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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

deadly teaser he is not gonna do what i think he is gonna do

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

sadistic update god what a man he is at first he made sure geet dosent concieve which made geet mad at him coz she felt cheated and then when she opposed maan gave her deadly punishment that shook her faith in him completely she felt betrayed yet aroused coz of his touches and kisses even when he hurt her still geet was high on him and couldn't deny the passion that maan gives her i guess his dad made him excatly like him which his mom was scared of maan has become a monster exactly like his dad

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Maan is indeed a devil! he punishes Geet! she is helpless ans suffers so much! she is responds 2 him!

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Nice update..

Maan has given punishment to geet..

He is indeed devil..

Thank u for pm..

Waiting for next update..

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SillySoni

@SillySoni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Nice update

Thanks for pm

Update soon.

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zariya1234

@zariya1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#236

he is freak
he started to control geet
birth control, bsdm , playing with mind
this man is making geet a controled robot

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#237

O my god... He hit her with leather belt... Frankly i didnt know the meaning of sadist but after this i searched but what kind of pleasure he derives from hitting her... First i have thought about roughh sex bt its all so scary... Fabulous writing becoz i can feel goosebumps on my skin... It was scary.. if its the starting f his act what will be following... Poor geet...

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#238

omg! What and why did I read this!

Sorry but I can't imagine something as psychotic as this as Maan or any Lead!

FFs, hmm well according to me it means keeping the key characteristics intact within but yes changing or twisting the shades to a logical extent and showing them reacting to the different circumstances. I can be wrong btw!

Maan who we know as a protagonist , one of his main characteristics is That he is everything but not a sadistic abuser. So if he is one in any story there should be some very good logical explanation to that.
(don't get me wrong please, it's just my pov as a reader )

Waiting for that logic behind his pathetic demeanor. So do update soon!

As per the update is concerned it's shocking and Geet should consult an appointment with doctor. Maan is showing classic signs of a psychopath so she should see a psychiatrist and treat him. Yes love can change people but psychopath and sadism affected ones don't feel empathy so they needs to consult docs.

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago