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~ The Undoing~

Chapter-1



It was a strange day, I had this feel that something was going to happen, something that changes my life forever , it was the day when I entered my new college. I never wanted to leave my old house, city and life. But when you least expect something, the most unexpected things happen than only. I am single child of my parents. They love me and appreciate what I wanted from my life. They tell me that I am brave and kind, caring and smart and a bird who want to fly with pride. But I don't think same may be its my introvert nature, which brings this out of me. I don't have many friends and nor I am a party animal. My parents always tell me to go out and meet new people, its just I am not able to connect with them. I love my den, my room, the place where I feel most secured and free. The place where I don't have to pretend what I am not. I have my boundaries and I don't let people beyond it, due to this many times people think I am arrogant and egoistic. I like solitude , I like confinement, l like peace, I like chilling breeze, I like sound of waves and sea shores. In my old city, I used to walk beside sea shores ,listening songs on my ipod . It happens to be best time of my day.

I don't like changes, when my parents told about us leaving for new city, I wasn't thrilled. I like places near sea shores but now we are moving towards a new city which is surrounded my dense forest. I argued my parents that I don't want to move to new city, but they were persistent, as dad got a new and better job there. i will miss my routines and my life which I was leaving here. Dad told me about the place we were moving to, it's a old village, where a new industry was established, in which my dad got job as a factory manager and he is very excited about it. When we reached the city, I observe some facts, first as I was told it was covered with dense forest, secondly, the city seems old, the building was ancient . The most surprising think which I noticed was a old building with some strange sign , symbol or language written on it. I have knowledge about Sanskrit,hindi, English, French and Chinese, but It was none, it was something strange and It captured my attention solely. I am not much history person, but I was strangely attracted to that place. What was that? I asked a gentlemen who was showing us the houses about the old building. He told that there are myths about this place and building , which he heard from is grandfather, the old people find that building sacred. They had a fight with the local authorities for the building. Now I has been declared as local heritage .he also told that he heard stories from his grandfather that century ago there had been fights between devils and incarnates. he laughed and told Its just stories, there is no truth in these stories. He told he himself had been to this building and there is nothing supernatural about it, but still old people and some tribal groups find it very sacred. I don't know why but this building got stuck in my mind.

Devil and angels, I didn't know people still believe in these type of myths. Its scary. Why anyone want to go to such places. Anyways what I have to do with it. I observed people around me they seem to stuck in 19th century. No joking, these style are outdated. I don't know why my father brought me here. Right now the only thing I want to do is jump to my bed and sleep!! We reached our new house, it had same old architecture. Oh god!! Why me. Suddenly I got hit by something and I fall down. "ouch" was the only thing that left from my mouth. My mother and father rushed to me. I quickly look around to see what hit me and I was shocked to see...

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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb interesting update! well written! the person's thoughts well portrayed update soon! wonderful banner!
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