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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: purnimabansal
hey... i commented on your last update... pls pm me yr part 4

I went through the comments and sent pm based on who commented for all parts.
you may have missed commenting since I did not find you there.

ab tak toh you know I am more khadoos than MSK 😃 sudhar jao

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#592

Oye Dq.. did I tell you I love your dhamkis 😆 😆

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mitani

@mitani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#593

Ch 4 nice update. Maan's mom also liked geet. Loved how they fight. Maan being chalu is putting all blames on geet. Want to see all family and geet together. And most importantly jealous maan

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#594

Wow lovely superb omg he he he update..te way geet lost in her own home and landed on my maan's room omg my maan in nangu pangu naughty sk teasing his geet and lost in her but his buddhu mind not accepting it..maan babu u can be big business man but cant even feed I u r wife see she have left to her friend's home, he he he u r gone maan babu..te way geet with tara who was teasing her was lovely..te way raj ki disappoint we ne he cums to know abt his bahu who left and his words made my maan to feel bad thinking he didt even ask her did she eat or not..te way raj planned to bring my maaneet close and he planned to make her stay in oh and work in kc,omg..te way my maan thinking abt their closeness and his bechari pillow again got struck with his desires, te way my maan calling his geet and irritating her omg biwi not bad..te way raj talking with kiran, so now bahu and sas going to empty papa and beta ki pockets..i love te update so much

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Oye Dq.. did I tell you I love your dhamkis 😆 😆

And I love giving them😆

mera dream job of being a teacher ban na saki toh ab kar rahi hu.. bas ruler ki kami hai😆

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: dqno1

Rascala? nahi nahi!
I love to write thoda sa badmaash Maan 😃
Mari wanted Raj and Kiran kept alive this time so koshish jarri hai
it takes me back to locket while writing this one

Yes yes definitely Rascal😆

Look at the dictionary meaning😉

a mischievous or cheeky person, especially a child or man (typically used in an affectionate way).

Am I right? Huh?😉

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singh24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#597

😃 fantastic Update ..

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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 8 years ago

#598

I honestly dont understand whom do i side with in dis story. Just wen i see dat maan is leaving no stone unturned in being a compelet jerk to geet ...i feel so bad for d girl...but at d same time...maan is sooo naughty and dat makes him so cute...all his teasing and flirting is harmless... yea its mean dat he wants to derive all d entertainment only from her...but he is not dat bad...is he...at d end if d day...my heart still goes out to him...he is d MAAN after all...:P..

And geet she should really show him her fangs and paws some time... he is taking her too much for granted...just because she is being courteous for d sake of raj and dadima...and he is sooo fickle minded as well...he put up the complete picture of not wanting d marriage only as geet s choice ..as though he did not want it...as if its going to be easy NOT having geet around specially wen avi and babajii are penning his love story...:P ...

And not bad ya...i had nt expected kiran to be so open minded...somewhere i did not understand her character correctly...i thought geet s presence us always goung to remind her dat all dat dadima did was for dis gal...she may not be rude but definitwly cold towards her...she may be upset with dadima taking the lead all d time...but dat does make her resent the elderly woman...the fact dat she is taking care of dadima and also having no hard feelings against geet ...makes me respect dis woman...

And geet has already got in her good books by upholding her self respect rather than exploit the golden chance ...which she could have done easily...so geet has already won half d battle seeing raj kiran and dadima already like her...

All in all der are no villians at all...

The only one is Maan himself...and he is hell bent on shooing away geet...at every chance he gets...:-\...nevertheless geet is finally starting to make a difference to him...how long is he going to remain oblivious to her presence around him...as he says "ghar me bhi geet...office me bhi geet"...tough luck maan...:P...

And seeing raj and kiran...no wonder maan would be passionately romantic ...wen he falls in love...:)...which i await desperately..:P...

So dat s bout it...waiting for next...:)...

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#599

TEASER

He waited in the jeep watching her as she came down in her white anarkali.

From the way she avoided his eyes and was walking stiffer than a poker, she looked mightily annoyed already.

It would be easy to get his way with her, he decided.

It was the right time to strike.

He smiled as he offered her his hand and sweetly said, "Good morning Wifey!"

She ignored his hand and stepped in, laying her purse and another small bag next to her feet.

Lovely food odor emanated from it so he asked, " .. mere liye breakfast banaya hai?"

She slapped his hand away.

He stretched his arm behind her, loving it when she glared at him and the hand that was on the verge of touching her.

Turning behind, he checked as he reversed out of the spot he was in.

Once one the road, he declared, " .. ab yeh duriya mujh se bardasht nahi ho rahi hai biwi. Main chahta hu tum mere ghar mein rehne aa jao. Bedroom mein nahi .."

He waited as the color reached a ripe tomato red on her silky cheeks, " .. par outhouse mein. Ab kaam pe bhi dil nahi lag raha hai. Waha bhi join kar lo. Raat din bas tum hi tum ho".

He waited for the volcano to erupt.

His work was done.

Now no matter what Mom and Dad said, she would never agree.

He started whistling a victory song.

A/N: Maan trying to evade the trap.

Geet kya kahegi?

Daadima coming too...

jaldi se padh ke comment karo na...

Dekho two pics to entice you :D