said they both are CID officers...

Daya : Raghav class mein kiss- kisse baat krta tha

Kaun - kaun hai yah ape uska friend

One boy come front and said his best friend name is Roy and another friend of Raghav is Geet..

Purvi : kaha hai wo dono

Boy : sir Roy toh aaj aaya nhi hai

Par ha Geet aayi hai

Daya : kaha hai wo

Boy : sir library mein

********

Library

Boy : sir ye Geet hai

Purvi : Geet

Geet : ji

Purvi : hume aapse kuch puch taach krni hai

Geet : puch taach

Purvi : hum CID se hai

Geet : puchiye madam

Purvi : tum Roy aur Raghav ko kbse jaanti ho

Geet : madam wo dono mere friends hai

Hum college mein hi mile the

Purvi : is waqt wo dono kaha milenge

Geet : mujhe nhi pata madam

Purvi : tum un dono ki dost ho na

Tumhe kaise nhi pata wo kaha hai

Geet : sch mein madam

Mein nhi jaanti

Jb se Raghav ko college se expelled kiya hai

Uske baad meri usse koi baat nhi huyi hai

Aur Roy bhi uske baad college nhi aaya hai

Purvi take roy and Raghav number from her and left to next destination.

*********

Raghav House

Abhijeet knocked on Raghav door, one old lady, abhijeet think she is Raghav mother ...

Abhijeet : hum yha Raghav se milne aaye hai

Mother : ji wo toh ghar pe nhi hai

Aap sb kaun hai

Sachin : hum CID se

Mother : CID

Raghav ne kuch kiya kya

Pata nhi use kya ho gya hai

Sachin : madam

Abhi toh usne kuch nhi kiya

Waise Raghav hai kaha

Mother : ji wo

Kal raat se abhi tak ghar nhi aaya hai

Abhijeet : usne aapko call toh kiya honga

Kuch toh btaya honga

Wo kaha hai

Kiske sath hai

Mother : ji nhi

Maine uska call bhi try kiya

Par mil hi nhi raha hai

Aur na hi uske dost Roy ka

Sachin : roy

Kya Raghav kal raat ko roy ke sath tha

Mother : wo toh nhi pata

Par wo dono sath hi ghar se gye the

Abhijeet : roy aapke gahr kitne bje tak aaya tha

Mother : ji college se dono sath hi aaye the

.

Sachin : college

Mother : hmm

Sachin : kuch btaya Raghav ne aapko

College mein kya huya

Mother : usne toh kuch nhi btaya

Par roy ne mujhe sb btaya

Usse college se expelled kr diya gya hai

.

Abhijeet : toh fir aap uspe gussa huyi hongi

Aapne kuch kaha kya fir Raghav se

Mother : gusse mein jaroor thi

Aur

Sachin : aur

Mother : aur maine usse ghar se nikal jaane ke liye kh diya

Par wo bs gusse mein tha

.

Sir please aap usse dundiye na

Mujhe apna beta chaiye

Abhijeet :ji hum puri kosish karenge

.

Aap kya kissi Dev ko jaanti hai

Mother : Dev

.

Sayad ha

Maine ek do baar Raghav ko usse baat krte huye dekha hai phone pe

.

Uska koi dost hi hai

Par isse jyada usne kuch kbhi btaya nhi apne is dost ke baare mein

Sachin : thanks

*******

abhijeet : hume Raghav aur roy ko jaldi dundna honga

Khi abhi tak Raghav ne roy ko maar na diya ho

Sachin : yes sir

**********

IN CID BUREAU

Fredi : sir Raghav ke call records aa gye hai

ACP take file from him and shocked to see that last call was from Geet to his number...

ACP : Geet

Fredi : yes sir

Par aap itne shock kyun ho gye

ACP : fredi

Jb Geet se pucha gya tha

Toh usne kaha tha

Usne Raghav ko last time college mein dekha tha

Uske baad uski Raghav se koi baat nhi huyi hai

Par ye dekho

Yaha call records kuch aur hi khte hai

.

