Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 26

Great part. The best thing about this part is that everyone is clear at their part . they know what they have been doing with their life. They know where they lacked and where were they right. They get their needed space and independence to make decisions for themselves. Waiting for next dear

U very efficiently and adeptly delve in each character....love brij here how honestly he told his sister he is playing a cupid. I just love his man.

Arjun here seems to be bit confuse...

What annie is planning...well desperately waiting to know..

Take care

Almost all characters knew about themselves and feelings of their friends n siblings

Loved the way how Maan - Geet - Brij understands each other and not to forget Dadi

Why would a mother hate her child to this extent ? I so hate Mrs Handa .

Part 27 n 28..

Interesting updates.

Wow double updates.

Arjun takes Mrs. Handa to km.

She gets aggressive when Annie comes near, thinking her to be geet.

Khuranas come to know about maan n geet.

They are intrigued to know what's brewing.

Annie n rey think of the ways to get to know more details n facts about their relationship.

Brij n geet have a heart to heart talk.she confronts him ,about his intentions behind sending maan to bring her. She tells him to let her find her own way to happiness n just be as her support system.

Maan n arjun talk about their friendship n Annie n arjun's relationship.

Maan tries to explain him the situation n where he have gone wrong.

rey was a new entry wasnt it

all kst all characters were covered in this part

and all thier relations were slightly complicated

i was looking farward how every one will move forward and workout thier relations

and still wonder what had meera reasons will b to betray geet

will b waiting for further updates

thanks for double updates

Originally posted by: nishamna

Why does mrs handa hate geet so much. She is the one who dictated everyone's life. She is mentally sick and it would be great if she gets proper treatment . I loved the way annie,ray and dadi ma got curious to know about geet. Waiting for next dear

Mrs Handa is not mentally stable... I am sure you will understand more as the story progresses. I am glad you liked it. Thank you!!😊

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Aditi.... how are you?

I am slowly healing dear!!

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

I am slowly healing dear!!

that's great!! Merry Christmas to you and your family

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 27

marvelous update! superbly written!

can understand Arjun's dilemma! but great that he put all that aside to help Brij! as expected Arjun and Anwesha meet again!

hmm Arjun still loves Annie....

Adore this rambling Arjun! nice that Annie also agrees to help!

Mrs Handa is crazy! sad that she blames Geet!

great that Reyaan handled Mrs Handa!

how can a mother hate her daughter? Annie's question is justified!

nice that Ray got Mrs Handa settled in. seems like he understood her well!

of cos dadima wants to know what is happening!

at least Rey noticed that Mrs Handa has a mental illness! hmm they are curious as to how Maan knows Geet?

dadi is indeed smart!

Gosh Maan is in for an interrogation! wonderful that he knows this!

enjoyed Maaneet;s convo! Maan and his siblings share a lovely bond! Rey is the son of a family friend but more of a sibling!

wow Arjun noticed Maaneet's interaction! agree with him.

loved that Brij trusts Maan.

hmm he reveals that Maan and Geet met in Darjeeling! Brij was correct!

yes Maaneet seems to have forgotten Brij and Arjun!

I am glad you liked it. Thank you!! Mrs Handa's outlook will be explained more. Regarding Arjun, yes he is quite adorable but he has a lot growing up to do... More to come soon

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 28

Terrific update! greatly written!

Not surprised that Geet confronts Brij. great that Brij was able to explain himself! but Geet knows him so well!

at least Brij was honest! he also knows his sister well! does she really not know what Maan means to her?

Brij was spot on.... liked his analysis!

Loved Brij and Geet's conversation! well she wanted him to ask but he had a point whether she would have been honest!

wonderful that Brij apologized to Geet! nice that he wants Geet to be happy! Geet's response was justified!

adore the bond between Geet and Brij!

as expected Arjun is worried.... Maan's anger is reasonable. finally they spoke!

can understand that Maan needs time as Arjun hurt his sister.

what did Arjun mean that he did it for Annie?

glad that Maan tried explained to Arjun... Love is indeed selfless but one tends to be selfish.

hmm Annie's curiosity is understandable! will they ever get to observe Maan and Geet?

of cos Geet would not want to meet her so called mother!

update soon... thanks for the double updates

I am glad you liked it. Thank you!! Arjun will need to acknowledge his mistakes and then grow up and that is not an easy process. I am sure you will enjoy the journey though!!