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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

fab update! superbly written! Sam's thoughts well portrayed! she is had all of issues! its certainly nt her day! the rain resonates with her mood! she is taken back 2 that incident! who is that guy???? update wen u can! thanks


Thanks.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

I love this image/emoticon whatever you call it. Where did you get this from Flame?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful updates ...indeed every soul has story in this world nd such unfathomable pains r carried by each of us

Both the updates have melancholy...fighting with der own demons masking smiles on der faces...

Sam ..memories etched in heart gives happiness but present moment brings pain nd makes those memories painful ...kyon insaan badal jata hai...kya kami tho Sam aur uski mom Ki pyaar Mein Ki he has to go out ...destiny in making .though not know who is the person who is intriguing in Sam thoughts but a flicker of light ...
For new dawn ..loved it

Present update made me nostalgic commelina...purane album dekhna is such a beautiful feeling...un moments ko hum phir jee uthe hai ...un yaadon ko phir ek aakar dete hai ...unko mehsoos karte hai ...Tara enjoying the moments nd relived the relationship she shared with maan ...kabhi kabhie kuch ehsaas hi kuch rishton ko naam de dete hai...touched my heart


Finally her insecurities have taken shape nd she shared with him ...but dev is confusing me ...lets c how the things r going to unfold...

Loved the updates commelina...tum ek aise writer Ho Jo zindagi Ki un panno ko kholthi Ho Jo shayad is bhagam dodi zindagi Mein kahi dafn Ho gayi hai ..keep writing...
Edited by hermosoanu123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update. Fully devoted to Tara. Her feelings depicted well. I fully feel with her. It is not unusual for a married woman to feel insecure. Even though Dev loves her and doesn't care that they don't have kids yet. I think it was mentioned in earlier chapters that her MIL does talk about it to Tara. Society always blames a woman even if it's not her fault at all. I wonder why? Even if the couple isn't bothered by this fact. Hope there love is enough to face these social obstacles.
Oh God! I loved the Yadein song. So emotional. I got so involved in the song. It took me back my memory lane to some sweet and emotional memories of my life.
Thanks for the update. Enjoyed reading it. Love your work. Keep up with it. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I literally went 'Haaye' on Dev's dialogue. Awww. Dev and N-star waah waah.

And the first part made me all anticipating something with regard to M and G story. Again Awww moment.

This one was heartfelt. Looks like you are back again.

And that Yaadein song. Nagmein hain, kisse hain, baatein hain...I went all nostalgic...

Thanka for updating.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Look who is back !
the one and only hitched yet ditched couple (cut the latter part though , this chapter will vouch for this sudden deletion and creation )
That masterstroke caught me off guard , not that I was waiting for something more troublesome :p
"Marriage albums" and "forced smiles"😆 well here we have both of them overlapping each other literally !
Maan babu literally rules his bhabhi's heart ,doesnt he ?
BIL and SIL share an enviable bond :)
It was a treat to read how Nainatara perceived Maan' then and now '
I don't know if I m reading too much or between the lines
but this chapter kinda bridged down from me
how a total stranger (here Nainatara) slowly and steadily warmed up to Maan who has this 'intimidating' aura around him and I somehow cant help but draw a parallel with Geet being that anxious stranger . Being a self proclaimed optimist , I look forward to this as a hint to the hidden treasure (no pun intended)

Dude ! I happen to harbor a serious crush on this Dev
Dev babu stole the show .

"Society" is that annoying unwanted - faulty -brand -marking machine ,which ends up ruining something as beautiful and serene as love . I find this chit extremely annoying and infuriating ! I can rant on and on about this hypocritical overindulgent strata but lets end it here and
I would rather focus on the part which made me go all giddy and gooey -gooey eyes .

This will sound extremely cringe worthy but let me go ahead with this
"Dil me orchestra baj gaya"
damn ! totally sappy but its okay :P
I adore this couple they represent hope in nutshell
hope to dream ,hope to break stereotypes ,hope to love and togetherness

PS - the song is an unfamiliar territory for me but this update undertook the role of the much needed guide .
keep writing ! <3

Edited by MrsBenedict - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update, superbly written! feeling 4 Tara! Dev doesn't mind they don't have kids! terrific song! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sam n stranger n tip tip barsa panic...

Dec loves Tara so much bt insecurities of taras r so natural in this state...

Will u give is another update with maaneet...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update. You're an amazing writer and the tales you tell leave us waiting excitedly for the next update.
The time you take to write just makes the update more perfect so don't ever rush.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update dear, maan is man of few words, eagerly waiting for next update

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