Geet ko bureau mein bulayo

**********

Geet : sir

Ha maine Raghav ko call kiya tha

Bs yhi puchne ke liye

He is ok na

Acp : kya baat huyi tumhari us se

Wo kaha tha us waqt

Jb tumne call kiya tha

Geet : sir wo toh maine pucha nhi

ACP : thik hai

.

Acha ek aur baat btayo

Geet : ji

ACP : tum kissi Dev ko jaanti ho

Geet : Dev

.

Ji nhi

ACP : thik hai

Tum jaayo

Tumhari zaroorat hongi

Toh hume dobara tumhe bulayenge

Geet : ji

.

.

Acp : purvi nazar rakho is par

Ye kuch toh chipa rhi hai

Purvi : yes sir

***********

From Raghav call records, CID not only knows about last call, but CID also enquires or knows about last location of call...

Shreya : sir sirf Raghav hi nahi

Balki Roy, Geet ,

Teeno ki location ek time pe jaake match hoti hai

Daya : whi toh shreya

Is Geet ne humse jhooth bola

Raghav ne usse btya tha

Wo is waqt kaha hai

Aur wo bhi waha aa gyi

.

Shreya : aur roy bhi us waqt Raghav ke sath tha

Daya : ab toh disco jaake hi pata chalenga

Us raat aange huya kya tha

********

Daya and shreya enquire from manager about Raghav and Geet by showing picture of both...

Daya : ye dono aapke disc mein aaye the

Manager : sir yaha daily bhut se log aate hai

Ase har kissi ko yaad thode rakha jaata hai

Shreya : kissi ki zindagi ka swal hai

Isliye acha honga

Aap zara apne dimag pe thoda zor dale

Daya : apne staff ko bulaiye

Kissi ne toh kuch dekha honga

.

All staffs standing in line...officers showed the picture and ask same question, anyone sees this...

One waiter come forward and nodded yes ...

Daya : kya dekha tumne

Waiter : sir ye sahib ek ladke ke sath aaye the

Fir kuch waqt ke baad ye ladki aayi

.

Shreya: aange kya huya

Waiter : sir bs fir kuch waqt baad tino chale gye

Daya : kuch toh huya honga

.

Zara socho

Waiter : ha

Wo jo ladki thi na

Sayad usse koi milne aaya tha

Shreya : wo baki un dono se bhi mila

Waiter : ji nhi

Wo bs aaya

Ladki ko ek envelope diya

Aur chala gya

Shreya : sir kaun ho sakta hai wo

Daya : dekhte hai aange kya hota hai

.

Wo ladka disc ki kis side mein mila us ladki se

Waiter : ji wo counter ke pass

Daya : great

Shreya waha camera hai

.

Manager ye camera on hai

Manager: yes sir

Daya : hume recording chaiye

Manager: ji

*********

All watching video and at one point acp tell to stop then remind the video...

ACP: ye hai wo ladka

Jisse Geet milli thi

Sachin : kaun ho sakta hai ye

Abhijeet : khi Dev toh nhi

ACP: ho sakta hai abhijeet

.

Roy ki family wapas aayi ya nhi

Abhijeet : nhi sir

Par uske dad mom

Aa raat tak puch jayenge

Yaha

ACP : hmm

Sayad ab wohi

Dev ke baare mein bta paaye

Hume kuch

************

Roy mom dad reached to CID bureau...

ACP : aapko humne urgently yaha isliye bulaya hai

Hume kuch puch taach krni thi

Dad : ji

Kya huya

ACP : abhi toh kuch huya nhi hai

Aapko toh pata honga na

Aapka beta ia waqt hai kaha

Mom : ji

Parso raat ko baat huyi thi

Tb wo disc mein tha

Geet aur Raghav ke sath

ACP : uske baad kaha gya

Dad : kaha gya matlab

Abhijeet : matlab ye

Uske baad se aapka beta

Ghar nhi aaya hai

Aur na hi uska phone mil raha hai

Dad : wo aksar weekends pe farm house jaata hai

Ho sakta hai waha ho

Daya : farmhouse ka address dijiye

Dad : ji

Shreya : madam

Sir

Kya aap isse jaante hai

Shreya the same pic which CID gets from recording of Disc...

