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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#301

Awesome update but its getting very dangerous and scary as the devil seems very calm which is a very dangerous sign. Now what will he do with geet and what punishment will he give her for trying to escape. Wish jenny would have told geet a little bit about maan's past, which has increased my curiosity even more. Eagerly waiting for the next update and maan's reaction.

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#302

Nice update dear

Liked it!!

Jenny's thought well protrayed. Guess with Jenny's words she has faced lot in her life and knows more about the world through her unpleasant experience. Did Maan help her out in her difficult times hence she defends him before Geet. Geet is not wrong from her prespective regarding Maan's character judgement owing to her experience with Maan. Maan will surely punish Geet for her escapades plan.

Cliffhanger !!?

Thanks for the pm!

Looking forward to the next update

:))

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#303

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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avem

@avem

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#304

Love the update what a cliff hanger I cannot wait to read thd next part

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#305

Part 10-15

Sorry for replying so late. Thank you so much for the om.

Still couldnt figure out this Maan. Geet is a teenager with lots of dilemma and unknown desire. Wish to see how Geet's parents are and what they arr doing to search Geet. Seems there is a back story of Maaneet.

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#306

Great story... But i didn't like the way maan treat Geet. .. Although its a grey story but any human being wouldn't like it to treat like this... Idk what maan will do with Geet now... Waiting for next. .

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Hia1234

@Hia1234

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#307

I love the update. Still I can't figure out Maan's charecter. And why Jenny always defend him. May be she has some dark past. Please update soon.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#308

Wow lovely update..te way jenny narrating te update was lovely..te way jenny ki pov abt my maan and she defending for him making geet to get angry opps my devil ki sherni was angry..my maan came omg calm before storm..i love te update yar

Edited by Desigirls12 - 7 years ago