MG FF- Riyasat- Part 19-Page 66-29/05/2018 - Page 44

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Posted: 7 years ago
nice one
tej tried to play trick but geet smart enough to give him back
tej trapping badly in his plan
good to see maan still thinking about her
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update maan going away and geet didn't want tej yo know she has a plan against tej here workers fight create problem for tej he was shocked to know maan isn't here he was burning like a volcano but this is what geet wanted she was busy collect evidence against tej how low he can go but geet knows how cunning and low down he is here maan coming back and decided to buy gift for geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan chachu is so selfish what Geet knows about Maan's father
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story is getting intresting day by day, how geet knows maan's family secret?why maan is so much innocent and geet is teaching him lessons of trusting people blindly is not feasible in this world,maan is happy and confused, tej is in dielema as his paap ka gada jo pootnewala hai, ab ye navin kanha chala gaya wo bhi to equal partner hai is khel mae? why maan gone to delhi? the way you write last pera sounds like some more twist are comming on way?maan buy saree for geet so nice of him...
he is quite leaning towards her, lets see what happens and 3rdposter on top shows seperation and gloomy face off both which indicates kuch priblem hone wala hai dono ke sath.update soon thank u-
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Please update Part 19


i am writing still may be by today or tomorrow definitely


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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you very much that you like this story...loved your comments


Originally posted by: idunno

story is getting intresting day by day, how geet knows maan's family secret?why maan is so much innocent and geet is teaching him lessons of trusting people blindly is not feasible in this world,maan is happy and confused, tej is in dielema as his paap ka gada jo pootnewala hai, ab ye navin kanha chala gaya wo bhi to equal partner hai is khel mae? why maan gone to delhi? the way you write last pera sounds like some more twist are comming on way?maan buy saree for geet so nice of him...

he is quite leaning towards her, lets see what happens and 3rdposter on top shows seperation and gloomy face off both which indicates kuch priblem hone wala hai dono ke sath.update soon thank u-

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Posted: 7 years ago



RIYASAT


(thank you Mg13 for beautiful banner)

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Recap

Geet: nahi Maan everything is fine did you complete your work

Maan: yes Geet I will come in the morning send vehicle to station

Geet: ok Maan

Maan: ok Geet I will meet you tomorrow

Geet said ok and disconnected the call. Later Maan thought about Geet and thought "Geet is doing so much for me and my family but did not expect anything from me...kuch toh gift ley a uss ke liye then he decided to gift saree for Geet and went for purchasing. Then de purchased saree for her and packed his bag then went towards airport

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Part 19


when Maan got down from train was surprised to Geet there and asked "Geet tum yahan? I told you to send driver why did you came here early morning?

Geet smiled at him and took his luggage bag and went towards the car...they both kept luggage and Geet took driver seat and said "I wanted to talk to you...just listen to this and then gave recorder to him, Maan with curious switched on the recorder and listen to the conversation and then asked "aab kya karna hai

Geet: kuch nahi first you take rest and I will inform munna so that he will bring all the workers to lawn, first listen to the complaint and then we will call Dev if needed. In the meantime, munna will be ready with extra workers list...and Dev will help us with regard to this

Maan: so you made everything ready to find culprits

Geet: woh itna asaan nahi hai Maan...I am clearing dirt from here...first I will clear small once and then I will catch hold of culprits

Maan: I know you will not tell me and will not ask with you and I will wait till that time

Geet gave sweet time to him...Maan nodded his head knowing meaning for her smile and then asked "did you fight with chachu?

Geet glared at him and said "nahi humne fight nahi kiya but woh mujhse naraz hai...hamesha ki tarah

Maan: yeah I know but he has doubt on you

Geet: good it will help him...in that case he will try to be away from me so that my work will be done smoothly

Maan: pata nahi Geet...I feel like Dad is calling me from three to four days...kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai...you know after so many months of Dad's death I am feeling like this Geet...its sounding like stupid hai naa...I was about to tell you when I called but phone baat karna teek nahi samjha Geet

Geet who was staring at him in shock was not able to come out of it...she know what Maan is telling her is fact. She prayed babaji rehem karna. I want only his happiness aur kuch nahi

Maan looked at Geet who was silent, he shook her and asked "what happened Geet? What are you thinking?