Mom : ye toh Dev hai

Aur ye Geet hi hai na

Shreya : ji

ACP : Dev

Ke baare mein aap kya jaante hai

Mom : Dev roy, Raghav

Teeno school friends hai

Baad mein Dev ne medical leli

Par isse teeno ki dosti mein koi farq nhi pda kbhi

ACP : hume Dev ka bhi phone number aur address chaiye

**********

Roy Farmhouse

Abhijeet : yaha itni smell kyun hai

Purvi

Both covered the face from mask and entered in farm house, and get two dead bodies...

First is Roy and second is Raghav

Purvi : sir ye dono toh mr gye

Abhijeet : hm

Inki bodies nili pd gyi hai

Iska matlab hai in dono ko poison diya gya hai

Purvi : par ye huya kb honga

Abhijeet : sayad wo disco wali raat ko

.

Waha jaake dobara puch taach krni hongi

.

Purvi in dono ki bodies forensic lab bijwayo

.

Abhijeet : ye kya hai

.

Abhi bend and get the brown paper ... and in this one empty bottle too...

*********

Disco

sachin : sch - sch batayo

un dono ko jehr kisne diya hai

.

Manager : sir hum kyun asa karenge

Fredi : un dono ko serve kisne kiya tha

Waiter : sir maine

Par sir maine kuch nhi kiya

Jo unhone khaya

Wo us ladki ne bhi khaya tha

Sachin : hm,

Tum jaayo

.

Ye shi kh raha hai

Geet ko toh kuch nhi huya

**********

Lab

Salunki tell about poison and use to ...this type poison do work slowly- slowly...its means this poison give slow death... and mostly this type poison use by doctors...

Fredi : sir doctor bhi kya logo ko maarte hai

Salunki : fredi

Jb matra bd jaati hai

Toh wo jaan le leti hai

.

Koi smjhayo isse

ACP : its means

Ye sb Dev ne kiya hai

.

Aur waise bhi Dev Raghav ko marna chahta tha

.

Purvi : par fir usne roy ko kyun maara

Salunki : ek minute purvi

Ye khoon do alag- lag logo ne kiye hai

Abhijeet : do alag logo ne

Tarika : ha abhijeet

Roy ko poison food mein diya gya hai

Jbki Raghav ki body mein inject kiya gya hai

Abhijeet : aur wo bottle

Salunki : poison hi tha usme

ACP : dono same poison hai

Salunki : aur ek khas baat

Ye poison 3-4 hours mein jaake asar krta hai

.

Raghav ki maut roy ke mrne ke ye koi 1 hour ke baad huyi hai

**********

ACP : kuch smjhe daya

Abhijeet

Daya : Dev phle Geet se milne disco aata hai

Aur usse wo poison deta hai

.

ACP : iska matlab hai

Geet aur Raghav dono ne milke roy ko maara

Abhijeet : jiski wajh se roy ki maut ho jaati hai

Aur fir Raghav ko Geet aur Dev ne maara

Shreya : sir ye ladki toh bhut chalu hai

Phle roy se pyaar ka nataak kiya

Fir usse hi mrwa diya

ACP : baki ki kahani toh ab ye dono hi sunayenge hume

Uthayo dono ko

********

Dev house

Dev : Geet thanks sweety

Aaj tumhari wajh se

Humare raste ke beech ke dono kaate humesha ke liye ht gye

Geet : Dev let's celebrate

Mein tumhare liye special wala drink bnati hu

Dev : sure

.

She offers drink and sipped whole glass...CID arrived...

Geet : sir aap log

Abhijeet : nhi aana chaiye tha

.

Dev try to stand, but his head roaming...

