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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Maan! Tell me... you are doing this or not," Geet asked angrily.

"No... A big NO," Maan said annoyed at her heavily pregnant wife who will just not budge from her stance.

"So this is your final decision?" she asked angrily pointing her index finger towards him.

But upon seeing him defiant towards her, she said rather shouted "Okay! I understand very well. Now that I am eight months pregnant with your twins and doesn't look beautiful anymore, you are enjoying being with those chicks," saying this she went away from there stomping her foot.

"What the hell?" shrieked Maan and ran behind his lady love to placate her.

As soon as she entered inside their room she sat on the couch and caressing her big swollen belly and said "You see my children, how your dad no more loves your mumma and is enjoying with those chics. Would you guys also forget me when I'll get old? Huh! Tell babies?" saying this she started sobbing while Maan who was standing at the threshold of the door made a face and coming inside said "Geet! Why are you involving my babies in it?"

"Huh! Yes! Now everything revolves around you. Till I got pregnant it was always me... but now... Babaji... Why have you chose this dusht daanav as my husband," she cried dramatically raising her both hands in the air, bursting the ear drums of Maan who has to put his hands on his ears to prevent his ears from getting damaged.

'Geet's babaji! I think it should be me in her place asking you why did you make me fall for such a crazy girl. Well! Maan! I think you should agree with her insane demand rather then bearing her craziness,' he murmurs to himself and then moving towards her said "Geet! Baby! I'll wear that locket as you wished, just stop crying."

At this Geet looked at him with teary eyes while a smile soon graced her pink lips.

Clapping her hands in glee she took out the chain with a heart shape pendant on which it was beautifully inscribed 'GEET KA MAAN' and make him wear it threatening him to never remove it and always kept it in a way so that everyone can have a look at it.

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BY IDUNNO

Ma...an...! hum,,,,,,,Geet bolo kya kehna chahati ho...?
Maan ye Taweez dekha...? Main aap ke liye layi hoon, kyonki aapko duniya main kisiki nazar na lage, aap jahan bhi ho bhagawan aapko khush rakhe, bus yehi meri dua hai, abse har khushi aapki, mera sab pyar aapka, aur mera din aapse shuru hoga aur raat aap se khatam, main aapke charno mae mera jeevan vyathit krna chahati hoon Maan, mujhe swi karoge...?
Geet...neki aur puch puch, main to kab se is bat ka intzar kar raha tha, main bahut khush hoon, main vada karta hoon,mera hur din tumse shuru hoga aur har raat tumpe khatam, dekho us chand ko, aapni sheetlta se maan ko khush kar deta hai vaise hi jab tumhare paas hota hoon maini santi aur bharpur pyaar mehsoos karta hoon, bus tum,main aur ye chand aapni jeevan ki nayi kahani likhega.,,
Maan...hum...Geet he try to come close to her and suddenly song started and both starlated,

Maan and geet look each other...,,
LISTEN THIS SONG-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xHlBIp0maGo
MALE-- (Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara) - 2 --
FEMALE-- (Aah, aah) Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara --
MALE-- Ithlaati hawa, neelam sa gagan Kaliyon pe yeh behoshi ki nami Aise mein bhi kyoon bechain hai dil Jeevan mein na jaane kya hai kami
geet rais her eys and blinks at him ...?
maan gives her smile song continue...
-FEMALE-- Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara
maan blinks at her and she turn her face in shyness --
MALE-- Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara
she looks at maan again and song continue to play... --
FEMALE-- Jo din ke ujaale ne na mila Dil dhoonde aise sapne ko Is raat ki jagmag mein doobi Main dhoond rahi hoon apne ko --
MALE-- Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaara --
FEMALE-- Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara
maan teases her and says listen what my heart says --

MALE-- Aise mein kahin kya koi nahin Bhoole se jo humko yaad kare
Ek halki si muskaan pe jo
Sapnon ka jahan aabaad kare
geet raise her eyes in anger at him as if she says why I am not there for you?
--MALE--
Yeh raat bheegi bheegi, yeh mast fizaayein Utha dheere dheere voh chaand pyaara pyaar Kyoon aag si lagaake gumsum hai chaandni Sone bhi nahin deta mausam ka yeh ishaara
Maan gives smile to her and teases her what a beautiful song geet says talk of my heart
I really miss my misti...@
oh so now I understand why you said aise mae yaha koi nahi bhule se jo humko yaad kare haina...?

aare geet you get angry for nothing...mera wo matlab thoda hi tha?
kya main tumhe bewkuf lagti hoon ki main samj na sakoon?haan bolo...?
oh my my geet you are so budhu...don't understand anything..?
geet get more angry and says chup bilkul chup ab ek sabd munh se nikala to ,aur meri baat sun lijiye main ab aapse baat nahi karnewali i am going ...samje?
kanga ja rahi ho...?
main maike chali jaungi tum dekhte rahiyo...!



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geet...geet...geet you are incorrigible...how to make you understand?

you are the misty understand...?how can I love you someone?how can u think like this...?you dont have trust on me...? itnahi samji ho tum muje...? he become too depressed and geet just stop there and feel bad for her mu...dont close the page picture abhi baki hai yaro...good night.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
written by RM 14



Geet and Maan were in their room and Maan was getting ready for office..

Geet bought a locket [Taveez]for Maan ..she believed it will be lucky for him

But Maan didn't believe in all this ..so he was denying ..

"Maan pls pahan lo na ..wear it pls.."

"No I won't Geet ..you know na I don't believe in all this ..than why forcing?"

"Maan pls wore it na..for me pls ..o/w I would say you are the same dusht danav ..nothing changed after marriage.."

She make angry face and show her finger to him..what to do than Maan have to wear it ..how he could not..after all he don't wanted to hurt Geet in anyway..



