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soniaz121

@soniaz121

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#831

amazing storyteller i have never read such kind of work here

different and beautiful both maan and geet character are so different u have sketched them brilliantly it feel so good while reading it

what a letter and the reaction of the man is speechless really enjoyed the updates wish u have good luck and success in life

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#832

Part 53 - dynamic update! superbly written! I have confused by Maan's behaviot! he is very normal like nothing happened! at least he read the letter! Geet was able 2 say what she wanted but cld no say directly to him! she wants his happiness! she does not want to come in between him and his love! I am surprised that Maan just slept after reading the letter! update soon!

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vydehi

@vydehi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#833

Did not expect that Geet would go away. That was a surprise. Was expecting Maan- Aayush confrontation. Geet's letter is emotional. Inspite of all the problems, she is optimistic. What's cooking in Maan's mind? Can't wait to see how and when they will meet again.Nice update as always. Thanks for updating.

Edited by vydehi - 7 years ago

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#834

And you say you are not happy with what you have written! If this has such an effect on us, if this can evoke such strong feelings, then I can only imagine what would your 'best' do to us. As I have always mentioned, your narration, your eye to detail is so easily relatable, that I can visualize all the scenes in my mind, as if they are happening right in front of me.

I am not too sure about Rajeev. It is quite surprising that Sameera let go of her issues with him with the kind of excuses he presented before her. Curious to know who that guy was and who was the accompanying woman. I have some idea in my mind, but I will wait for you to reveal that.

I like Meera and Ramanuja, but for how long will he be able to wallow in self-pity. It is easier said than done, but at some point we do need to pull ourselves up.

For how long is Maan going to act indifferent and aloof. Earlier he had Geet to exhibit these to, but now he has no one to put up such pretenses for. Even his anger towards her could not suppress his care and he did call her to check on her. Also his ending words, his idea of her deception show that he was not expecting her to behave so and that he is affected by her actions.

The lines, "Then there was a murmur of a feminine voice in his head. He was guessing it was Geet's. Who else could it be?" and "But besides being a husband he was also an employee at a private company." give an idea that somewhere he has already accepted her as his wife. Although Jasleen still lingers is some corner of his heart, she is his past and he has still not been able to forget her probably due to lack of proper closure.

Did he just write off her letter as overtly emotional?! Someone please fill in the guy with his drunken drama. Was he trying to satisfy his ego by postponing reading Geet's letter? As I mentioned, what was he trying to prove and to whom? Although his reaction was quite befuddling. Did he decide to sleep over it and deal with it the next day? Why do I feel he has a plan up his sleeve and already knows what he is going to do and maybe bring up the letter once he has Geet in front of him?

Coming to the letter itself, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it despite the gravity of the situation. It only heightened my admiration for Geet. She could have done without mentioning her feelings, her crush and everything else, but she chose the stronger way out.

Waiting to see what is in store for them. Continue soon please.

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: latecomer
It pained ...much beyond just pain. She left and left behind her a bereaving husband who is so stubborn to believe it that her departure cause him an immense displeasure. He masked it yet again...but kab tak...
I wish he could said it all what he has bolted until now...
Yes the letter...she said it all... her crush ,complexes, insecurities and answered his question why she wasn't taking his help...
Wondering how would their family react? would she tell them the actual reason behind her sudden appearance???
P.S. You are amazing writer nivi...who mesmerizes her reader and render them wanting more.

He sure is a stubborn person. And has his own reasons for being like this. But yeah a very good question, kab tak?

family reactions, coming up soon.

And latecomer, did I tell you? The pasta parts in both the chapters. A favour returned and six yards of deception, I wrote them keeping in mind your last comment about the pasta. When a dear reader of mine is so concerned about the fate of pasta, couldn't have disappointed her, eh? 😉😆

Thank you, for the constant encouragement. 🤗

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: sagorika93
Fabulous update ..
Geet ka letter bada hi dramatic tha and emotional bhi ...But maan pe toh koi asar huya hi nehi ..
Na accha na bura ..
Loved geet's positivity ...
Waiting for next...

Haha, Geet is like that only, dramatic and her actions are heavily guided by emotions. And Maan, is din duniya se dur, moh maya se pare 😆

Thank you for reading

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: ambeern
Loved the update

Glad you loved it. thanx.

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: sanum23
At last Geet left him
She also wrote emotional letter
Which didn't effect him

Yup she did. She was wanting to leave since long, maine soch lo bhai, yeh bhi kar ke dekh hi lo. 😆

it didn't effect him, well...

thank you Sanum for being here and always encouraging me with your words. 🤗

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: AISHAJS
Genius writing. Wonderful letter, full of bitter sweetness.
Thank you 🤗

🤗

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Commelina

@Commelina

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
is maan affected ???
yes very wont admit though she left quietly thats must be hurting him more her unsaid words not he getting all meaning
he actually called her his last line quiet interesting
don't know I feel geet still hoping for maan

Hey drashtilove , long time no see

how you're doing?

@ bold- that is an interesting observation.

Edited by Commelina - 7 years ago