Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 14

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Priy lekhika

Aapko humara saadar namaskaar

Aapse anurodh hai ki kisi ki baaton mein na aayega aap

Hamein nahi jaan na ki shreemaan Maan ke hridaya ki dasha kya hai

Hamein toh kahani antyanit aanadmaya isi prakar lag rahi hai

Aapki aur kewal aap ki

Fitzcy

Originally posted by: nihatri

u r mean. I have nothing else to tell u.

Designers Den, honestly I had expected something along the lines of Dragons Den (a show here). You know the scary, high on fear and excitement, the unusual first-time meeting kind of scenario and Maan for sure didn't live it down either, blimey he's one intimidating boss. Glad Geets equally rigid, she doesn't get fazed by his coochy coo looks although he has his effects i.e. the Beautiful' moment. I wonder what would have happened had the other guy not stepped in, would they have continued this eye match or the retina test lol. Yeah I know they're gazing romantically, otherwise known as the Maaneet eye-lock, now that was intense; at times I was forced to skip forward during the epic MAHI moments lol yep I don't do romance. Now it's a different story that I'm the biggest rom-com fanatic at home, there isn't a movie I haven't watch. Even before my sisters stop to watch a movie, I've already given them the plot and my thoughts hehehe. Bless my sisters taking me as a judge although they do tend to love everything I love. Even my brother in the old days wasn't spared of my charms lol actually he'd make me massage his legs/head etc in exchange of a movie, Rom-com/teen/animation etc (he paid for FilmFlex back then, although it wasn't called that then I don't think). Poor bhai used to sleep off, I remember High School Musical 2, he almost went berserk but needed to wait out his promise and then I blamed him for his bad movie choice, his face was well worth it. Ahhh good fond memories.

Anyway sorry, where was I, yep Maan has this deviously enchanting character. Its tough to stay angry at times, reading him now I was like was that me going bonkers during the last updates. I so get why Avi's in love with him. His lovable in a twisted way, cause naturally me being me I don't like challenging male characters hence twisted lol, I want them to fall on the floor with fair maiden' kinda stuff lol. Quite the chauvinist, female kind hehehehe. So seriously reading it with a filtered mind plus possessive Avi might be scary, and I don't do scary lol (Avi I love you, you know that right).

Ok I get Geets feeling guilty for her reaction, maybe I'm probably experiencing the same, but like her I'm not going to admit that, now am I? Hell no? That time called for those reactions, Maan had it coming, ofcourse he had. How dare I find faults in myself when Maan's readily available lol.

Might I add I love how descriptive this chapter was, anyone would kill to work in such an office that's also personally designed by Maan, ok maybe not kill lol. You know I was like thinking the same, why did he need Geet then, if he was so fantastic at designing and then of course he was busy, like darn that guy for making it out as if me and Geet are dumb. He sure don't need reasons to enter my hit list, does he? With that attitude is racing through to my list lol.

He wanted to show it himself, a major part of me is like awww but... You know what there's no buts its aww all the way from mind and heart. Shoot this guy's charming my socks off quite literally lol, since I've got my slipper socks on lol. It's far too cold not to be wearing them. Naturally though, I can so imagine Maan dancing on pins to know her reaction, although he doesn't show it, I can so tell. I'm good at telling emotions, ok I'm not but its sounds more believable when I say so or act so lol. Geet's impressed, Maan's impressed which equals to me being impressed.

who doesn't like a little bit of fun' ooo the GALL of the man, how dare he? Hehehe

It's not fair how he makes you feel so many emotions at the same time, he should be arrested in some Fiction cell. I'm telling you, he sets off far too many reactions and makes you feel all gooey too. The types criminals are made of lol ok romantic heroes but ignore the last bit ok, don't what an egoistic Maan to reach for the roof.

Geet better watch out, if he's getting to me then what's in her? He's impressed Avi already and maybe half your other readers. This is a gone case, is there any point fighting it. Should I just succumb to his charms, but I can't, I don't roll like that lol, I like weirdos and this guy's not weird hehehehe.

Ok jokes to one side. Let's get down to the grit: This was one short update, I'm complaining to writers association, not fair. Writers such as yourself should be limited to 3000 words minimum lol.

Thank you for a great update and for silencing the raging bull that escaped during the last 2 updates lol. Not that I'm a bull nor I'm a raging one at that lol

Previous note: I'm from the UK, it was hard initially at Sixth form, I was like Sir/Miss but got told off a lot lol (but in a sweet kinda way), by the end of half-term I went to Jackie, Steve, Linda etc. and now its prof Nasser or Dr Berry basically Dr with first name lol but it depends on age, the older lot mind the first name thing. As for the movie, I reckon its Main Hoon Na -SRK cause violins, dupatta, leaves etc was over-exercised in that movie but I kinda liked it. Love obviously isn't that but I like over exaggeration. And true being calm answers a lot more than anger lol, I believe in the quote the tongue is sharper than the knife' so technically try to watch my words, typing is a different thing altogether though lol.

Originally posted by: dqno1

^When you get this, you know you have written well 😆

Sophie.. luv u dear. It is so hard for me not to follow your comments 😆