He wore it but with Geet's hands..



"Agar tum pahnaogi toh pahanuga ..Maan singh khurana bhi kuch nahi kar sakta jab Geet handa kuch karne ki thaan le.."

"Geet handa nahi ab Geet Maan singh khurana .."she said with attitude..

"Jarur main hi pahna deti hoon..isme kya hai.."she bceame so happy too..

She hugged him first ..

"Maan aap bahut acche ho ..really ..bilkul bhi dusht danav nahi ho..mere pyare Maan.."

He hugged her tightly..

"Maan leave me na ..ye pahaniye na.."

"So who started haan!!..I or you..tell me my Mishty.."he winked.

"Aap bhi na ..ye lijiye .."

He make him wore that and than Maan left for office..

After sometime she remembered that she forgot to give lunch to him..she headed to office and when she entered in office she saw Maan giving the locket to a lady ..she became angry again..how could he do this? how could he ? she stepped in and took locket from the lady..

"Geet stop and listen to me .."

"Maan I am going home ..i will see you..you can't keep one gift of mine.."

"But Geet baat toh suno ..let me explain.."

But she didn't heard and left from there ..

When she reached home..after her Maan also reached with that lady ..now Geet saw that she was crying..

"What happened to her ?"

she thought

Maan asked Nakul to take care of the lady and serve her something..and he rushed to his room..

Where Geet was lying on bed ..


"Geet meri baat toh suno.."


"Ab kya suno ..kisi ko dena tha toh mujhse liya kyu? Natak kyu kiya?"


"Uff Geet ..tumhe maloom bhi hain..maine unhe who kyu diya ? he was in angry mode but calm down in next min...


Maan hold her hand and said "listen to me .."


And told her everything..the fact was that the lady was an employee's wife who was worried for her husband's health which was not improving from many days and she too believe in lockets and all..


Maan thought if this locket can help her ..as our believe is more imp than anything ..than may be it will help


Her and so he was giving her that locket and Geet misunderstood it ..


"You know Mr. Rajeev na ? bas unhi ki wife hain..tumne is Taveez ko dene wale baba ki itni tareef ki ki maine socha isse kisi ka bhala ho jaye toh kitna accha ho..bas isiliye..par agar tumhe Manzoor nahi hain toh main.."


Geet put her finger on his lips and said with teary eyes ..

"You don't believe in all this still you wanted to do for her best and for that you believed in locket too..


My mistake..i am so sorry ..i am very bad..i am feeling very bad.."


"Aww my Mishty..it wasn't all your fault ..leave it na ..you understood that's good .."

"I want to meet the lady.."


Sure come

And they met the lady and give the locket to her ..praying for her husband's health..and apolozise too..

She became so happy and left giving them blessings..

"Now see this locket is lucky for me..for us..see how many blessings we get.."


"Hmm Maan ..but I am sorry again.."

"No sorry ...no thankyou..bas tum gussa mat hua karo.."

"Kya main hi hamesha gussa hoti hoon.!! Jaise ki Maan singh khurana toh kabhi gussa hote hi nahi..


Gussa toh naak par rahta hai hamesha .."she made baby face..

"Oho!! Geet phir se..!! tum itna fight karti ho.."


"Main hi sab karti hoon na ..aap toh .."before she could complete her sentence Maan lifted her up in his arms and took her to the room..

"Mera wo matalb nahi tha ..samjhi..aur haan ..main bhi bahut kuch karta hoon ..Tum room main chalo ..than I will show you what I can do.."he again winked


Geet resisted but Maan hold her firmly..and lovingly..than Geet melted and hold her ears first and than

put her arms around his neck ..

Maan smiled and kissed her forhead.





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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi
Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnabi
Dono Tanaha Se The
Par Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi
Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi




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Tum ho tum ho tumhi ho sanam mere humraaz sanam mere humraaz
Bhool na jaana door na jaana oh jaane jana pyaar nibhana...
Tum ho tum ho tumhi ho sanam mere humraaz sanam mere humraaz
Bhool na jaana door na jaana oh jaane jana pyaar nibhana
Tum ho tum ho tumhi ho sanam mere humraaz sanam mere humraaz




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#65
ye sama
ye sama hai gaane gaane ka

so let's rock




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Kitaben bahut si padhi hongi tumne
magar koi chehra bhi tumne padha hai
padha hai meri jaan nazar se padha hai
bata mere chehre pe kya kya likha hai
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Our Marriage Deal

Part 1

The khurana masion was busy as always but today it was extra busy with the instructions of their chotie mensaab aka mrs.geet maan singh khurana,she was excited as her sister came after 2yrs of her training at London under her dream celebrity of famous fashion house,her trip was more of fighting a war ,and the drama events that followed changed whole life of handas and khuranas well hers too,but now when she was finally returned things were falling in their places... finally...she came last week and today was a party at handas place after that her sister meethi was going to stay here at her place ,she smiled at that thought of meethi, she was the close one to geet after her parents,when geet was 15 she lost her family in an accident and rajjinder brother of mohinder took care of geet, and smrithi welcomed her with love,even though they both loved geet like their own daughter but geet was always hesitant with them,she couldn't express herself freely before them like she was with her parents and a thought that she was extra member and a burden on their sweet little family always pulled her in a shell in expressing her needs,but meethi was more of friend than sister to geet,if geet was back to bubbly self it wouldn't b wrong to say its just because of meethi,both confined their dreams with eachother,they shared their first crush experience to meethi first kiss,none could say they were not real sisters until geet could call smrithi as badi maa,even after efforts smrithi couldn't able to make geet cal her maa,well for a 15yr old who was soo close to her mom was difficult to give that place to another one,knowing geet feelings very well she didn't push much and settled with badi maa.she did feel bad when geet started calling shakshi mom,but felt content afterwards that her daughter did got motherly love.geet was pulled out of meethi thoughts when a servant asked her where he should keep the vase,she replied him and gave a final look to the room which was decorated for meethi.