Geet came out of her thoughts and said "ku...kuch nahi Maan...sorry I was thinking something else...isliye dhyan nahi raha

Maan: nothing I was telling you that I was feeling like I heard like dad calling me...why are you absent mind while driving you know naa you should concentrate while driving or else accident ho jata hai

Geet: I am sorry Maan...pata nahi dhyan kahan tha...I am sorry by the way you were telling that you heard Dad's voice and if you are feeling like that then listen to your heart Maan...woh kabhi jhoot nahi bolta. Trust your feelings

Maan: tumara matlab? Is it something important which I should know Geet? Why you want to trust my feeling when I clearly know that he is not alive ad will not come back

Geet: Maan I said to trust your feeling nothing more than that why are you doubting me

Maan: mujhe kya pata when you always hide so many things from me then what will I think Geet...so I was asking whether you are hiding something from me

Geet: hai bhi toh kuch nahi batavungi aab...when everything is good and safe then I will let you know one by one

Maan: pata nahi kab mujhe in sub se chain milega. I am worried for everyone's safety Geet. Tumara safety bhi...agar kuch hogaya tum sabko toh mien aapne aap ko maaf nahi karunga...I feel kuch bada sa hua hai yahan par woh kaise pata karun mujhe pata nahi...even I have doubt on Chachu also looking at his behaviour and the way he is reacting after dad's death

Geet: Maan I can understand your feeling but please be patience everything will be ok and I assure you...hamare log ko kuch nahi hoga and if anything happens to someone then think that they does not belong to us

Maan said hmm and laid his head on seat then closed his eyes remembering his happy moments with his family...Geet woke him when they were entering Avantika...Suraj opened gate to them then Geet parked car in portico and informed john who was passing by to drop Maan's luggage in his room...John glared at her once and then looking at Maan he went in taking luggage. Maan nodded his head and went in ...after keeping luggage in Maan's room John went directly to Tej's room and said "saab chote saab aagaye"

Tej: what Maan has come?...good aab hum uss workers ko wapas bej sakte hai...wait I will go and talk to him first. he did not inform me, I will ask him

John: mujhe nahi lagta woh aapko batahenge...and uss shurpanaki aapko unnse milna de tab naa...I think you should wait till he comes down for breakfast

Tej: tum teek kheh rahe woh...ok I will wait for him...mien phele ready hoke wait karunga uska...kaisa din aagaya mera? I thought I will enjoy after Raji bhai's death but here nahi musibaat everytime coming on my way...pata nahi in dono se kab chutkara milega

John nodded his head and went from there. Here Geet made everything ready with recorded statement and then knocked Maan's room after getting response she went in and then gave files to him and said "these are the documents and files which I prepared and listen to this recorded statement about yesterday's incident, meanwhile I will get coffee for you

To which Maan nodded his head and then Geet went down...Maan listened to the workers conversation and he boiled in anger...he read all the documents which Geet prepared and was impressed with her work...Geet entered with coffee mugs for both of them, looking at her Maan asked "Geet tum kyun lekar hayee...you would have informed servants to bring

Geet: its not that big work Maan...you were reading files and I didn't have any works to do. So I went to kitchen...leave it did you finish your work?

Maan: agar tum mujhe kaam do tab karunga naa...you have already completed my works also...mein just information dekh raha hoon...did you informed to Dev about this

Geet gave innocent smile to him and then nodded her head then Maan said "dekha you did that also then what should I do tell me

Geet: I have already told you that I called workers for meeting today, everyone will be come to lawn...then she narrated what he should do

Maan: ok I will take care of that

Geet: one more thing

Maan: what Geet?

Geet: aap thoda serious dikhna chahiye, if you look like chocolate hero then they will take you for granted

Maan looked at her in shock and got up...he went near her...looking at him coming towards her Geet went back...Maan was staring at her...Geet was nervous with his proximity...when Geet's back touched wall...Geet looked at him in shock, Maan smirked at her and asked "aab kahan javogi Geet...bataov,...am I looking like chocolate hero? I never knew that you were observing me so kneely...I am so special for you Geet

Geet: aise..se ku..kuch nahi ...woh...

Maan: kyun hua Geet...tumara CD kyun atak gaya hai...he wiped sweat from Geet's forehead and asked why you are sweating?

