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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: anu5

Cute OS dear

Loved it to the core!!
Maan was small and was fascinated to know what is love and abt it's feelings
Dadima's words played effects in his heart
His heart rang bell and he was in air seeing beautiful girls but alas did not last long
Maan had his share of crushes and finally got married to his bride of dadima's choice
Geet on their wedding night dropped bomb on him stating that she is in love with someone else and doesn't accept him as her husband
At the wink of time his heart crushed down and had tears on his eyes
Maan realised his love and was in pain witnessing his wife's pain which brought tears in his eyes!!
Lovely dear
Hope u will continue this One shot with maan persuading Geet with his own gesture that make her fall for him!!
😊

hey sweety thnx for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for you to continue this One shots !!
😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Keep dreaming Hi *waves hand hoping you'd recognise me*
So I stumbled upon this one shot. I was so craving for something short and sweet and I found this one.And this was a lovely one shot. I really really enjoyed it.
Pyar ke mamle mein bechare ka bad luck hi kharab haišŸ˜†
Enjoyed it totally.
Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
And can we have a second part please ? That is if you are okay with it .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Commelina

Keep dreaming Hi *waves hand hoping you'd recognise me*

So I stumbled upon this one shot. I was so craving for something short and sweet and I found this one.And this was a lovely one shot. I really really enjoyed it.
Pyar ke mamle mein bechare ka bad luck hi kharab haišŸ˜†
Enjoyed it totally.
Thank you

heyy how can I forget youuu...ha bohot jayda dramatic Jo ha...bad luck toh hoga hi...glad u like it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Very cute os 😊. Loved it. Plz write one more part . Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Very cute os 😊. Loved it. Plz write one more part . Thanks for the pm.

thnx
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Interesting os.
Is there any more part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
that was cute specially the songs but is it complete he didn't fight for his wife

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: suhaaana

that was cute specially the songs but is it complete he didn't fight for his wife


glad u liked ...actually os so its end like this but will try if something come in my mind

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