Geet was busy in arranging kitchen when dadi and sakshi came there,both gave a knowing look to eachother seeing geet talking with nakul showing and arranging things on shelfs,dadi was about to turn from there when priya held her stopping to face the reality.

Dadi:aap hume aur kyun guilt feel kahrarahe ho sakshi..

sakshi:nahi maa,aisi bath nahi yeh jo sab horaha hai yeh inn khi rishthey khi sachhai hai,humne bohoth kohshish khi maa...iss sab koh rokkne khi...par maa geet khi khushi khey liye hume sab karna hoga...agar meethi khi aane seh geet khush hai.. toh!?

Dadi:haan sab,meethi khi aane sehbohoth khush hai,par sakshi kya tumhe nahi lagtha meethi khi aana kisi toofan seh kam nahi...

sakshi:maine sab kuch waqt par chod diya maa..dhekthey hai kya hoga...humne kuch socha toh,kuch aur hi hogaya aur abh mein kuch aur sochna nahi chahtha maa..

They both stopped their discussion seeing yash approaching the table,he narrowed his eyes at his mother and wife who stopped talking seeing him

Yash:kya hua,aisi kya bath hai aap dohno muje dhek kar chup hogaye...

Both turned their eyes indicating him to look at the place and yash gave a hard look to the scene before averting his eyes.

Dadi:yash ,tumne maan seh bath khi...mera mathlab...

Yash:nahi maa,maan aaj kal ek project mein busy hai,muje nahi lagtha uss eh patah hai meethi wapas aayi hai...agar patah hotha toh...

Dadi:hume bhi wahi darr hai yash...kahi maan...

sakshi:maa muje nahi latha maan aisa kuch kahrega,maan geet koh kabhie takleef nahi dheyga...

Yash:wahi meri bhi darr hai sakshi,maan kabhie geet koh takleef nahi dheyga.

Dadi:yeh sab humari zidd khi waje she horahi hai,agar hum neh...

Yash & sakshi:nahi maa..

Before they could speak geet reached them with steaming breakfast and all faked a smile at her,everyone was fighting a battle with in themselves,they were fearing about the party and aftermath but alas none could avoid that,soon annie and Vicky joined them with cheerful smiles which brought a smile on everyone face.as always both were in masti mood and were pulling eachother legs and asking geet to take their side fed up with their bickering geet finally shouted at them to finish their breakfast first.as on routine maan shouted for geet to get his things which brought a roaring laughter from the sibbilings.

Vicky:bhai,just wants a excuse Bhabhi...

Annie:true,harr roz aap unn khi things arrange karthi ho,still he needs you...

Geet stilled for aa moment with her words but soon composed and ordered them lovingly to finish their meal as both r getting late for their clg.on reaching their room she found it was totally messed up,geet was visibily angry looking at the room but maan was still busy in throwing things around from the perfectly placed shelf.

Geet:maan she shouted a little bit as he was unaware of her presence

Maan:geet meri blue file milnahi rahi,tumne kahi dheyka kya...still engrossed in his search

Geet:blue file!!?

Maan:haan kal rath hi prepare kiya tha,abh patah nahi kaha rakkhi hai...

Geet:maan kal rath aap study mein kaam kar rahe they so obviously it will b in study maan...

Maan gave a sheepish smile finally turning towards her,but seeing her angry eyes he frowned and took astep ahead only to stumble on the things scattered ,he looked around and found the reason of her fury ,he gulped knowing what was coming and was about to made a dash to his study but stopped hearing geet voice.

Geet:maan,we need to talk..

Maan :no,not now geet I am in hurry,sham koh plz..

Geet:sham koh!!?party mein!?really maan...

Maan:haan ..hm..rath koh ..hmm..

Geet;teek hai!but remember mr.khurana u need to pick me at 7.

Maan just nodded,he dare not oppose her mostly now,she is nothing but a burning lava,its not his fault she ruined him,it was her mistake to make him clumsy who was otherwise perfect and preffered things at place,but it's a universal rule if someone was there to take care of your needs and you,you r tend to spoil.geet was that someone in his life,he was always independent from childhood as he was elder its not shakshi pampered him,but seeing her busy with other two sibling,so he spared her his work making them proud at his maturity,but when after years geet started to take care of his things first he was hesitant to stop her,then they become frnds and she took care of his needs as afriend and after days he was habituated of her taking care of himself,but at tyms he ruined their room with things around which blowed her like today and she will start her lecture on keeping thigs at place but she had to get things straight it was her who was responsible to spoil his perfectness which he lacked now.he made his way inside his office thiking about how to escape the long lecture in evening.

As he decided he got ready in office itself and messaged geet to b ready and come down while as soon as he reached home,he knew his family may reach soon and just he and geet wilb left behind,a perfect chance for geet, he just prayed she must forget the morning issue by now,he deliberately didn't enter the room and as his prayers were heared geet came smiling broadly she was soo excited to attend the party,this was soo unlike her,well she likes party but today she was a way much excited ,he even try to ask her but she just smiled at him in reply.he shrugged thiking mayb she was going to meet her family.as soon as they reached geet impatiently dragged him inside,he was following her with a frown seeing her anxiety ,as they entered mr & mrs handa welcomed them warmly and maan asked the question which he asked geet a week before but still he didn't get any answer.

Maan:papa,yeh party kis khushi mein...