Geet: Maaan..pls

Maan: kya hua Geet? Ankhe kholonaa...Geet opened her eyes and looked at Maan who was smirking at her...her face was like cherry red...Geet pushed him and said "aapko majak sujh rahe hai? You know with so much difficulty I prepared this document and here you are making fun of me...this is too bad Maan...aap ka harkath dekh kar mera jaan nikal gayi...mujhe aapse koi baath nahi karni...you do your work then you will understand its importance...chaddo...saying that she was about to move but Maan pulled her back and hold her tight then with other hand he took the saree he purchased and put it on her shoulder and said "sorry Geet...you were so tensed so I thought to ease the situation. Tum toh meri hona why I will make fun of you...please accept this gift

Geet nodded her head saying no then Maan kissed her on cheeks and said please Geet...accept karo naa...mein bhi bahut muskil se hey saree selct kiya tha tumare liye

Geet was looking at him in shock and said ok then took saree from him and then asked "why you always kiss me

Maan: meine kab...don't tell lie Geet I never kissed you..waise breakfast time hua hai...dekho tumara mogambo haye hue ya nahi

Geet: mogambo koun?

Maan: chachu aur koun

Geet smiled to him and left from their forgetting to ask about kiss matter...Maan smiled for her innocence. Here Geet went to her room and looked at her flushed face and thought "what happened to him, why he is so closed to me, first kiss aab saree, what is running in his mind? Did he find out about me? Kuch toh hai...why I am not able get what is in his mind...now a day he is behaving indifferently, and what about the dream? Is it true? Kuch toh hai pata karna hai mujhe...I cant lose

She came out of her thoughts when Nakul informed Maan is waiting for her..she immediately got freshen up and came down. Tej also came down at the same time. Looking at Maan his blood boiled and asked "what you think yourself Maan? Don't you have manners to let your father figure to know where you are going? And you're this assistant don't respect me and answer properly...is this the way to treat me

Maan: relax chachu...why are you over reacting...I know what I am doing and I don't think it is necessary for me to inform everything whatever happening in my life...phir bhi I was about to inform you but I it was sudden trip I need to go to my office so I informed Geet who was awake...what's the big deal with that

Tej was baffled hearing Maan...then Maan continued saying "agar aap ka questionaire katam ho gaya toh hum breakfast karke kaam dekhai

Without waiting for Tej's response Maan started to have breakfast Geet smiled inwardly after breakfast has Geet said he went to lawn...there Geet arranged everything for him...meanwhile all workers who came to lawn. Maan took workers list and then signaled Munna to continue...Munna called workers list and then made then to sit separate. After that he called made other workers to sit separate then Maan looked into the first set of workers and asked "you guys worked with us for so many years and know very well how we react, you respected Dad and I am very thankful for that...but now I am accepting genuine answer from you guys. Why did you fight? What happened? workers pointed to other set of people and said "because of these people saab...hum teek se kaam nahi kar pate? Agar kuch bolne jaye toh supervisor and John comes in between and scold us then other one said "these people behaving ill with our wives and children and try to dominate us...kuch kaam nahi karte they just come and look whether you guys are there and will leave from their agar hum unse pooche toh hume marthe hai...this is happening from the day they came here

Supervisor eyed at workers then they started blaming others saying same thing and pulled out fight with them...Maan was getting irritated at the same time Dev entered with his force

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Chapter

Maan has returned and Geet went to collect him
he tells Geet that he has been dreaming about his father hearing his voice
is it some kind of warning to Maan that danger lurks around
I'm glad that Geet involves Dev in everything and he knows what is happening there too
Geet tells Maan about the meeting and shows him the prepared documents
Maan hugs Geet kisses her and also gifts her a saree while Geet is so confused as to why Maan
is doing all this
Dev now also enters with his forces looking forward to see will this mess of the workers be sorted
out and what will Dev do to help Maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful update👏
Geet personally went to receive maan n made him hear the recording n she told the arrangements that she has made
Maan knew she won't tell the whole details... when he said about the dream she told him to believe what his heart says...kya matlab hai iska...wai waiting to know
Maan brought a saree for geet n kissed her
Bechara chachu ka kuch nahi chaltha😆
The workers blaming one another as dev came hope it will be solved
Eagerly waiting for the next update

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