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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Commelina


I read the message too late and had already translated the letter by then or else the lazy person that I am, would have surely taken the easier path😛😆

guess the reason I'm not updating, because i will have to edit the index, title has gotten too long as it is. it does not allow me add another chapter no and pg no.
and I am in no mood of updating index, such a tedious process!

and I think I am updating too fast, people might have difficulty keeping up with it.😉


Thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous updates.
Interesting letter. But Maan is not effected by Geet leaving.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 51 - So sameera sings too and wish to participate in singing talent hunt. Her maa seems very supportive. But seems all is not well with rajiv. For long time he had not called her and now they meet and fight with each other over small issues. What was the problem about her profile picture that he was worried about his family members' reaction.

Whom sam saw and already met once.? She wanted to see the girl's face also but could not. Who could be they ?

Seems rama had accident and handicapped with his legs. He was frustrated with his life and meera managing all alone. He refused to take classes of her friend's son and felt useless for his family. He should try though. It will give him some satisfaction that he can do something.

Oh...meera met geet and she was going somewhere. She wanted to stop her but seeing the baggage she wished her happy journey. Seems geet really left.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 52 - So nothing happened with maan meeting ayush at lift. Just that ayush warned him that what she can do and not go on her facial expression. You never imagine what is going on in her mind. But e ignored him and went to office. But when he came back it was shocking to see lock on the door and her belongings were missing.

Whole day he was trying to remember what happened last night. He was sure that he did nothing wrong and all he remember things about geet only. He recalled what geet said to him. But he was still unaware about calling geet as jasleen.

He was angry on her for leaving without telling him. Still he was worried how she was travelling all alone. He was sad that she left but his anger was overpowered on his sadness. Oh...he found her letter.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 53 - I loved the letter. It shows how geet is in real. She left him only b'coss he loved someone else and did not want to come bet them. She only wanted his happiness. She even wrote that she started expecting from him and from this relation and was optimistic, if she never comes to know about his feelings for other woman. She was so straight forward that she mentioned how she started feeling about him since she saw him as her groom. I liked that word NSP. Lol. She cleared lots of things from her side in the letter, about debt, not touching his things, him not treating her wife, etc.

I kinda expected maan's reaction. He didn't read the letter as soon as he received, maybe he was braising himself about the matter in letter. And as geet said he was introvert he will think over the letter and then will take any action. He wasn't shocked to know that geet knows about jasleen.

But still I doubt that he will go after her. Let's see what he will do next.

If their family comes to know about this definitely all will try to patch up them. He also needs to answer his dadi for whom he agreed this marriage. Will he abale to tell the real reason about this separation.?

What geet is thinking that she will be accepted by her parents ? what she will tell them.? So many question. Will wait for answer in you updates.

I liked geet's kohra example. And I really hope that she gets her path and strength and reason to live her life.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Sent a buddy request. Please send me PM also.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 51 - So sameera sings too and wish to participate in singing talent hunt. Her maa seems very supportive.But seems all is not well with rajiv. For long time he had not called her and now they meet and fight with each other over small issues. What was the problem about her profile picture that he was worried about his family members' reaction.

Whom sam saw and already met once.? She wanted to see the girl's face also but could not. Who could be they ?

Seems rama had accident and handicapped with his legs. He was frustrated with his life and meera managing all alone. He refused to take classes of her friend's son and felt useless for his family. He should try though. It will give him some satisfaction that he can do something.

Oh...meera met geet and she was going somewhere. She wanted to stop her but seeing the baggage she wished her happy journey. Seems geet really left.



Arre nahi nahi, it isn't Sameera, the first part is Pinky talking to her Pishi maa. Pishi maa is bua/fua/fufi/father's sister. I've this very bad habit of using he|she instead of names.
People are bound to get confused. I think someone had commented on this before also, how I use s|he.

Thank you so much,Madhuri for commenting on that part as well and bringing my attention to it.

"Pishi Maa, the radio station that I work at, it is media partners with the channel Moon Minus. So I got to know that the channel is planning a singing talent hunt soon. The auditions are to start within a month maybe."


"Khub bhalo" (That's great)

"Pishi Maa...do you think I should..."