MERI AANE KHI KHUSHI MEIN

And the smile on maan lips froze hearing HER voice,he slowly turned to face her but next moment he was crashed by a body,but he stood schoked unable to feel anything except the grip of geet loosening from his palm befor she completely left his hand,he turned to face her only to saw her smiling at him.

Geet left from there after meeting her parents,she met an angered pari who was glaring her,geet only raised her eyes asking why she was angry...

Pari:tum ek lauti biwi hogi,apni pati koh kisi aur khey sath dhek kar khush hai...

Geet:who koi aur nahi meethi hai..maan khi pyar..

Pari:aur tum..tum maan khi biwi ho..

Geet:haan lehkin tuh bhool rahi hai maan neh mujhse kyun shadi khi...maan aur meethi khi shadi hone wali thi ...who bechari toh shadi mein pounchi nahi paayi...uss khi flight miss hogaya due to weather and all adding to that dadi was severly ill aur maan khi shadi unn khi aakri iccha thi...

Pari:guests aur situation koh dhek kar tumhe mandap par beitna pada..aur tumhai shadi hogayi...sach toh yehi naa

Geet:haan hogayi shadi par sach yeh hai khi mein dev she pyar karthi hoon aur maan meethi she..

Pari:sach mein geet yeh tum muje bol rahi ho ya khudh koh samjarahi ho..

Pari uttered thius words looking at direction of maan,who was glancing at geet continuously while meethi was trying to grab his attention...

Geet:abh meethi aagayi naa...sab teek hojayega aur mein kuch din mein ..aur yeh dev kaha reh gaya let me cal him.

Geet left leaving pari in thoughts,she can clearly see how much maan loves her but geet like a fool still believes he loves her sister...

Geet smiled warmly at maan taking steps towards him,maan who was waiting for her glance felt relieved ,as soon as geet reached him ,but she walked past him and hugged dev who just reached there, it just hurted him more,he was in dilemma from the moment he saw meethi,why his heart didn't felt the joy he should after meeting his love now geet hugging dev was last straw..he excused himself from meethi and went to bar..thinking of the events that followed their marriage day..

Every one was in panic as there was no chance for meethi to reach,as dadi was ill they decided the date on sudden notice and called her to reach asap..it was almost 6 months to their engagement .the guests filled in the hall owing to their reputation and dadi health they switched geet with maan after lot of discussion...dev too was there who proposed geet last month..before marrying maan,geet asked him to trust her,she will come back to him...dev to gave a nod and the marriage happen without raising any murmurs...but the next day meethi almost attempted suicide seeing her sister and love tie the knot,if it not geet and her words she could have taken drastic step...geet assured her it was for dadi and their rescept that she took her place in mandap and will dicorce maan in an year then they can marry as decided and she will marry dev..but the year turned out 2 owing to meethi work ans surprisingly neither the elders nor dev pressed the matter for this 2 yrs...but when last week meethi came back geet started her work to entangle herself from khuranas...

Maan eyes strained on geet who was talking with dev ,she seems ike quite excited to meet him..why not..she loves him ...he knew she loves him,but it pained deep,he knew he had to let her go one day still it hurt like hell...he noticed geet excited expressions but what caught his eyes were the grim expression of dev,he was not even seemed half of amout excited as geet..why!? he decided to ask...

His whole body burned In rage hearing geet was moving to us in few days,he couldn't believe dev completely if he didn't said what her plans were...he decided to see how far she could go leaving him,her home, her loved ones..just because she loved him to an extent to leave everything behind...he eyed dev with rage and left from there to immerse himself in drinks...

Meethi looked at maan she could feel the change in him...the way he looked at her and the way he kept looking at geet,she knew somewhere she was loosing him,her every convo with him was filled with geet until she stopped few months back...like she didn't influence his life now,which irked her more...she was not ready to bend before fate again for once she let maan go with circumstances but not now..she will have her love by crook r hook ..even if she have to hurt geet..it was fate which made her delay on her wedding day mayb she lost to fate that day but not today...she will win

Maan and geet drived in silence towards km ,geet was contemplating her words how to tell maan about her shifting to us,she did let her badi maa knew today and she convinced after a hell of argument but the bigger part was still lay ahead to convince maan and dadimaa along with maa,papa...she decided to break the awkward silence...

Geet:maan..

Maan:hmm

Geet:who kal subah meethi di aarahi hai km,waha rahengi who kuch din..

Maan :hmm

Geet:who mein soch rahi thi...abh meethi bhi wapas aagayi toh..mein dev khey sath us chalijaon...who

Maan:teek hai geet,mein parson khi ticket kahradhoonga tumhara..

She expected everything but not this reply..that maan himself will send her away she felt tears building up but controlled..

Geet:parson...who dev..mein..

Maan:nahi geet dev koh math kaho..acha nahi lagtha haan maaanthi hoon who tumhara honewala pati hai aur tum uss khi zimedhari ho..par abhi khey liye mera bhi kuch farz hai..

Geet:farz..

Maan:hmm,aur haan tum maa,papa aur dadi khi chinta math karna mein samhaloonga..u just concentrate on dev and you..

Before geet could answer they reached ,as soon as they entered their room maan excused to his study leaving geet in thoughts...the following morning meethi arrived to stay at mansion and khuranas welcomed her warmly...with in half an hour meethi felt the difference she was being treated as guest while each and everyone was asking r taking geet help with small and big things,seems like whole house depends on geet ,she silently observed how much geet involved in their lifes and silently oved to make herself do the same...all went to have their bf while meethi opted to serve instead of taking with them..she needs to earn browny points soon,geet was about to serve annie when maan shouted for her asusual drawing laugh from the sibblings,she patted annie head and left to see what maan needs,curious meethi too followed,while annie and Vicky frowned at meethi where as elder khuranas shared wicked glances with mischevious smiles...

