A Fight for my daughter....Part 13 coming up.22dec/2019 - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

will update today...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
okk...so the part you all are waiting for...Father meets daughter... 2015 words...
I dont know how this part came up..waiting for your response...


She was mumbling constantly..."wo aagaya...wo aagaya..." sitting in the corner of the room. The fear of her past coming back started haunting her. It took lot of inner strength with constant support from her mother and brother to face the society.

The employees in KC were about to call the day off, the hustle bustle reminded her where she was. Gathering herself, she moved towards her desk she was collecting her belongings, Pinky barged distracting her.

Pinky " Maansi chalo jaldi...aaj itna der kyun kar di?"...

Maansi did not reply. It surprised Pinky, Maansi joined only two days ago and there was no moment Maansi was quiet. Within these two days, they developed a great bond...

Pinky " Maansi..you are not replying...kya hua?" saying she turned Mansi towards her, what she observed shocked her...her eyes were red with constant crying...

"Tu ro rahi hai...kya hua...kisi ne kuch kaha kya?" she asked feeling worried.
Maansi still did not reply but tears were constantly pouring...Pinky made her sit, and gave some water to drink... " ab bolo...kya hua?"

Maansi " wo aagaya...Pinky mam..." she was shaking with fear...

Seeing her fear, Pinky thought there should be something serious, she thought its best to leave before it gets dark and Adi was also waiting.

Pinky " Maansi...pehle hum ghar chalthe hain..theek hain" she said wiping her tears.

She took Maansi with her where Adi was waiting..

Adi " Kya hua Pinky..aaj der kardi...?" but Pinky nudged him to see Maansi..
Pinky "Adi...hum Maansi ko ghar main derop dete hain.." Adi nodded..he also observed Maansi's unusual silence..

They reached Maansi house and was welcomed by Rahul and Geet, they introduced themselves..Maansi without any went towards her room and shut the door...Rahul and Geet observed this...he said sorry to Pinky and Adi on behalf of Maansi leaving like that...

Pinky " No Rahul...Infact she was like this silent when I came to her cabin before leaving? She was in fear mumbling koi aagaya...She was crying continuously...I don't know what happened...I could not leave her like that...So we just dropped her"

This made both Rahul and Geet alert... " What would have happened..."

Geet and Rahul thanked Pinky for being so kind and dropping Maansi home. Geet's heart was sensing some danger, she has to talk to her daughter even Rahul's situation was no less. Both exchanged contact numbers in case they need it and they left...

Maansi in her room " Papa aap kaha ho...wo phir se aagaya...mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai...aap kaha ho papa...I am missing you so much..." She started her usual routine of writing diary since she started this habit few years ago...She preserved those diaries in which are the mirror images of her life.

Rahul and Geet called her knocking at door...but Maansi did not reply...they started worrying for her, they knew she would not do something drastic.They stayed near her room all the night...

Next morning...

Maansi woke up still realising fear she has... " Abhi main kisi ko nahi bataungi...mumma aur bhai dono pareshan hojayenge...I will not cry... I should be normal...aaj nahi tho kal usse tho saamna karna hi padega...I should not fear..." feeling determined...she opened the door to see both Rahul and Geet sitting on the floor...She felt bad seeing them like this. She woke them up and behaved as if nothing has happened. Even after constant pestering from both she did not say...They knew once she make s her mind, it is difficult for her to open up. She went to office as usual, but hell broke on her when she was informed that they are organizing a party with Oberois and every employee has to attend.

She was contemplating whether to attend it or not. It was only 2 days since she has joined and it doesn't look good on her part if she did not attend. After lot of fights with her mind, she finally decided to show her face in the party and would leave early making some obvious reason.

It was the party day couple of days later,

Geet's house..

Maansi was almost ready when Rahul came "Maansi..are you sure you want to attend.. It will be quite late.."

Maansi " Ji bhai...I am very much sure...I will stay there for about an hour and will leave..."

Rahul " Ok...but give a call..will come to pick you up...you should not leave alone from the party..." ordered Rahul..

Maansi "Sure bhai...I will definetely call you...tension mat lo.."

Maansi went towards Geet " Mumma...aaj party hain...main ja rahi hu..."

Geet " Mat jaa Maansi...mujhe ajeeb sa dar lag raha hain..."

Maansi " Kya hua mumma.."

Geet " Bus kuch ajeeb sa darr.." saying she hugged her daughter close with negative vibes around her...

Maan's Room..

" aisa kyun lag raha hain..kuch darr..lekin kyun...bhayanak sa darr"

Karan's place..

"Is every thing ready...the moment she comes out of the party kidnap her".

Khurana-Oberois Party..

The party was going on full swing with drinks, food and dance..

Amidst one soul was fearing to face her past, the other was ready to reach his prey and the third soul(Maan) unable to concentrate in the party, a constant fear is gripping his mind.

A couple of hours into the party. Karan was looking at her and enjoying restlessness and her fear and he knows today is the day. He gave a evil smirk to her which she brushed off . It was almost 8..Maansi felt it was already late and she has to leave...She approached Adi " sir...I will keave now..."

Adi " Why Maansi...enjoy the party...kuch problem hain kya..?"

Maansi " No sir...mujhe jaana hain...agar late hua tho taxi nahi milegi" it slipped from her mind that she has to call her brother.

Adi " Kyun Maansi..agar late hua tho..I will drop you.."

Maansi was bent on saying she has to leave..not pestering her further, he asked to take permission either from Maan or Vikranth.

Nodding, Maansi went to find Maan but he was busy in talking with guests, she found Vikranth...Taking his permission she left the party.

Karan found her leaving...he made a call. Feeling accomplished he is enjoying the party as usual.

A couple of hours later...

