OS - Oops I'm In Love - Page 3

Originally posted by: sophiexx

hey Dreamer love the title, it sounds so😆 i don't know corny 😆 but thats juts me probably
the story and how it unfolds is so good, i love the scene between Jani and Maan and how she describes love to be. Reminded me of an movie with SRK in it😆

So let me get this right love is when music plays in the background, scarfs dancing with the wind😆 Bechara maan no wonder he thought he's in love with every girl he met, correction with every hot girl he met😆

Geet wasn't love at first sight but surely she was he's true love, aww so sweet he's crying for her and finally realisation crept that his totally in love, poor guy

love the OS
Thank you

aww SRK movie my fav... yes hot girl after all men will be men...he did listen Jani but not fully...thats why that happened ...thnx for reading

Originally posted by: snehapriya

Dadi has spoilt little Maan 's mind. All his love is stolen from him. waiting for next part.

ya thnx for reading

Originally posted by: abinash079

beautiful OS first maan was really sweet and believed in those type of love and how it happens when he met with geet he didnt fell anything what his dadi told about loved but when geet told her truth he felt the pain of heartbreak that is called true love when u fell the pain of ur loved ones

Hoping that this is not just one part OS continue it with second part and update soon hoping to see a positive reply from your side about the second part😉

yes he finally fallen in true live trap without his knowledge... thnx for reading

Lovely os ..r you goingto wite one morept

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Lovely OS..

Waiting for happy ending..

thnx for reading

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#6600ff">hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional OS! well written! Feeling 4 Maan! he went through so much n gt married 2 Geet! she says she loves someoneelse! pls post next part 2 end it! thanks</font>

thnx for reading

Cute os

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

I hope u planned another part dear
Lovely one
Thanks for pm

thnx for reading

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

Loved it... But pls continue with happy ending like its a prank or she loves only maan type... It's just a suggestion... Do continue...

thnx for reading

Originally posted by: its_me

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">Wow... It was so cute...</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">But I really hope you would be giving another part with a happy ending...😉</font>

its u glad u like it