Dev : Geet tumne kya mix kiya meri drink mein

Geet : tumhara hi diya huye poison Dev

Daya : sachin Dev ko hospital leke jaayo

Purvi : kyun kiya tumne ye sb

Geet : ab Dev nhi bachaenga

.

.

ACP : kyun kiya tumne ye sb Geet

Geet : mujhe toh bs Roy ko maarna tha

Purvi : par tum toh usse pyaar krti thi

Geet : pyaar aur usse

Mein usse break up chahti thi

Par wo hath doke mere piche pda tha

Pura shyco tha

.

Mein kissi se baat kru toh usse problem

Har baat pe shk

Katputli bnake rkh diya tha usne

.

Mein Raghav se pyaar krne lagi

He ready to help me...

Aur humne uske food mein poison mila diya

Abhijeet : fir Raghav ko tumne kyun maara

Geet : maine nhi

Us Dev ne mere Raghav ko maar diya

He kill my Raghav

Daya : kyun

Geet : kyun ki Raghav Dev ka sch jaanta tha

He is fake doctor

Plus he wants me

Wo mujhe paana chahta tha

Usne mere Raghav ko maara

Aur maine usse

ACP : ab tumhe aur us Dev ko fassi hi hongi

Geet : no sir

My raghav is not more

And I don't want to live

She inject the poison in veins before anyone stop her.

************

Maan : geet

Geet : maan tum CID officer bn gye

Am happy to see you here

Maan : but am not geet

Tumhe yu is case me fasta dekh

Mujhe acha nhi lag rha hai

.

Geet kuch bhi hai

Toh mujhe sch batao

Mein tumhari help karunga

Geet : sorry maan

I don't want you play with your carrier for me

Maan : geet ek waqt tha

Jb hum sath the

Us sath ke liye sch btayo mujhe

Geet : tum mujhe chod chuke ho maan

Apne sapno ke liye

Aaj mere liye bs wo mayne rakhta hai

Jo mujhe sch mein chahta hai

***********

Ambulance come and taking bodies to hospital but in mid ambulance car break failed and meet with accident...

ACP : salonki mujhe smjh nhi aa rha hai

She takes some poison na jisse raghav aur roy ko maara gya tha

Fir dev aur geet ke blood mein wo itni jaldi kaise react kisa usne

Salonki : ACP same hai

But quantity bhut jyada thi

Geet ne dev ke drink mein bhut jayda quantity daali

Jiski wajh se usse kuch hi der mein headache hone laga

Aur poison ne apna kaam shuru kr diya

Aur geet ne bcha huya saara consume kiya

*************

Maan : sir jis ambulance mein bodies jaa rhi thi

Uska accident ho gya hai

ACP : tum aur purvi jaake dekho place

***********

Maan : sir ye kuch dried blood sample mile hai

Plus ye ring

Abhijeet : ye ring toh geet ke hath mein thi na

Sachin : ji

Aur ye chain jo dev ki hai sir

Ye dekhiye

Isme usne geet ki pic bhi lagayi huyi hai

Daya : ye blood sample lab mein bejwa do

Abhijeet : hume dev ki family ko inform krna honga

Shreya geet ki family ke baare mein kuch pata chala

Shreya : sir wo orphan thi

Yaha tak wo scholarship se puchi thi

Abhijeet : hm

***********

Tarika : sir ye dono sample geet aur dev ki DNA se match hote hai

ACP : unhone humari help li hoti

Toh aaj sayad wo zinda hote

Ase nhi mrte

***********

After one year maan get transfer and he shift delhi and give resign too from CID job and take over family business as per his promise with dad...

Rudr : son why you standing like that

Aaj tumhari shaadi hai

Maan : ji dad

Urvasi : jayada intzaar mt krwana humari dulhan ko

Khi asa na ho

Wo fir mna kr de

Maan : is baar nhi maa

Usse khoke jaana hai

Koi bhi sapna usse badke nhi hai mere liye

************

Both take seven vows , he feel her maang and make her wear nuptial chain and make her own in front of society today...

