A Fight for my daughter....Part 13 coming up.22dec/2019

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Superb update

hope mansi is fine

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Shocking part. Poor mansi was so scared seeing that karan. Pinky and adi dropped her at her home. I wish she would have have told geet about that karan. Mansi showed really very carelessness. When she knew he would attend the party then she should not have attended that party. What happened with her. Maan took her to hospital. Adi informed geet and rahul. Geet was shocked nd numb seeing her daughter's condition. Finally maan comes to k ow about mansi being his daughter. Waiting for next dear.

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Shocking update, poor mansi hope nothing has bad happen to her , now karan is gone

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Awesome update

Maansi was scared of karan's presence

She had gathered her energy to be strong

She was sharing her pain in her dairy

To her papa but she didn't share it

To her mom or brother

She went to attend the party but forgot

To call her brother

Karan was all planned to kidnap her

For his lust

Adi maan and vikrant admitted her in

Her hospital with injuries on her forehead

And hands

Geet was numb seeing the state of maansi

Maan was hurt and angry where as geet

With guilt and Rahul was shocked

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

wow lovely thud thud omg update..te way mansi ki fear and pinky saw her and dropping her in home, geet and rah ki wory seeing mansi but she was determine to face it then my maan ki beti naa..te way my maaneet feeling some restless in fear then they parenthood was worried..omg mansi was lost and everyone worried and now she found with hurts, omg everyone rushing to hospital and my maan came to know his biggest secret of his life his kids and te way he said msk and gmsk was lovely,now its geet' turn to answer for everyone..i love te update yar

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swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

nice update..
waiting for next update..

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

very painful update

maan come to know that manasi is his daughter

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Wish Mansi is not badly hurt or ill treated...

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

New Entry...Pari and Vishal Malhotra...

Edited by Mayuvani5 - 8 years ago

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Teaser...

"lekin Maan...Geet kis haq se iss ghar main rehegi..?"

"ruk jao Geet...main kabhi ek maa ko apne bachon se dur nahi kar saktha...I am not a stonehearted person like you...you are just a mere acquaintance for me..."

Note...from next part..I will continue the story on blog...those who commented on all the parts will be given access

Edited by Mayuvani5 - 8 years ago