Maan was asusual making fuss of room for his tie and when geet reached she dragged him forcly and made him sit on the bed the precise moment meethi stopped in her tracks...she was amused seeing geet authority on maan..and the way she ranting him morethan that the smile on maan face and his calm...like he was enjoying her rant ,the thing hit her hard ,he was never this way with her...and will he b ever!?and the worst was the moment he got his tie he left the room just passing a smile at her, even not bothering to ask her presence at door...her heart burnt seeing her love ignoring her.she clenched her fists seeing geet still involved in arranging maan room...yes,it was his room if everything went right it had to b hers and maans...and seeing geet in the room enraged her..

Meethi:toh geet,yeh hai maan kah room,jo jaldi mera hone wala hai..

Geet stopped her moments and turned to look at meethi ,she forced a smile and replied..

Geet:haan di..yeh hai ..room..

Meethi:aur yeh kya haal banaya geet room kah..tumhe patah nahi maan koh harr cheese apni jagah chahiye..aur yeh kya mess banaya hua hai tumne..

Geet:maine nahi di..yeh mess khudh maan neh kiya ek tie kya nahi mila poora wardrobe koh hi bahar nikaal diya..

Meethi was schoked seeing the mess:maan neh...aisa ho hi nahi saktha...tumne shayad cheese uss khi hisab she nahi rakki hogi...abh toh yeh sab mein samhaloongi acche she..mein bhi dhek thi hoon maan koh kaise koi cheese nahi milega...

Geet hesitated :nahi di..aap rehne doh..woh maan ..

Meethi:kya tum mujhse zyada jaanthi ho maan koh!nahi naa...toh tum jao mein dhey khoongi..aaj she yeh sab mein khudh samhaloongi.

Geet left the things she was holding on bed and was about to leave but stopped at door and just tried to warn meethi:di..woh files..maan khi..

Meethi:tum jao geet,mein dheklongi waise bhi mein pehli baar toh yeh sab nahi karrahi hoon,tumhari aane she pehle hi mein iss ghar mein aayi hoon aur kounsi sheese kaha hai muje bhi patah hai...maine aur maan neh bohoth waqt bitaya hai yeha ..humari clg khi tym mein..toh mein samhaloongi..tum jao..

Geet left with heavy heart ,she tried to smile but tears made their way..she cleared them immediately before anyone watching them and with a smile she went to dinning hall,seeing geet alone dadi inquired about meethi and her reply schoked the elders while maan looked composed which broke her further...she kept repeating in her heart maan loves her di,but the pain was increasing with each passing second and maan announced her departure breaking her more..the elder khuranas nodded sadly while the younger ones left the table in hurt and anger...maan assured geet that he will look after annie and Vicky and she should concentrate on her and dev...this angered her and she left to kitchen while maan made his way towards his room.he need to made meethi taste her own medicine..

On reaching she saw meethi struggling with the things around he was barely able to con troll from last night his talk with dev and now his patience had finally givenup..

Mann:yeh tum jo kar rahi ho ,hum dohno jaanthey hai uss she koi faida nahi..

Meethi:maan who...mein bas..tumhara room...

Maan:yeh humara yaani geet aur mera room hai...tum she zyada uss she patah hai kounsi cheese kaha honi hai...

Meethi with tears in her eyes:yeh sab mera hona tha maan,yeh room,tum ,yeh ghar sab kuch...

Maan:par hua nahi..abh yeh sab geet kah hai...

Meethi:to iss mein meri kya galathi maan...jo kuch bhi hua meri kya galathi hai...sirf itna khi I love u still love u but u..

Maan:toh meri aur geet khi bhi koi galathi nahi hai..bas meethi abh jo hua hogaya mein geet khi jagah tumhe kabhie nahi dhey saktha...geet neh toh muje chod neh kah faisla karliya who kal rath jaa rahi hai yeha she...abh tumhe yeha rehna hai mein nahi rokoonga par mein tumhe kabhie who nahi dheypaoonga jo tum mujhse chahthi ho..PYAR ,,uss par abh sirf geet kah haq hai..

Meethi:geet jaa rahi hai...aur tum ..uss e\seh..

Maan:haan jaa rahi hai dev khey sath..mein khush hoon uss khey liye..

Meethi:maan kya hum..

Maan left without giving any reply aand the next two fays went in blur and it was tym for geet to leave the mansion everyone bidded her bye keeping stone in their heart meethi was silent spectator to the happenings..she still felt she may win maan andmaan himself dropped geet at airport with dev he waited until she left from his sight defeating he returned home..he acted strong in front of geet and his family but inside his room he couldn't stop his tears...

On the other hand geet too let of the tears she was holding from the moment maan left her,on seating beside dev in the flight she couldn't help but to cry on her fate,dev who knew what geet was feeling just patted her silently saying he willb with her with each step of life...

After a week...

It was week ,geet thought sadly while entering her apartment but was schoked seeing maan already seating comfortably ..she was confused then thiking it as her another imagination she dropped her shopping bags and directly seated beside him ,she looked at him for few moments then closed her eyes for a brief moment after opening she expected him to vanish like before..but to her surprise he was still sitting there but instead of smiling like always at her condition,this tym there was concern in his eyes..she blinked her eyes two three tyms to shove her imagination away but...

Maan:geet,tum teek ho..

Geet:mein toh teek hoon par aap koh hua kya hai..abhi tak aap koh humesha khi tarah gayab hojana chahiye tha naa..

Maan:gayab..humesha khi tarah..

Geet:haan,wahi toh app karrahe ho mere sath jab she yeha aayi hoon aap aise hi toh tang karthey ho muje...

