Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 24 -- new entry jai is friend of yash who knew nothing about his sad demise. Sad that he didn't know about pari or dev. Geet filled him with info about them. He himself was in pain to know that his best friend was no more.

I liked how brij supported both geet & pari. I liked how birj throw googly and geet fell for it saying about how maan is. But it didn't occur her that she said something like that.

Brij is good confidence booster for both girls. He made them strong to face the world. But in his life he was suffering all alone.

Rehaan was back with his who is she. Maan tried to avoid but then he told him about muskan. But rehaan decided to know more about that she'. Liked how he described him & sameera's companionship. It made sense. He was thankful to that she who was the reason to bring old maan back.

I want to know how pairs you are going to make. Besides maan & geet, I think brij-sameera, jai-pari, Vicky-ana, aur rehaan ke liye kaun..?

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys


I am finally back... Sorry for being so late and having more than a months gap between updates. Actually I visited a number of places with my mother but the doctors unfortunately concluded that its nit curable and now her treatment is done to stop things for worsening. I will try to give an update by tomorrow or day after tomorrow and to people who thinks I am too irregular and they can't bother following, I am sorry but I understand and to those who still support this story, Thank you is such a small word to express myself.

Aditi

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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 23...
Awesome... Superb...

Thanks for update...

Geet came back home...

Geet n pari talked about dev n the reasons he gave ...

Geet felt hurt ... N was worried for muskaan that she might be affected by their divorce...

About her future...

Geet then advised pari to move on while talking about their moments with yash...

Pari broke down n let it all out...

On the other hand...

Maan was slowly coming back to be old maan ...

He was happy, cooking , joking n doing everything ge used to do before he became the maan singh khurana...

Making his family happy...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 24...
Superb... Interesting..

Thanks for update...

Continue soon...

There was a visitor at geet's home n he called geet as chutki...

Making her emotional n lost...

He was none other than yash's long lost friend... His best friend...Jai who came back from US ..

He was shocked to hear about yash...

Brij broke this news to him...

Later on geet told him all that had happenend in all their loves after he had left...

Brij talked to pari n he also asked her to move on ... As even yash would have wanted it...

Rey was curious to know what brought the change in maan so he went to his room ..


They both chatted about sam n he told they were never meant to be... Surprising maan ...

Maan told him about muskaan...
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the note! Take care of ur mom! shall wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
Take care of your mom aditi..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Its totally a different story from all stories I read till nw n it is an awesome story tells how a relationship exists n no person vl be bad Caz everyone has their own reasons to lead their lyf smtyms ivl hurt others,,, superb thoughts together in one story..
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Posted: 8 years ago
dono apne apne feelings ko leke pareshan...are baba u r in love...both d buddhus...wake up...

lovely update...

loved it very much ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 7 years ago
hello! hope ur mom is feeling better!
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Posted: 7 years ago
update when you can thanks! hope everything is fine?

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