(MG-OS) A DEAL PART 2 (LAST PART) /PG 23 (Feb 13th'2K17) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
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dont forget mujhe bhi ek OS dena hai
aapne special wala pm mein
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
i liked this new OS so much
different
Kash ye OS na hoke SS hota
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
nice os very good one
geet wants to save her fathers company
so came to meet maan for it
maan first didn't accepted later he did
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
hey Rose nice to see an OS from you 😊 its been quite long 😊
wow as the name says it all its a deal...

so geet flew to india to stop her step mom selling the company to someone else... and she also knew maan is the guy... but why... hmm as a businessman maan is right to know more abt... i am wondering whats the mystery 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Congrats on the new is
Interesting start
Geet wants Maan to buy her dad's company which his wife is going to sell then hand it to her
Looks like she is not Geet's real mother
Maan agreed to help her
Waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome part
Loved it
waiitng for next part😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
I enjoyed part 1.

Maan and Geet's first meeting was cute!!!!

But if Geet is from such rich family, why does she seem so naive? Also she has never traveled either. A little strange.

Maybe she was very sheltered.

Geet has guts to undertake this idea with a stranger.

I loved the park bench meeting. Geet being upset of having her sleep disturbed was so cute! What a naive girl! She is sleeping on a park bench and she is sleeping peacefully!!!

Maan seems like a softy really. He cannot see tears in her eyes but he is a businessman after all so he will not take trust easily.

I wonder what he will find???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Interesting.
Why i feel there is more to Geet's deal.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
superb update...
Maaneet scene are so cute...
cont soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Wow .. nice update .. its seems interesting .. eagerly waiting for next update ... cont soon ..

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