It didn't took a rocket science to him to know that geet was imagining him that too from a week,he decided to play along..

Maan:accha aisa kya kiya maine geet..

Geet:kya kiya..kya kuch nahi kiya maan kal khi bath leh loh meri poori khana jal gayi ap khi waje she...aur toh aur aap muje nahane bhi nahi dhey they..maan waha bhi,,chi chi aur haan aap muje sone bhi nahi dhey they ho...aap neh kiss...uff mein bhi naa chado..

Maan eyes actually popped out hearing her imaginations about him in kitchen,washroom and bedroom,a smirk adored his face mayb after a week

Maan:toh geet,tum mere bare mein itna soch rahi thi...khi..tumari imaginations itna high hai...waise aur kya kya kiya tumne mere sath...

Geet:maine ..maine kya kiya sab toh aapne kiya..aur jab bhi aap koh choona chahthi hoon aap gayab..abh bas jao aur tang math karo naa maan.

She said it with such cuteness,for a momnt he really thought did he actually did x-rated things with his wife,with whom he spend 2 yrs of his life and fell hardly for her ,when and how he may not know but he was sure he cant b without her,but when she decided to leave him for her sister,he let her have his way just a week to settle matters which was very hard for him,but there was still a fear was geet missing him the way he missed her,was she waiting for him the way he was waiting for her ,the questions which kept on eating him from a week ,he never thought wilb answered in such a lovable way...his geet was thinking and doing naughty things with him in her day dreams.his thoughts and smile broke with geet words

Geet:abh jao naa maan,muje sona hai..aap neh teek she sone bhi nahi diya ..jao abh

Saying she stood up but next moment she found herself in his lap while her lips was sealed by him,her eyes widened knowing it was no dram but all her thoughts stopped with the way he kissed her,she too responded with equal intensity by wrapping her hands around his neck making him sqeeze her more into him,maan slowly left her lips when geet was in need of air,with afinal peck he looked at her only to find her with a eyes closed and a sweet shy smile..

It took few momeents for geet to gain her composure but soon she opened her eyes and was schoked to see maan in real..

Geet:aap sach mein yeha ho..

Maan smiled at her words and just hummed

Geet opened her mouth to say something but closed with apout,next thing she thought was how come maan was inside her house when she locked it..even before she questioned he answered,,

Maan:muje dev neh pick kiya airport she aur yeha drop kiya geet,haan dev jaan tha hai mein aaraha hoon..

Geet:babaji yeh toh meri mann khi baathey bhi padne lage hai..dev koh patah hai aur uss gade neh muje kuch nahi bataya..meera koh bolna padega iss dev khi acchi kabar loh..waise maan yeha hai toh meethi di..woh..

Maan:geet dev koh kosne khi zaroorath nahi hai,dev aur meera neh hi meri help khi thi..aur haan mein jaantha hoon meera dev khi biwi hai aur tum dev she koi pyar vyar nahi karthi..rahi meethi khi bath who wapas London chaligayi..

Geet:kya inhe patah hai dev meera khi shadi hogayi,par kaise babaji..di chahigayi..kyun!?

Maan:haan muje patah hai dev neh muje sab kuch party mein hi boldiya tha..issi liye maine tumhe jaane diya dev khey sath...tum yehi chahthi thin aa meethi khush rahe..toh loh who London mein khush hai abh tum bhi chaloh apni ghar sab wait karrahe hai tumhari..

Geet looked at him schoked:di chaligayi..par who toh maan she pyar karthi hai naa aur maan bhi..issi liye inn dohno khi khushi khey liye mein waha she aagayi..toh phir di kyun chahigayi..yeh sab ho kya raha hai babaji!!??aur yeh maan aise kaise meri mann khi bathey samaj rahe hai!!??

Maan:pehli bath mein meethi she pyar kartha tha..tha abh nahi ,tumne meri dil mein apni jagah iss tarah bana li geet khi kisi aur khi koi jagah nahi..aur meri khushi sirf tumhari sath mein hai..rahi bath meethi khi shayad who bhi iss bath koh samaj gayi..maan said with a smirk

Geet:yeh mein sapna toh nahi dhek rahi hoon,maan bhi mujse pyar karthye hai..aur mein bhi toh unn she..she shied thinking on her words..par ek inute di ..di samajgayi..samajgayi ya inhone samjadiya...kya kuya hoga inhone di khey sath babaji...

Maan:maine kuch nahi kiya...bas itna kaha mein badal gaya hoon,sab kuch pehle jiase nahi raha aur iss bath koh samajne mein tumhari di koh ek hafta laga..

Its true maan was never harsh on meethi but yes he did turned down her advancements,well his family was always there to show where exactly meethi belongs in their family..A GUEST,she did tried to show she can take geet place in family and thier life ,well all her ways were blocked by his sibblings with lovely answers and by his dadi who always compared meethi and geet ,just few comments for a week and she was ready with her packing giving up on her useless trials

geet:kya sach mein di teek hai babji!?kahi who mujhse gussa toh nahi..

maan:nahi baba kisi neh meethi koh kuch nahi kaha..haan Vicky was missing your food and annie was missing your help in studies while mom was fussing over kitchen and dadi was saying how good you were in taking care of Pooja and all ...bas meethi koh yehi samjaya tum kya ho unn khi life mein aur haan meethi tumse gussa bhi nahi hai,who khudh samajgayi kitna bhi kahre who geet khi jagah kabhie nahi lehsakthi naa mere dil mein naa meri zindagi mein naa meri ghar mein

geet had tears in her eyes hearing maan words :bas babaji aur kuch nahi sunn naa kash who muje who bi kehthey jo sabse pehle kehna tha..

maan:I LOVE U GEET

geet:I LOVE U TOO MAAN..par nahi babaji mein yeh nahi boloongi ,inhone muje 7 din sataya naa abh meri baari..waise muje inn she kuch poochna hai ..poochon kya,,pooch hi lehthi hoon.yeh kya meri maan khi baathey kaise jaan li aur jawab bhi dheydiya

maan :who iss liye geet kyun khi yeh sari baathey tumne apni mann mein nahi mujhse khi thi,aur haan I love you kah reply bhi dhey diya muje abh ek aur kiss bantha hai,iss she pehle tum kuch aur bath karne lago

Geet:maan..yeh ..aap..

