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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: paponecon
Sam n stranger n tip tip barsa panic...

Dec loves Tara so much bt insecurities of taras r so natural in this state...

Will u give is another update with maaneet...

Thanks for reading Papon. A maaneet update is on its way.

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
beautiful update, superbly written! feeling 4 Tara! Dev doesn't mind they don't have kids! terrific song! update soon

Thanks for always being there Khwaish

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos
I literally went 'Haaye' on Dev's dialogue. Awww. Dev and N-star waah waah.

And the first part made me all anticipating something with regard to M and G story. Again Awww moment.

This one was heartfelt. Looks like you are back again.

And that Yaadein song. Nagmein hain, kisse hain, baatein hain...I went all nostalgic...

Thanka for updating.

That dialogue's credit I can't take. I remember reading something like that on Google. And it has stuck with me since then.

These chapters were kind of warm up exercises.😆 Have been in a state of writers block since quite some time now. Trying to get back to writing.

Thank you for reading and am really glad you liked it.

Edited by Commelina - 8 years ago

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: sgmiss2003
Very emotional update. Fully devoted to Tara. Her feelings depicted well. I fully feel with her. It is not unusual for a married woman to feel insecure. Even though Dev loves her and doesn't care that they don't have kids yet. I think it was mentioned in earlier chapters that her MIL does talk about it to Tara. Society always blames a woman even if it's not her fault at all. I wonder why? Even if the couple isn't bothered by this fact. Hope there love is enough to face these social obstacles.
Oh God! I loved the Yadein song. So emotional. I got so involved in the song. It took me back my memory lane to some sweet and emotional memories of my life.
Thanks for the update. Enjoyed reading it. Love your work. Keep up with it. Waiting for next part.

Sgmiss thank you so much for the heartfelt comment.

Yaadein is one of my favourite song too.

I am happy to have you here and sincerely hope that you will stay as the characters reach the end of their journey.

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#345

comment updated on

pg 51 and 54 :)

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dalur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Firstly, I've read the post where you mentioned how much time , effort, emotions and research goes into each update...and I was so speechless.. I never imagined it takes so much to write a story..I was wrong in assuming that story telling comes very naturally to you writers and i feel so guitly that for the past 2 years I've been reading wonderful stories without giving a single comment... Now I realise how much thought, time and effort goes into each update to give us free entertainment and how our comments are important feedback to you'll...please give me some time, I'll reread all parts (which I am going to enjoy reading again) and give my comments on them on what I liked the most...

This story is my second most favourite story!!! I find it most intrigueing in all the stories I read coz I can't guess how our Maaneet are going to fall in love...its wont be easy and going be one long journey for them and also for me as a reader and I am all ready for it...

Though your updates are less frequent they are always worth the wait, I never had a problem with the delay as I always enjoyed reading them...I like stories which are realistic and arent much clinch...this story is so realistic and sensible that I can relate to it a lot...the way you write about human emotions and relationships the complications, ups and downs the adjustments and everything, it teaches me a lot... The depth of emotions is just awesome and I like every character in this story not just Maaneet and wish to know about what transpires in each of their lives.I want Maaneet to fall in love slowly by taking enough time...

Just continue the way you've been writing, which is exactly the way I love to read...I understand you are a busy person and I m totally okay to wait for as long as possible for the updates but please don't stop this story since it is very close to my heart and I just feel like it is a real story, that is how well you write...which also surprises me since you mentioned that you are new to writing because this piece of art gives the feel that it is being written by a person with lot of experience in writing and understanding relationships!!! Thank you so very much for taking out time to write for us even in ur busy schedule!!! Appreciate it a lot😃...

P.S I just love Maaneets silly fights😃...dono takkar ke hain! Hope even in future they continue the nok jhok...

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Cartoon.Buff

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Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Sameera has had a difficult childhood. Her fiance does not really seem to care for her either.

Her chance meetings with this guy are kinda filmy, with the rain and fall and all. Hope they indeed are the hero and heroine of their story. Would love to know more about this mysterious man and how things change with his entry.

Maan is a man of few words, but his emotions run too deep. The bond Dev and Tara share with each other's siblings is heart-warming.

I am happy to see Dev and Tara like this, in love. Glad they sort of talked it out. Hope things get better for them.

Waiting for more. Continue soon please.

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: hermosoanu123
Beautiful updates ...indeed every soul has story in this world nd such unfathomable pains r carried by each of us

Both the updates have melancholy...fighting with der own demons masking smiles on der faces...

Sam ..memories etched in heart gives happiness but present moment brings pain nd makes those memories painful ...kyon insaan badal jata hai...kya kami tho Sam aur uski mom Ki pyaar Mein Ki he has to go out ...destiny in making .though not know who is the person who is intriguing in Sam thoughts but a flicker of light ...
For new dawn ..loved it

Present update made me nostalgic commelina...purane album dekhna is such a beautiful feeling...un moments ko hum phir jee uthe hai ...un yaadon ko phir ek aakar dete hai ...unko mehsoos karte hai ...Tara enjoying the moments nd relived the relationship she shared with maan ...kabhi kabhie kuch ehsaas hi kuch rishton ko naam de dete hai...touched my heart

Finally her insecurities have taken shape nd she shared with him ...but dev is confusing me ...lets c how the things r going to unfold...

Loved the updates commelina...tum ek aise writer Ho Jo zindagi Ki un panno ko kholthi Ho Jo shayad is bhagam dodi zindagi Mein kahi dafn Ho gayi hai ..keep writing...

Thank you so much Anu🤗

You write such well thought comments and I have always held you in high esteem so can't help but grin at such high praise coming from you.

Really glad to have you here.

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: aparna3011
emotional update

Thanks for always being there Aparna🤗

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Commelina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: MrsBenedict
Look who is back !
the one and only hitched yet ditched couple (cut the latter part though , this chapter will vouch for this sudden deletion and creation )
That masterstroke caught me off guard , not that I was waiting for something more troublesome :p
"Marriage albums" and "forced smiles"😆 well here we have both of them overlapping each other literally !
Maan babu literally rules his bhabhi's heart ,doesnt he ?
BIL and SIL share an enviable bond :)
It was a treat to read how Nainatara perceived Maan' then and now '
I don't know if I m reading too much or between the lines
but this chapter kinda bridged down from me
how a total stranger (here Nainatara) slowly and steadily warmed up to Maan who has this 'intimidating' aura around him and I somehow cant help but draw a parallel with Geet being that anxious stranger . Being a self proclaimed optimist , I look forward to this as a hint to the hidden treasure (no pun intended)

Dude ! I happen to harbor a serious crush on this Dev
Dev babu stole the show .

"Society" is that annoying unwanted - faulty -brand -marking machine ,which ends up ruining something as beautiful and serene as love . I find this chit extremely annoying and infuriating ! I can rant on and on about this hypocritical overindulgent strata but lets end it here and
I would rather focus on the part which made me go all giddy and gooey -gooey eyes .

This will sound extremely cringe worthy but let me go ahead with this
"Dil me orchestra baj gaya"
damn ! totally sappy but its okay :P
I adore this couple they represent hope in nutshell
hope to dream ,hope to break stereotypes ,hope to love and togetherness

PS - the song is an unfamiliar territory for me but this update undertook the role of the much needed guide .
keep writing ! <3

I was waiting for your response 😊

And was grinning to myself reading your comment. It is always a treat to read you whether be it your updates or comments. Also it is always a treat to have intelligent readers on board.😉