With This Taveez (1) .. MG New * new thd link p1 - Page 7

Sunta hai mera Khuda.. Dil o jaan se chahun Tujh ko yara dilruba 😉

Update kardo 😃
Good Night.. Shab Bakhair 😳

Imtehan hum pyar ka dene Raah dekhen Kia hai nateeja 😉
Na Aaya Yakeen Dil Ko
Jab Naam Apna Dekha
Kagaz Pe Woh Tere Dil Ke
Ye Aakhein Hui Hairan 😳

Listening Old 90's songs and Relishing.. ❤️
Waiting for an update 😉

Thanks for all the lovely comments.

I am used to writing on the blog so I will shift there if comments drop off 😃

So I don't know why you were so worriex because starting was superb.

The fountain in the front ebbed and flowed with colors changing every minute.
The rose garden in the front scented the air alongside the jasmines dotting the periphery of the house.

Perfect description. I could visualise everything. And could also dream of a future where the leads will someday enjoy this scenic beauty.

So we start with a tension between Maan's parents. Seems it's significant. Would wait for the right time to reveal my thoughts. Anyways I have been taught not to leave the preconceived notions outside before entering any web.

Kiran's unhappiness with the way things have turned out, it isn't unjustified. Any mother would be.
But Raj isn't to be blamed. In fact nobody is to be blamed.
They are all the victims of time and circumstances.

One thing I noticed was you mentioned Logan had spent her entire life under the authoritative lady.
Now it brings in the picture two possibilities,
Having lived under authoritarian, she has chosen to become nothing like her mother in law
Or
She has become exactly like her.

She has been suppressed for toi long it seems.


Geet
A victim of circumstances again. Lost her only family.
I don't consider this a marriage. This paper marriage.

Yeah it seems too exciting and interesting to read but in reality it wouldn't be so awesome to be married like this. Especially when she has overheard how unwanted she is.

I am really glad she got accepted into a college and had other things to focus on. Distractions are highly needed at hard times like these.


"I don't care who or what she is Dad. I am not ready for marriage. I am not".

To hear such lines and then getting married to the same person. Pretty bad situation.

But then you can't blame the guy.

Marriage is supposed to be a private affair.

One sacred institution in which people shouldn't be forced into.


Maan is an enigma. I would prefer him that way. Keeps my mind engaged for I am busy figuring out why and hows. Lol😆

So that are meeting after years and he has an agenda.

She isn't aware.

The years had been kind to her, changing her from a girl to a woman. He did notice her. 😉 But then anybody would notice his wife. Even if she is wife just on paper.

Knowing what he wanted from her was not going to be easy, he held his hand out to her.

"Come in Mrs. Geet Khurana".


This was bloody brilliant start!

Loved it.

And thank you for writing this Avi!

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Yes you can write with closed eyes too 😉
Trust me.. I trust you 😃

I hate IF formatting 😡 mujhe phir se karna padega

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Sunta hai mera Khuda.. Dil o jaan se chahun Tujh ko yara dilruba 😉

Update kardo 😃
Good Night.. Shab Bakhair 😳

nice one 😃

updated


Good night Sheen

Oh em gee

Loved the start... wow so it was an arrange marriage... geet had to be with maan for dadi's sake and also poor thing what will she gave with Kiran... hope Kiran comes to like her ... can you add me your password list if u move it the blog

I was totally not ready for the end!