Even before she opened her mouth,he sealed her lips ...

THE END

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Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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This story is not end with happy note so read at your own risk. All I can assure you, you all will love this OS.

I Wish... (Ek...Akanksha)😭

"Congratulations Geet it's our 51st date" Maan said in exciting tone

"It's not date Mr Khurana" Geet said frustratingly

"Not for you but me" Maan said audibly

"Mr Khurana, will you tell me, what wrong with this girl...This time" Geet asked angrily

Crossed her heart, he is most annoying client and he makes her hooked up with him and in between she matched so many couples. He doesn't like any girl and his Demand is so easy to follow but hard to implement.

"A Sweet And Simple Girl" He told her in first day and from that day she was searching a simple and sweet girl for him but he said no to every girl she arranged.

"Where were you lost" Maan asked sweetly

"No where Mr Khurana" Geet replied

"Now you tell me what lack-ness you notice in girl this time"

"You blame me Geet, it's your fault you can't find a sweet and simple girl for me..Did I asked very which you can't fulfilled" Maan said so innocently but Geet knows he is not at all innocent

Geet rolled her eyes and get angry on him, "Sweet and simple girl, I gives 1000 of pics and select 51 girl till today but you reject and why so, coz...,"

In first girl you said she was too modern

She was too shy

She was not responsible

She was carrying attitude

She was egoist

She preference to her not family

She values money

She was self-centred

She was so wild

She was shying

She was blabbering

She was cunning

She had bad past

She was too sweet

She was too simple

She was a girl whom you want

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50. She was not classy

"Now do Lemme what she hasn't this time" Geet almost scream and grab more attention

"I know Geet, I am irritating you so much but I can't risk my life...I've my Daadi whose happiness is based on me" Maan said very sweetly

She knows she was over-reacting and grab so many attention but he always did that. She is his 50 clients and she completed 65 match-making but he is most annoying client who doesn't like any girl. Poor girls think they don't have compatibility with him but he has some major issue.

His Daadi Ma is right he has mental issue.

"Reason Mr Khurana" Geet voice is low but annoying

"She is annoying Geet"

"What about you Mr Khurana"

"What about Me, Geet"

"You are very interesting" Geet said in sweet coated voice

Maan knows she is taunting him but he likes her taunting, "Stay with me for sometime and then known me how interesting I am"

Geet rolled her eyes, "Flirt with girl whom I matched with you not me" she raise two fingers of her both hand in air

"You are very boring Geet" Maan said

Maan comments hurt Geet face, her face hung but she again gives her smile.

Flashback Start

"Geet you are so boring and I can't lived my life with you" he said

"I am sorry, do tell me what do you want, I'll be do it according"

"Geet I don't like it to teach you Geet" he said

"Just Get lost Geet" He added

Flashback End

"I know my I am boring" Geet said

Geet comment said she hurt with his talk.

"I am so sorry Geet, I am just kidding"

"It's okay Mr Khurana", "Now tell me what do you want to added" Geet said

"Sweet and Simple Girl"

"Sweet and Simple Girl that's it" Geet added

"I'll call off the meeting" Geet added

"Why you are in rush"

"Coz last week I set one more match matching who are going to engage today" Geet taunt

"If you are ready then we will also get engage" Maan said sweetly

"Mr Khurana, flirt with right person" Geet said

She left him

"I am not flirting Geet but I am serious" Maan said

Flashback Start

He saw her first on her In Gurudwara, he went with his Daadi Ma. Later he finds out about her and get to know that she was married girl but her husband left her. He found that she opens a marriage bureau... Match Making Centre... "Matches Made In Heaven And We Match Here."

His Daadi Ma usually said about search a girl and married her, he doesn't have any problem with marriage but he doesn't find a simple and sweet girl for him, who take care of his Daadi Ma.

He wants to know about her and he found out her husband leave her just coz she is not expressive... Or very shy. He can't believe that a man just leave her just coz he doesn't find girl active.

He can choose any girl but he finds her attractive. Yes, she is beautiful which no one can ignore.

He went to her Match Making Centre to know her better, if he go there so he become client.

She tries her level best to make match but how could he when He finds her attractive as well as good for him so how could he choose someone.

He usually ends up with girls and called her to discuss, she is sweet and cute who came to him...He talk with her and knows her better.

She told him why she opt this business, she wants no girl face what she face. She let meet both the party and they talk and knows better, the chance of getting divorced will be low at least no one reject other coz of someone nature.

Maan is so touch with her, feels bad for her. He wants to give her happiness she deserves but he comes to know that she doesn't want to moved on her life coz she thought if she has happiness then she get from him.

All he want to convince her, life is beautiful, live life and forget past and lives in present...

He is confident that one day he will convinced her. The day is not so far.

Few Months Later

Geet is happy not because Mr Khurana is settled but he is busy in these days and their encounter is minimal. She is sometime feeling suspicious about him but she let it go...Maybe one day she finds Perfect match of him or maybe he will find of his own. She wants him to be settle in his life. His Daadi Ma really wants to see him to settle in his life but who can make Mr Khadoos Singh Khurana... He is Dhust Danav...That too Das Sar Wala... Why doesn't he gives her heed.