" Tumake shotti auditions deva ochit, Piku." (You should definitely go for the audition, Piku)

And I think I've never mentioned Piku, is Pinky's nickname. And Pinky works at radio station, that information also I never provided I think. They were hints though. In the Petrichor chapter I think but they were too lame I guess.😳 😆

Anyway, remember the chapter tujhe yaad kiya, it's one of the first chapters, so there is a mention of Pishi moni and there are hints that Pinky sings, also she uploads her music videos on You tube, it is mentioned in chapter, Hope and Despair .

Too many characters must be confusing,lol. You have to remember so many people and so many back stories.

My sister is like, ye multi starer film ka bhoot kaise chada tum par?😆



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 52 - So nothing happened with maan meeting ayush at lift. Just that ayush warned him that what she can do and not go on her facial expression. You never imagine what is going on in her mind. But e ignored him and went to office. But when he came back it was shocking to see lock on the door and her belongings were missing.

Whole day he was trying to remember what happened last night. He was sure that he did nothing wrong and all he remember things about geet only. He recalled what geet said to him. But he was still unaware about calling geet as jasleen.

He was angry on her for leaving without telling him. Still he was worried how she was travelling all alone. He was sad that she left but his anger was overpowered on his sadness. Oh...he found her letter.


What happened between Maan and Ayush has not been revealed yet.

Remember ch-42, Tumhare khat mein naya ek salaam, the chapter where Maan comes to know about Geet-Ayush's friendship. Thta is when this line was spoken by Ayush. He was joking, but then it seems Maan has a good memory. 😉😆

here is the excerpt, I'm talking about.

"Shubham has gone overseas. Ottawa. Doing MBA there." And then turning to Maan who was leafing through the newspaper, he said, " Shubham was our partner in crime."

"Your partner in crime," Geet corrected him, "I wasn't even remotely connected to all the pranks both of you planned and pulled on others. In fact I was a victim."

"Right! You were the paragon of virtue. It must be your doppelganger then who had pulled my hair, jumped on me. Maan Bhai don't you ever go on her innocent face. She's a wild cat! And she fights dirty. She actually jumped on me. I fell down with her on top of me and that still tops the list of my embarrassing moments."



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 53 - I loved the letter. It shows how geet is in real. She left him only b'coss he loved someone else and did not want to come bet them. She only wanted his happiness. She even wrote that she started expecting from him and from this relation and was optimistic, if she never comes to know about his feelings for other woman. She was so straight forward that she mentioned how she started feeling about him since she saw him as her groom. I liked that word NSP. Lol. She cleared lots of things from her side in the letter, about debt, not touching his things, him not treating her wife, etc.

I kinda expected maan's reaction. He didn't read the letter as soon as he received, maybe he was braising himself about the matter in letter. And as geet said he was introvert he will think over the letter and then will take any action. He wasn't shocked to know that geet knows about jasleen.

But still I doubt that he will go after her. Let's see what he will do next.

If their family comes to know about this definitely all will try to patch up them. He also needs to answer his dadi for whom he agreed this marriage. Will he abale to tell the real reason about this separation.?

What geet is thinking that she will be accepted by her parents ? what she will tell them.? So many question. Will wait for answer in you updates.

I liked geet's kohra example. And I really hope that she gets her path and strength and reason to live her life.


So glad you liked the letter. At first I thought it was too filmy.
But to be honest, there was a time when I used to read Hindi Novels and sometimes there were letters involved and the writers would steal your hearts with simple but meaningful and deep lines. I was trying to pull off something like that. 😳 😆
Edited by Commelina - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: naanii.1389

Awesome updates.
Maan was shocked, angry, hurt and everything when he realized she left without a word, but he is only acting non chalant as if it didn't matter to him she left. Her leaving came as a huge shock to me. Strange twist. Now what will she do in hshiarpur? Nt like she's gonna be welcomed well. Or may be they'd understand.
But one good thing, she spoke her heart out to him for once, atleast via the letter.
Haha but what I like was, even after she left him burning inside out, he didn't miss taunting her Bosom Buddy 😆
still having some hope things will work in favour of Maaneet. Waiting eagerly for next.


Men will be men, I guess. 😆
Edited by Commelina - 7 years ago

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