He hugged her from back and kissed on her cheek...

Maan : tum itni pareshan kyun ho

.

She : jaise tum nhi jaante

Maan : just forget all this

And get ready fast

Hum aaj hi ye desh humesha ke liye chod denge

Waha sirf tum aur mein honge

.

She : mom and dad

Maan : wo bhi kuch din mein humare sath honge

Now don't think so much

And come

She : maan

Soch lo

Ek baar fir

Mere gunaah abhi tak dule nhi hai

Wo tumhe bhi us andhere mein na le jaaye

Maan : uff ho geet

One year is not enough for you

*************

How can she kill own self

He call own dad and tell all thing

Rudr : maan she kill roy then dev

How can we save her

Tum khud ek officer ho

Maan : I know dad

Par ye sb meri wajh se huya

Na mein usse chod ke jaata

Aur na wo us roy se milti

Aur na ye sb hota

.

Rudr : maan try to understand

Maan : dad I know she did crime

But I also know

I love her

And I want safe in my arms

************

Tumhe is ambulance ke break fail krne hai aur isse us dead point se niche girana hai

Driver : isme meri jaan bhi jaa sakti hai sahab

Maan : paise tumhe issi kaam ke mil rhe hai na

Tum apni jaan bachane se phle kud jaana

Driver : aur ye dono

Maan : marne do inhe

She pick her in arms and make her lay on car and take ring from her hand and throw in ambulance then take out her jacket and make stuck in ambulance...then he inject the injection and take out the blood from her hand and make her or fall some samples in ambulance...

As per ambulance moved and met with accident...and get fire while falling ...

He go on investigation with purvi in down for collecting the part of evidence... ambulance fully burned , dev body part also not seen anywhere , but both get some dried blood samples and some burned things...

************

maan : doctor how is she

doctor : we save her

but bhut week hai

maan : I take care of her

*************

Geet : maan

Maan : geet why you did this

Maine pucha tha na

Mujhe sch kyun nhi bataya

Us raghav se itna pyaar apni jaan leni chali

Geet : he loves me truly

Not like you

Who only shows dream then left a orphan girl in mid

Maan : geettt

Geet : no maan

This is true

.

Kitni request kit hi tumse

Mt jaayo mujhe chodke

Ek tumhi toh mere friend the na

Jo daily aate the waha

Mere sath khelne

Jo meri study mein help krte the

.

Kya kaha tha tumne

Tum mujhse pyaar krte ho

Mein toh jaanti hi nhi thin a

Pyaar hota kya hai

Bs tumhara sath chahti thi

.

Par tumne wo sath le liya mujhse

Fir mujhe scholarship mili mein Mumbai chali gyi

Waha roy aur raghav mile mujhe

Roy bhut charming person tha

We become friends, he proposed me I said yes

Because I want to forget you

.

But after sometime I want to run from his side

He try to touch me

Raghav notice this and save me

Ha pyaar krti hu raghav se

He is my best friend

Jo sb jaanta tha

Roy see me with him

And he think am cheating behind his back

Par ye koi nhi smjha

Do insaan ydi pyaar krte hai

Wo lover wala hi ho

Pyaar ke bhut rang hote hai

.

Ek pyaar ka rang wo tha

Jb tumne ek choti bachi ko apne khilone aur kitabe diye the

.

Ek pyaar ka wo rang tha

Jb tum mere aansu puchte the

Jb warden mujhpe gussa krti thi

.

Ek pyaar ka rang wo tha

Jb tumne mujhse kaha tum mujhse pyaar krte ho

Ek pyaar ka wo bhi rang tha

Jb tum mujhe chodke chale gye

Aur asa laga ab kuch nhi rha

.

Ek rang wo tha

Jb mein khud ko bhul jaana chahti thi

Aur roy ki dosti uska proposal kabool kr liya

.

Ek rang wo tha

Jb raghav waise hi care krta jaise tum krte the

Aur tumhe yaad krke mein uski baho mein ro padti thi

.

