~Gambler~ added Thread 2, Updated in IF 20/2/2017

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Interesting. ..but where is geet

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

congrats on the new story! thanks 4 da pm! lovely update, well written! hw can a father gamble his only daughter??? n then loses! disgusting father! update soon

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Riajia21

@Riajia21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Congrats for the new story.. Maan is gambler.. who is Anamika? Sshe belong to Hands? Where is Geet?

Who Mohinder is such greedy to make Maan to lose the game as he used his daughter for that? Waiting for ur further I

Update to read more...

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Congrats for new story..

Awesome update..

Waiting for next update..

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Superb pt

maan is in his MSK attitude terror of business and the king of gambling world mohi invited him too in his bday party and after party they start their play mohi wanted to see msk lose but in his ego he lost everything to msk and now betting on hr daughter rano try to stop him but he's not in his sense to listen he's drank msk warned him before they start it he will take his things by hook or crook rano make geet escape from their knowing how msk is mohi lost his daughter to msk

waiting fr next too

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Congratulations on new story

Such a Intriguing and Captivating start

Mohinder Handa wants Maan Singh Khurana to lose in gambling yet he is aware that he is a king in gambling wanting to show all his business associates that he can make MSK lose but he failed miserably losing every asset he possessed now even worst he has played with his only daughter's life gambling and staking his daughter

Rano helps her daughter escape but now what will happen surely Maan's body guards are around and will find her even before she gets anywhere

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

I can't believed he gamble with his daughter shame on him
Rano did good made anamika run away
Hope she saved

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

nice part

interesting start😉

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

OK this was seriously BRILLIANT!

I love this concept!

I was confused at the beginning with "Anamika" but I think I can guess how she turns to Geet.

And I like the character of Maan. He did not ask for Handa's daughter to be put as a wager. In fact if Mr. Handa had not acted like such an idiot, than Maan would not have gone for such a thing.

But a bet is a bet. And this winner will be looking for his prize!

Again, wonderful idea!!!! 👏