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Lovely teaser.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Chapter 4


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Originally posted by: dqno1

Chapter 4


sorry for the delay..

was listening to Laal Ishq while writing and my went completely off track 😳 to that story..


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Bande ki sahi wali tapana koi Aap se seekhe 😡
Laal Ishq.. Ye malal ishq 😲

Lovely part

Hello...read the story in one go...
It's really interesting and maaneet are just awesome.
So both got married due to darji and dadi's wish.
A forceful one and maan mother was absent when all these happened.
Darji's last wish was to see geet getting married and she fulfilled it.
Kiran is upset as she wants to take decision for her husband and son but couldn't do so due to dadi.
She is in a argument as Raj send Maan to Mumbai to bring feet back to Delhi.
He just wants to fulfill his mother's wish as Savitri wants Maan and geet to be together infront of her.
Kiran is totally against it but Raj is not listening to her and only wants his mother's happiness.
Here geet reached to meet Maan in hotel and was quite apprehensive about it as he was staying in a honeymoon suite.
When he opened the door she was doubtful about his intentions.
Maan irritated with her holding back and both started to argue.
Raj called Maan and Maan asked about dadima which got Geet's attention she went inside the room.
They both talked to dadima and she was very happy to see them together.
Then after finishing call Maan told her that he was there to take her Delhi with him as dadima wants them both to be with her.
Geet called her friend Tara to arrange for her stay which again made Maan angry and both start their nok jhok..
Atlast geet agreed to go with him but live separately as she thinks she will be a burden on their family and also she knows Kiran is kinda cold towards her.
Both reached airport and again Maan starts to irritate her.
Maan tried to tease her by complaining to the co-passanger aunty but geet backfired at him.
All the way back to Delhi he was being lectured by that aunty.
After landing he again took Aunty in favour and asked geet for a kiss which made geet angry.
They both reached km and geet was awed by how big it is.
Raj welcomed them and even did Aarti of geet which shocked geet as she thought about his expectations.
Truly sayappa ho Gaya...
Both Tom and Jerry together in same house...
With maan's angry mother...
N loving dadima..
God can't wait to read next..
Hopefully I lived upto the expectations as I read this story in one go and commented on all the parts.
Waiting for next...

Part 3:
Awesome update.. Maan is angry with geet on her decision to stay with her friend but she make him understand her situation as she doesnt want to impose n be a burden on his family.. He is also irritated with her attitude n teasing her all the time by being so touchy feely types.. The auntys bhasaan was awesome n maan got a good lecture but in the end he still teases n annoyed ger a lot... Loving the story.. Eagerly waiting to read more.. Update soon..

Wow great starting vid d fighting convoy of our lovely couple. Waiting to see their beautiful journey to be together

Chap 3
Lovely update mr handa n touch me not being the star of the update n not to forget Tin box ;)
Loved the way how both irritates each other
Somehow maans character is hiding something at bb like his view towards this marriage and geet will get some good surprise thr along with readers

crisp story telling with characters properly shaped so early itself.Looking forward with interest

A feisty & no nonsense geet and a clueless to women psyche maan- definitely piquing interest.his feeling her aggravating as a real wife haha