Ek rang wo tha

Jb raghav mujhe roy se bacha rha tha

When he slap me

Because am not ready to give him physically own self

.

Ek rang wo tha

Jb tumne wapas lautne ko kaha

Aur mein chaha ke bhi nhi aa sakti thi

Kyun ki jis raha pe mein thi

Waha mera jalna likha tha

Aur mein tumhe nhi jala sakti thi khud apne sath

.

Ek rang wo tha

Jb dev ne mujhe chuna chaha

Wo chila - chila ke kh rha tha

How much my body is beautiful

And he want to touch me

.

Kb tak mein kitno se bachti

Tum nhi the maan mujhe bachane ke liye

Raghav haar gya mujhe bachate bachate

He lost own life due to me

He never want to kill roy

He just want to save me

He take dev help

And take him posion when I get to know I want to go to save roy

Mein nhi chahti thi

Na jaanti thi raghav asa kuch kr baithenga

I ask from him why he take this step

He simply said geet mere hote huye tumhe koi takleef de wo nhi dekh sakta

He give him only small dose , but no idea how he kill

.

Dev come to us , he confessed how he turn the actual bottle from this , if I want to save raghav from this mess, I have to marry with him...i said yes

But before all this roy died , raghav died and I can't take this

So I give poison to that man

Who snatch my friend from me

.

Maan : geet ek baar kaha hota

Geet : kis haq se khti

Tumne hi kaha tha

Geet mere sapno ke beech mt aayo

Pyaar krta hu

Iska matlab ye nhi

Tum mujhpe ase haq jatayo

Meri bhi life hai

Kuch sapne hai

.

Jb kbhi koi haq mila hi nhi

Toh kaise khti ab

Jb jataya maine

Toh thukraya diya tumne

Aur ab sikayat hai yhi tumhe

***********

After five years

Maan : geeettt

Geet : kya huya maan

Maan : ye dekho tumhari is beti ne meri file ka kya haal kr diya

Geet : meri beti

Ye thik hai maan

Jb koi acha kaam kre

Meri beti hai geet

Isse kuch mt kaho

Ye shaitan mujhe kitna pareshan krti hai

Only I know

Tb toh aap kuch nhi khte

Aaj ek file hi toh kharab ki hai

Koi nhi dobara kaam kr lena

Maan : geet

Geet : kya geet

Bigada khudne hai na

Khud smbhalo

Maan see towards cute devil daughter pihu

She clapped to see his angry face... geet giggles but turn the face to see his cry face...

***********

After so much up & down , maan & geet is now happily married couple, for her he left the dream job and INDIA too , his love , his patience break the bariier in between both and she also come out from guilty session and try to forget this incidence...

Par kya ase insaan mitate hai zindagi se

Kya kal kbhi saamne aaya toh

Ye sath rahenga

Ya bikhr jaayenga

.

But for that moment we put this all negative thoughts aside and living the moment...

***********THE END*********

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You R Mine


Part 1

Two Children playing in garden, and children mother & grandmother enjoying the evening tea with snacks, suddenly hear children voice both come near to area of playing...

Bhai ball aapki wajh se waha gyi hai

Aap laayenge

.

Mein tujhse bda hu

Toh tu jaa aur laa

.

Par gyi aapki wajh se hai

.

Balling tu kr rha tha

.

Batting aap kr rhe the

Ab aap jaaiye aur jaake bhoot ghar se ball laaiye

Bs kro aap dono

Bolo kya huya

.

Mumma mein batata hu

Bhai ne itni tej maara ball ko

Wo waha chali gyi

.

Mumma isne ball hi asi daali thi

Ab yhi jaaye us ghar mein lane

Mumma : maan aap bde hai na

Aur aapne itni tej hit kyun kiya ball ko

Maan : mumma

Galati dev ki hai

Mumma : dev aapse abhi chota hai na

Dev aur maan dono jaayenge ball lene

Aur ha no fight

Jaaiye jaake pyaar se watchman se khehna aapki ball yaha aa gyi hai

Aur aap lene aaye hai

Waha koi fighting nhi

Maan : hmm

Maan held dev hand and left to take ball...

