MG OS - A Love Before Time on 20th Jan 2017

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Glad to know that u were writer since ur school days too fragrance

Thanks for the pm

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Lovely OS Khushboo

Maan was livinhg alone away from his family..and he was watching some unusual dreams... he bumped in to a beautiful angelic girl

he saw a piano at a shop and had an urge to buy it as she had seen tha same girl looking at it fondly

But he did not know how to play it os That girl reached there and offered her help to him in learning how to play piano

Maan was in p0e with her but they moment he confessed geet told him that she was not a living soul.. she wanted to meet him as he had asked her to wait for him..

She left him and took away all her memories away from is mind..but after seven year they were united again not to be separated again...

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nice OS

It's different and intrigued

Loved reading it

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS...
especially d ending is my favorite...
Hats off...

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

awesome OS...loved it with different storyline...excited for more...thanks for pm..!!

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awesome and Beautiful OS

Loved it

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purnimabansal

@purnimabansal

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

nice story... pehle toh confuse tha... akhir geet hai kaun??? or woh bahut ajeeb ajeeb si baata v karti thi...
,...tph geet maan ki loneliness khatam karna chahati thi...
ty... last mai happy ending dena ke lia...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Interesting OS...

Loved it ...

True love wins for sure..

Maan gave his hundred percent to their relationship...

But geet didn't acknowledge it ... Until she heard him taking a stand against his mother ...

I really loved that line which maan said to his mother..

" I don't make love to my wife to make babies " ... Brilliant... Kudos ...

Geet finally accepted n reciprocated his feelings in true sense...

Edited by maaneetsangel - 8 years ago

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel
Interesting OS...
Loved it ...

True love wins for sure..

Maan gave his hundred percent to their relationship...

But geet didn't acknowledge it ... Until she heard him taking a stand against his mother ...

I really loved that line which maan said to his mother..

" I don't make love to my wife to make babies " ... Brilliant... Kudos ...
Geet finally accepted n reciprocated his feelings in true sense...

Uhh...I guess you have commented wrongly on my story when you must be reading another hehe 😆