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Posted: 8 years ago
Ch18
Nice and intense part
Geet pondering over the happenings
As a doctor she realised that as Maan is a patient of memory loss
He might believe what SD might have told him

Here Dev's realisation for the feelings for Tara made him return in time enough to save her
Tara at last gets hitched by her feelings for Dev
More than love devotion

Geet is totally in attitude
Ignoring Maan
Maan though guilty not able to handle her indifference
Can't let her go alone
and can't turn away from the responsibilities
Comes with Geet
Again Geet gave herself away
Agar aapko kuchh ho gaya to mai to mar hi jaaungi
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 18
Awesome part..
Omg ya brij kaisa insaan hai tara ka saath jo hua jan kar uska marna ki hurt karna ki koshist kar raha tha thank god dev time pa aagaya aur tara ko bacha lia khuad injured hua hai and tara ab dev ka care and protectiveness sa kuch feel kar rahi hai dev ka liya aur uska firstaid aur care karna ma busy hai.. Tara ka saath jo hua usma uski galti kya hai uska dard toh samjho.. Geet maan ko aisa chod ka ane par bad feel kar rahi hai aur maan guilty hai apne behaviour sa aur geet ko sorry bolta hai par properly nahi yaar wo vi kya sahi galat ma phasa hua hai na.. Maaneet dev ki help karna aaraha hai sab jan kar..
Waiting for next part..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Like Devtara journey Manali to HP thats reminds me
"All journeys have secret destinations of which the traveler is unaware "
let's see what store for them ??

both are so conflicted n lost in their own world !
my heart went out for whenever i read Tara's part ...
tara is scared but also determind to stay storng oohh she made me surprised with her storng self even her determination to again stand on her feet she knew she will get her results soon and get a job ...
other hand dev is concernd for her that after he made contact
with her family feels somthing fishy but tara don't want to become
burden on him and she is scared for his reputation ..
so he leave her but the nagging feeling of restlessness
is still with him dev knew something is wrong ...

oh no ye kiya hogay ?? This much big MU between Maaneet
everything messd up so much of MU ...
but loved geet attitude how well she confronted maan
and try cleared his MU and he was shocked he didn't believe as
SD had told him a completely different story and its confusing him more ??
he in another mess which way to go , So many things happened at a
time that made him so confused and mad at the same time !!
hww he pointed her character aahha that trigged her badly
she stood up to him and made him think on what is the truth ??

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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg Tara is in trouble that monster brij try killing her grr instead of
helping her he is ready to kill her for her property how inhuman behaviour
here Dev feels uneasy , he come on time thank god he come
in time to save her but get injure ... and dev's concern and care
made her falling for him aww thats amazing ...
its true " fate has its own ways to shape up a person's life
the way it wants to " ..


LOL love or hate me you can't resist me now Maaneet back
again back to square one hehe
Geet was upset thinking about his accusation for her but
along that she knew it's not her maan's fault but it's all SD doing grr
i just hate her ... here come Maan ooohhoo aaha he was relieved
seeing her and without waistng time lol he apologize to her and
got ready to go with Geet now they are now going to help Devtara
both in the jungle on , their way to Devtara while these goons
and it would be dangerous for them but our munda in full
alert mode aww how nicely he hides himself and Geet !!

Waiting for next ...
Edited by ArchanaRoy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the likes and comments everyone
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ch-18 Great update.
Geet once again act intelligently and this time as a doctor and decided not to leave Maan. Actually the way you write everything looks correct.
Just like Tara, we also expected slap, kick, and curses ...but never imagined Brij can take out sword for killing!. No worry when Dev is there, and for injured and unconscious Dev our Dr Maan and Dr Geet are there. So all the four in jungle.



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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update... I think taras family had planned something dangerius thatswhy they left the house... Dev has intuition of something bad will happen...finally geet blurted out her side infront of maan.. this confrontation was neccessary... Now he will try to find the real story... Geet took the righr decision.. if she would have stayed after listening this than his doubts would have been proved right in his eyes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
The chapter was just simply awesome!!
Maan ne apologise Kia!! Bt its nt a proper one!! Our geetu deserves one of a proper apology!
Dev is such a sweetheart!! Love him!! I hope that bas***d' brij dies from d hands of dev n Maan!! Tara literally worships dev!!
Finally maaneet reached the jungle!!
Ooh!! Even those bas***ds rakha-lakha n his men r alive,,hope they wont b able to go bak on their own legs!!
Fantastic update!!
Do cont soon!!
Tc!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan geet ko yaad karo...iss dadima ko chhodna hi nehi hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


@bold: I am not good at hiding my abhinav fandom😆 I love writing Dev-Tara.


And you shouldn't be good at hiding that lol 😉 😆
I love Dev-Tara only bcs of you 😃

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