************

Dekha maa aapne dono kitna ladte hai

Savitri : Rashmi is umar mein nhi ladenge toh kb ladenge

Maan Singh Khurana : elder son of Rashmi & Raghav Khurana, he is 11 years Old and studying in Sixth Class.

Dev Khurana : younger brother of Maan, and his age is Seven years Old & studying in 1st class.

Anvesha Khurana : youngest member of khurana Family, her age is four years old, & in Nursery class.

Dev : bhai aaj yaha koi nhi

Chalo chalte hai

Maan : ruk hum andher jaayenge

Dev : bhai bhoot

Maan : koi bhi bhoot maan singh khurana ko nhi dra sakta hai

************

Maan : ball toh yhi aani chaiye thi

Maine issi direction mein maara tha

Toh gyi kaha

.

Dev toh waha bushes mein dekh

.

Dev zadiyo mein dekh

Mein thoda is side mein dekhta hu

Dev : hmm

.

.

Dev is busy in seeing around bushes, someone tap on his shoulder...

Dev : bhai mujhe nhi mili

Aapko mili kya

He turns and screamed...

Bachaooo

.

He run to save own self from ghost... & hit with maan...

Maan : dev kya huya tujhe

Dev : bhai waha bhoot hao

Maan : firse shuru ho gya

Dev : bhai maine schi mein dekha

Aap maante kyun nhi

Maan : chl

Dev : mujhe nhi jaana

Maan held his hand & drag to the side where his brother seen ghost.

Dev : mummma

.

Chodo mujhe

.

Nhi jana

.

Nhi janaa

Maan : chup

Dev held his shirt & wipe the nose...

Maan : ye kya kr rha hai

Dev : ek toh mujhe yaha laaye aap

Aur ab daat rhe ho

Maan : bs dev

Dekh yaha koi nhi hai

.

Dev sees all around and take deep breath but this relax birth is so sort , someone held his hand ...

Dev : bhai bhoot

Maan sees his brother side and sees one girl standing in front of both , her one hand is doll and another hand she carrying his ball, her hair falling on her face, only half portion of eyes and lips visible in between of her face...her lips around all red... I think something is here...

Dev try to take hand back but that girl holding his finger tightly...

Maan : chodo isse

She scared to hear his loud voice & take step back ...

Maan : ball do mujhe

She denied...

Maan : tumne mujhe mna kiya

Dev : bhai wo bhoot hai

Chalo na

.

She innocently looks towards dev & she not getting anything but get understands only one thing, he taking her side... She again come dev side but poor dev in fear hold maan so tightly...

Maan : bhai ye mere piche kyun pdi hai

She held dev shirt and before she says, maan held her hand & push her, she fall on ground and cried , he pick ball and then held dev hand and left...

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Rashmi : kya huya dev ko maan

Maan : mom kuch nhi

Waha koi ladki thi

Aur ye usse bhoot smjh ke dar gya

Dev : mumma wo bhootni thi

Uske baal yu aange the sbhi face pe

Aur bhai ne toh bechari bhootni ko bhi dra diya

Maan : bs dev

Savitri : koi bhoot nhi hota hai

Maan : sun liya dev

Dev : hota hai

Wo fir se aa gyi

Wo dekho

.

He point towards gate , rasmhi & savitri look towards door...

Ji namastey

Mein rano

Aur ye meri beti geet

Geet beta aap piche kyun chup rhi hai

Bahar aayo

Rano held her arms and take her out from behind...

Geet : na

Rano : acha bolo kisne aapko maara

Rano bend on her level, geet placed head on her shoulder & point towards maan...

Rano pick her doll in arms & come to near maan...