Geet house

Geet was getting tensed.. Rahul was trying Maansi's mobile...Its switched off..

Rahul " mumma mujhe bohot darr lag raha hain...Maansi ka phone nahi lag rahaha hain.."

Geet condition was not less..her fear was getting stronger...then she remembered taking Pinky and Adi's cell number.

Geet " call Adi Rahul.." Nodding he called Adi.

At the party, they were ready to call it a day...

Maan " Thanks Mr. Oberoi...the party was successfull."

Oberoi " Yes..Mr. Khurana..."

Maan "I am not seeing your son..?"asked feeling weird, not findng Karan and missing abruptly from the party..

Oberoi " Sorry...he has some urgent issue he left" he said feeling angry at his son.

Adi's cell rang and it read Rahul..Why Rahul is calling at this time?

Adi " Hi Rahul..you called at this time?"

Rahul " Wo Mr. Adi.. Maansi did not return home? She has to call me before leaving. Se did not..Now her cell is switched off."

Adi " But Maansi left 2 hrs ago.."

Rahul " What...Abhi tak ghar nahi aaya Maansi..we are waiting for her"

Both were getting tensed..it was already late..where is Maansi...

Adi " I will check and call" he disconnected and went to meet Maan who deals with the security issues.

Adi rushed to meet Maan who was with Vikranth and about to go...

Adi " Sir...just a moment.."

Maan " Yes Adi...you are looking tensed.."

Adi " Yes sir..thoda problem hogayi..."

Maan " What is it?"

Adi " Sir..Maansi's brother called me saying that she did not reach her house..but its been close to two and half hours since she left the party...her cell is switched off.."

Maan " What..did they call her friends if she is there with them.."

Adi " Yes sir, he said she does not have any friends here as they moved here recently"

Maan "Ok... ask security weather she left the main entrance.." Nodding Adi left..

Maan and Vikranth were getting tensed with the piece of information. There Geet and Rahul were sensing some danger...

It was almost 15 minutes Adi did not come, Maan and Vikranth went towards the security and were standing near the parking lot when Adi called his mobile..

" Sir...aap please gate ke bahar deserted building hain..waha pe aajana.." his voice was shivering...

Disconecting the call, Maan and Vikranth rushed towards the address given by Adi...what they saw shook them to core...

Adi.. " Sir ..hume jaldi hospital jaana hain..."

Vikranth rushed to bring car, While Adi carried unconscious Maansi. Maan was walking like a zombie..he could not understand why it is pinching his heart seeing her in this condition.

They reached hospital and admitted her..The doctors checked and said they have to wait for some time since the case involves police...

Adi called Rahul cell " Rahul...please come to XXX hospital..." saying he disconnected the call.

Worst fears started gripping Rahul and Geet...they rushed towards the hospital.

Maan and Vikranth were near Maansi's room...while Adi was talking to pinky who did not party for health reasons...

Geet and Rahul reached hospital...they enquired the room she was admitted.

They rushed towards the room.. and saw Maansi sleeping with no conscious with bandages tied on her forehead and hands...

Geet and Maan did not see each other still...

Rahul was the first to speak " Mumma Kya hua Maansi..ko..ye aisi kyun so rahi hain..." said jerking Geet who dead within seeing her daughter in the hospital bed...

The voices in Maansi's room made Maan to move inside the room...

" Mumma... bolo na..." he heard Rahul calling Geet...

He saw Geet sitting like a statue...Rahul calling her mumma...his mind was not working...he remembered geet saying they have twins...realization dawned upon him...they are his twins...he is their father...

Nurse came inside the room jerking everybody from their thoughts...

"Excuse me sir, I would like to know the parents name of the patient as a formality.."

Geet and Maan see each other...one with guilty and other with extreme hurt and anger..

Nurse " Sir ...please..if you can give me the details..."

Rahul intervened... " Mother's name Geet Singh"

And Maan completed saying "Khurana.."

Rahul was completely shocked...why he is telling like that..

Rahul " No sir..." he was about to say...but Maan stopped him. He turned towards nurse and said...

"Please note it down...father..Maan singh Khurana...Mother..Geet Maan Singh Khurana.." he said looking straight towards Geet's downcast eyes..

Rahul saw her mother not objecting Maan...her closed eyes with tears rolling out were making his doubts true...

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Posted: 8 years ago
o oh... Mansi ko hua kya ha? Finally, Maan know who his children are. Geet, ye kya kiya hai tumne 😔. Bechari Mansi, kabse papa papa keh rahi hai. Why didn't she say anything to her own children?, Was she insecure that the children will leave her and go to their papa 😕>Thank you for the update. Loved it!!
Edited by bina_a - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
yeh kya ho gaya
why this girl mansi suffering so much
feel like killing those people
thnx
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Posted: 8 years ago
grt
whole family sensing danger
wat happened to mansi
maan get to know about his children
and the way he told the name of mansi
parents was superb

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
kya hua hoga unn 2 hours me woh tho maansi hi bata sakti he
maan got know maansi aur rahul are his kids
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
What karan did with maansi?
Maan come to know that he is father of rahul and maansi
Rahul to know that maan is his father
Hope maan got know about karan
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Hope maansi is fine
Maan know about his children
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shocking update maansi was hell scared as Karan was back though maansi was scared she did of a stupidity of not telling anyone abt Karan she had to attend a party but didn't know this party will bring storm in her life as both maaneet weren't feeling nice Karan had planned to kidnap maansi for his lust and it worked as Adi found maansi unconscious they took her to hospital where he came to know maansi is his daughter and that shocked and shattered him
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Posted: 8 years ago
Did Karan succeed in his evil plans? Geet has really done a big mistake. Hope Maansi is fine. Maan is never going to forgive Geet if anything happens to Maansi

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