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~The Undoing~

Chapter-2

I quickly look around to see what hit me and I was shocked to see that there was no one. I was literally shocked. How can it be possible!! I felt something dashed to me hard. I heard my dad asking me if i was okay. Mom was scolding me for not carefully walking and also how i should i watch my step. I wanted to explain them that it wasn't my fault, I fell because something dashed to me, But there is no one here. Dam!! what's happening to me.I stood up on my leg, started brushing off dust from my jeans. I assured my parents that i am okay. We started moving towards our new house, the person who was showing us house was talking to parents about the timing when water supply is available and something else which i didn't catch. We reached the door of our house, when i left gentle breeze, i quickly saw behind me, still no one. Why i am feeling like this!! i heard my parents calling me. I quickly moved inside the house and closed the door. I walked towards my parents and asked them why they call out my name. My dad told me to help my Mom to help to shift boxes. I started doing what i was told. I saw the man who showed us house,shake his hand with my father and we went away. After an hour or so, finally the shifting work was completed. My mother told me that my room was upstairs and i can re design it in anyway i want. Though i hardly care, i am not like typical girls, i don't try hard to dress nor my room is all pinky and puffy. I quickly climbed the stairs and opened the door to my room. Its simple , nothing extravagant. I saw my single bed , white color curtains , my study table. Beside study table there was a big window. And on the right side wall, opposite to my bed there was another door, which lead me to my bath room.

I heard knock on my door. i saw my father opening it. He had my bag, he quickly put my bag and asked me if i was comfortable. I assured him that i was okay and he need not to worry. I opened my bag and took out my night dress and quickly went to change. After changing , i took out my iPod from my sling bag and quickly climbed to my bed and started listening to song. It was tiring day. As i was thinking about the whole day, my eyes slowly drifting off. As i was drifting to sleep. My mind flashed me an image. Yes , an image which i saw on the temple. That sign. It intrigues me. I don't know why. I pulled my earbud out and put my iPod aside and saw outside the window. There shines the Moon in its full glory. I hope next day will be better than today. I have two days before i will have to join my college. I quickly closed my eyes and drifted off.

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Lovely update confused soul u made me confused too so the person who got bumped into someone was shocked to see there wasn't anyone that person parents scold that person but that person felt something is it supernatural I would love to read it so the person settle in eagerly waiting to start the new life

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