Bte kyun kiya aapne asa

Maan : isne mere bhai ko daraya

Dev : bhai ye bhootni nhi hai

Rano laugh to hear dev words , dev hold rashmi pullu tightly...

Rano : aapko asa kyun laga bte

Dev : wo waha koi rhta nhi na

Rashmi : maaf krna behenji

Bacho ki wajh se aapko aur gudiya ko takleef huyi

Rano : ji koi nhi

Geet idher dekho

Geet : na

Rasmhi : maan sorry kaho usse

Maan : mom

Rashmi : maan

Rano : rhehne dijiye bache hai

She patted maan cheek and said koi nhi

Rano put geet down in front of maan , she try to turn her face, but rano said geet nhi

Dekho ye maan hai

Aur ye

Dev : hey

Am dev

She cutely look towards dev and move hand in his direction , but maan not like she ignore his and ready to talk with his brother, due to dev he pushed her and here dev turn the party...

Maan : dev

She give him cute glare and turn the face another side for making her again scared...

Dev : bhai aap usse dra rhe ho

Dev come in front of maan and held little angle hand and said mein dev

Aur ye mere bhai hai maan

Geet look towards rano and geet naam batao apna inhe

Geet : geet

Dev held her hand and said mere sath khelongi

Rano : jaayo dono khel lo kuch der

Aur ha is baar no ladai

Dev : sorry aunty

Mein dar gya tha

Rano smile and patted both children cheek, dev take her to own room...

Maan not like all this , he glares both and going left , but his mom stop him...

Rashmi : maan aapne abhi tak sorry nhi kaha

Rano : par

Rashmi : karan kuch bhi ho

Choti hai na wo maan

Bilkul annie ki tarah

Usse koi yu push kre toh

He get angry to hear about baby sister and look towards rano & said sorry

Wo dev uske khule baal aur face pe kuch tha sayad

Dekh ke darr gya tha

Rano smiles and said geet bhi na

Actually behenji huya ye

She try to copy me, she pick my make up kit and start applying own self...fir sayad usse window se kuch dekha toh wo bahar aa gyi

Maine na pure ghar mein dund liya usse

Par wo mujhe bahar milli rote huye

Then watchman tell about your sons

Wo aaye the yaha

Rashmi : aaiye na sath mein tea pite hai

Aur baat chit bhi ho jaayengi

In all this maan left in angry mode, here he come in room and sees dev & geet both sitting together and making drawing...

Ye nhi

Ye wala color karenge

Dev : nhi geet

Ye green

Geet : ye wala geen

Dev : green

Geet : geen

Maan : tumhe smjh nhi aata

Ye green hai

Na ki geen

Geet throw the color on him and hold own doll tightly...

Maan : tumne mujhpe color fake

Dev : bhai

Usse drao mt

Maan : tu chup baith

Geet try to hide own self , but he come near her and held her hand...

Geet : chodo mujhe

.

Chodo

Dev : bhai please

Maan : geet meri taraf dekho

Geet : bad boy

Maan : tumne mujhe bad bola

.

Geet bite on his hand tightly and run from here...

Maan : usne mujhe kata na

Aaj mein isse chodunga nhi

.

Dev : bhai

Maan held her doll and come down...

Geet sitting on mother lap and sees he coming her side...

Geet : meri doll

Rashmi : maan usse doll do uski

Maan give her glare and throw the doll on floor...

Geet : meri doll ko maara

Dev pick the doll and put her in lap...

Dev : ab thik

.

Again she give smile to my brother and bite on my hand... He give her last glare and left...

Rashmi : maan asa hi hai

Geet beta

Aap na unse jitna darongi na

Wo aapko utna darayenge

Toh drna nhi

Geet : drna nhi

Savitri : ha

Kissi se nhi drte

Ye aapke liye

Geet : choco

Rashmi : ha choco

Rano : ab mein chalti hu

Aaj hi shift huye hai

Aur bhut sa kaam pada hai

Aap sb kal aana jaroor

Mohinder aap sbse milke bhut khush honge

Rashmi : ji

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Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago

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