Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 72

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Posted: 3 years ago

Update after a long time. Good Maan spoke his heart to Geet. Geet needs to come out of her fears so that she can move ahead in life and also give a better life to Muskan.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing updates.

Rey n Annie is really supporting Maan even he is not telling them.

They r unburden him from work as much as they can.

Rey is right they need to ncy get together so that they will relax n completely removed awkwardness among themselves.

Maan spoke his heart to geet n make himself clear to geet that he wants better future with her n muski other than physical relationship.

Maan is rigth geet needs to come out from her fear n to move forward herself n for muski also....

Hope geet take rigth decision n looking forward for their weekend plans....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Aditi

glad that you are fine

The update is appreciated

thanks for the pm


Part 56

Tremendous update.... perfectly written

great that Annie is doing a fabulous job with the project

so Maan is also impressed with Rey

liked the playful Rey

glad that Rey suggested they have an informal party

well Rey wants to invite Sam and Arjun

Maan's question regarding this was justified

Rey had a valid point about Arjun

however Rey's statement about Maan not cheating Sam seems to have upset Maan

at least Maan agreed but suggested a house party

nice seeing a matured Rey

can understand Maan's thoughts about him and Geet

Annie and Rey's concern for Maan is reasonable

of cos Annie wants Maan to be happy

good that Annie agreed that Arjun can be invited

admire that they want to be there for Maan

pleased that Vicky's call brings a smile on Annie's face

he does know her so well

she shared her concerns with him

he does assure her

loved that he teases her

hmm she forget to mention that Arjun will also be there

Annie is going to meet Sam

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 57

Interesting update..... beautifully written

nice seeing Brij happy

Brij's question and doubts were expected

Rehaan's had a valid point

of cos Maan loved those stolen hours with Geet

glad she noticed that he was tensed

pleased that with Geet he can be just be Maan

as expected he told her about the house party and who is invited

he was correct that it would be awkward

at least she assures Maan

Maan's question to Geet to was reasonable

not surprised that he wants to understand what they are

good that he was direct with Geet

he wants to know how they will move forward

not surprised that Geet just wants to enjoy their time

well Maan was frustration and Geet sensed this

so Maan opens up to what happened between him and Sam after he confessed he cheated on her

great that he tells Geet that he loves her

liked that he will never force her to say that she loves him

can understand that Maan wants a meaningful relationship with Geet

he wants to be there for and Muskaan

he wants all or nothing

Gosh he gave Geet an ultimatum

but also gave her time to decide

Geet's fear was anticipated

he told her to attend the party and envision the life he sees for them

oh so he left and she is in tears

Maan was right that she should not let her fears rule her life

Geet is letting her past affect her future

she should take a chance and move ahead

hope she realises before its too late


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome part

loved maaneet convo

m glad maan is so clear about his feelings n conveyed everything to geet no beating around bush

geet too loves him somewhere just not realised yet i feel ...she not letting him go says all....i hope she takes her time listens to heart...doesnt make maan wait for too long

Edited by heycookie - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Parts 56 &57


Captivating and Fantastic

Emotional too


Its great that Rey done so well , actually both Annie and Rey

wants to take on more responsibilities so that Maan is relieved

from the responsibilities

waiting to see what happens at the get together party

Maan seems like he has been stressing lately , maybe the fact that

he made his mind up that he truly wants a life with Geet

I believe Geet should move forward now with Maan

otherwise even she will be left alone

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Posted: 3 years ago

I am proud of Rey just like Maan ❤️

It would be one hell of an awkward get together but hopefully it will go well!

I am glad that Maan put his foot down and hopefully Geet will realize that she can’t take him for granted anymore

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Aditi

trust that all is fine

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Posted: 3 years ago

I have read the story in one go and dont know what to describe . It is depicting characters having confusions due to their past. I can say Geet is badly effected but i wont say others are not impacted. Child hood upbringing is the key to person's attitude and determines future generations as well. Reading the story made me rethink of lot of things in my life and thank you for that

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan very clearly make Geet understand his point now it's on Geet to let go her fear and embarrass happiness

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