She doesn't want to poke in someone life but she wants to see him happy too... The time she spent with him, she knows him well... He is a really nice person, he is great-grandson as well as he will be great husband too. Although he is annoying but he is most caring guy she ever met.

Scene Shift To The Evening

Geet got a letter from an unknown person and her long-lost smile is back.

Dear Geet

When you receive the letter, you will be mad on me. I known I would dare to talk to you directly but nothing is normal between us. I am so bad in expressing Geet but I want you give me a chance.

"Will You"

"If your answer is yes than I am sending you something please don't disappoint me...It's not order but request... I'll be waiting for you"

"Your..."

It was a blank

She said, "My Life"

All she want, he comes back to her of his own and they will spend a happy wedded life.

She lost all hope but no days she feels something good happen in her life, maybe her husband realise his mistake and want to say sorry.

She will forgive him as Everyone make mistakes, he realised it that's good for her and her family.

Now they will spend their life together.

Scene Shift

Maan is waiting for her, wearing tuxedo after all tonight he wants to look Dashing for his Princess.

He is really feeling coward in this matter, how can someone arrange date so easily. This is a first time he is doing something like that and he knows this is not an easy task... Preparing presentation is easy but arranging a date is quiet difficult.

He choose a separate place where only they will stay and talk. It is his farm-house which he buy recently and he want to stay with her in this farmhouse.

He lit up the entire area with small colorfully LED lights which illuminating soft light... He decorate the area with pattern of clothes... Moon light gives it lights which enhances the beauty of everything.

Scene Shift

Geet reached there of her own and shocked to saw the arrangement, how much he wasted for all of this. She will scold him for sure, he can ask sorry still she will forgive him...Why this wastage but somewhere she is happy to see everything...He really loves her maybe he realise her absence in his life.

Geet wore a dark maroon colour saari with matching accessories. She is looking sweet yet attractive, for the first time she has done something like that.

Geet step inside and saw the area and her skipped few beat, it's exceptional and phenomenal.

When she reached the dinning area, her smiling pics or very rare pics which she doesn't know when he took but whatever he did, it only shows how much hard work he did for this meeting.

She didn't noticed all the pics he took is recently but she overall to make herself realise may be he was following her that why he is here.

"Where are you, please come, I want to meet you"

"I don't know Geet, you are so desperate to meet me" Maan voice shunned her to the core

Maan doesn't understand why she is that shunned, she is happy few seconds before...Why this shocked face.

"You" Geet somehow manage to say but she is so audible that no one can hear her.

She wants to go back, all her dreams shattered on gain. How could she think everything will be normal in her life. Again she is ignoring that Maan arranged everything for her coz she so wanted to be with her husband.

She is about to move to other side and Maan doesn't understand why she looked so shocked and now she wants to go.

He hold her edge of saari to stops her, today he is angry on her, what he did...

"Mr Khurana, please leave me"

"Why...Geet, today I am not going to leave you"

"What do you want" Geet is emotionally week and he is here to mocking her

"Still you don't know, what I want" Maan asked loosing his hold and Geet get chance and tries to run

Maan hold her hand and spun her in such a way that she again in his secures arms, "YOU"

Geet is shocked, he is again with his revelation. She is always suspicious of him but she never dreams that he thought about her in that way. How could he, he knows about her and her past life. She is married girl and want her husband not anyone else.

"No, this can't be possible" Geet said and wriggling in his arms

"Why this not happen Geet, I love you and want to marry you. .What is wrong in this" Maan asked in frustrated voice

"This is wrong" she shows her Mangalsutra she added, "she is wrong" she pointing her vermilion and seriously noticed it now.

"You came here Geet of her own" Maan voiced is hurt or shows pain

"I thought Rajeev feels sorry for what he did and ready to say sorry .. That's why I am here...How could I be so stupid... I know I don't deserve this" Geet voice is low but shows her craveness of love of her husband

"Geet" Maan wants to say forget him and he is there for her but nothing make sense to him and how he console her.

"I am so sorry Maan"

"Geet please forgive everything and accept me in your life"

"Maan I am not a perfect girl you want in your life and I can't fulfill your any wish...I am not good for you" Geet said, "please let me go" Geet said depressed voice

"You are perfect for me Geet, I don't want anyone... But you" Maan said genuinely, "I know Only You can fulfill my every wish" Maan said desperate voice

"No please don't force me" Geet said

"I never force you Geet"

"Then forget me and forgive me if I ever makes you any wrong sign"

"I never forget you Geet"

"I can't be your, I am already someone else"

"Why you are wasting your time"

"This is my destiny"

"Everyone makes their destiny"

"No, destiny is written by God, we are only do what he had written" Geet said

"Why you hurting yourself"

"I am not hurting myself... I don't want to hurt you and your family"

"Please Geet"

"Maan if we were get married than one year or two years later you realise what mistake you did...You are Gem but I am not and one gem want other gem not some normal person."

"How could think so low Geet"

"Please Maan, I can't take this anymore...Leave Me or I lost myself" Geet said in week tone

"Go Geet, I am not forcing you could, I know you are not ready to listen to me but I only want you as my wife or life...If you are not ready than I am also not ready to marry anyone...You or No-one" Maan said but Geet went from there

"I love you Geet" Maan scream😭

The end

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Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Award time

after so much fun we have to give awards na to our ghsp members
jinki wajh se aaj GHSP itna active jo hai
Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Grey Story of the year
and nomination is

Shadows of Past
You are mine
Mysterious love story
Deceitful love
Beyond of heaven
The Secrets of Seeshmahal
The House of Devil
Kya Khehna



Award goes to



and 1st runner up is

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago

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